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Luna561
11-12-2007, 03:59 PM
This is a poem I wote I hope you all will like it
Dream Chaser

Eyes full of wonder
Heart of desire
Passion to live

Passion to learn
Eyes so innocent
Exploring the world

All it hes to give
All it has to take
Follow your heart

Chase down your dreams
Hold them tight
Keep them safe inside

Follow your heart
Listen to your gut
For they will lead you

To where you need to be.

Hope you like it^^

keybladeofdarkness4
11-12-2007, 04:02 PM
that was beatifull... *cries*

Luna561
11-12-2007, 04:03 PM
thank you very much.*starts to cry*

tenshigrl
11-12-2007, 04:07 PM
thats good

Luna561
11-12-2007, 04:17 PM
I'll try to make more

heartsof13
11-12-2007, 10:47 PM
that was THE best one i've ever read

cloud's buddy
11-13-2007, 12:36 PM
that was really good

cloud's buddy
11-14-2007, 10:21 PM
make more please

Luna561
11-14-2007, 10:40 PM
Ok i this one i didn't write.

The Edge of the World
By Shel Silverstein

Colubus said that the world is round
Don't belive a word of that
For I've been down to the edge of the world
Sat on the edge where the blue smoke curls
And I can tell you boys and girls
The world is FLAT!

Do you like this one?