SotW #22 Discussion

[Darkwatch]

Come here for some advice on your entries!

Constructive criticism only, please.

[Banana Split]

Really general sotw. We should have used this when more screens of the new kh games came out =\

What do you think of my entry? It's an old one I made.

[ЯзJзct.çom]

1
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Goofycopy.png

2
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Goofy2.png
3
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Mickeypentoolcopy.png

4
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/EScopy.png

5
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u10/Tahg-ster/Soravertcopy.png

Which one is the best?
@Split:
It's alright, but cut it a little bit so that the b/w doesn't show, or just make the whole thing b/w but with a few things in color, such as Sora's eyes, or Kairi's hair, and some lighting and shading.

[Banana Split]

Thanks. Yeah, it's an oldie. I really didn't know back then xD

I'd say 2. The last one is good for a vert, but don't think it'll be legible due to size =\

[Wabba]

Didnt you enter 1, 2 and 3 before? I know 3 won a sotw.

[ЯзJзct.çom]

I've never entered any of these in a sowt contest lol.

[Wabba]

mixed the mickey one up with sotw 18, my b

[VideoGameNerd246]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n235/VideoGameNerd246/saycheesegf8.png
Erm, do you guys like mine? >.<

[ЯзJзct.çom]

Get rid of the stars, and either
A) Spam "flame" some more, but add some color
B) Add a blue c4d(set it to lighten), make the tag b&w and erase over Sora's eyes.
And do one flame over Sora, so that he's blended, and sharpen and blur areas for depth.
Also, move the text over and smudge it a little(Not to much, since it needs to be readable, or there is no point to the text)

[VideoGameNerd246]

Get rid of the stars, and either
A) Spam "flame" some more, but add some color
B) Add a blue c4d(set it to lighten), make the tag b&w and erase over Sora's eyes.
And do one flame over Sora, so that he's blended, and sharpen and blur areas for depth.
Also, move the text over and smudge it a little(Not to much, since it needs to be readable, or there is no point to the text)
Thanks for the CnC, DJ Danger Mouse. ^^ I'll update it now. I was thinking of spaming the flame and use different colors before, but I just decided not to do it, but thanks! I'll do it now!

EDIT: Here's what I got after following your advise.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n235/VideoGameNerd246/saycheesegf8-1.png

[Banana Split]

Thanks for the CnC, DJ Danger Mouse. ^^ I'll update it now. I was thinking of spaming the flame and use different colors before, but I just decided not to do it, but thanks! I'll do it now!

EDIT: Here's what I got after following your advise.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n235/VideoGameNerd246/saycheesegf8-1.png

Take it off the render. That'll help tremendously.

Anyone think my entries got a chance? I changed it.

[Anderson]

Take it off the render. That'll help tremendously.

Anyone think my entries got a chance? I changed it.

It's bright. >.<

But yeah, it has a chance. >.>;

[Laplace]

Damn, if I had one more day I could register my new a** pawning Terra sig >.<, anyways, good luck everyone!