My first poem... xD

[Alex C:]

Miss You

I stand here alone
So cold... so cold
Still waiting for your warmth
To light up my inner match

You're gone now
My once map is now lost
Without you I am lost
Please, please show me the path
The path to help me move on

You say you just wish to be friends
You don't realize how much
How much more I want
You are my sucker
And I am your greedy child

I want you
I want your soft lips to touch mine
Once more... just once more

Agian I stand here in the cold
I might die...
but what does it matter?
I'm lost without you
Oh so lost..........




Oh look... it's raining


CnC?

[Catch the Rain]

Oh little bro, that is so beautiful.

I want you
I want your soft lips to touch mine
Once more... just once more

Again I stand here in the cold
I might die...
but what does it matter?
I'm lost without you
Oh so lost..........


This bit was my favourite part, it really struck a chord with me as I know exactly that feeling.

A very thoughtful piece, full of emotion and you expressed it beautifully.

[Dreadnought]

Cool........ I guess...... I like rhyming ones better! :)
there cool!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)

[ShadowMancer]

I never knew you could be so poetic. 10.5/10

[Alex C:]

Thanks everyone. I'm sorry Kay you feel the same way. D:


Burmp. :D

[Very Berry]

OMG that had me on the verge of tears :( that was such a beautiful poem and it was like about love and a guy wrote it which is just like wow cuz it has such a powerful meaning its awesome :) btw who is the lucky person? and u sure u okay cuz if not i noe how u feel maybe i can help u

[Alex C:]

OMG that had me on the verge of tears :( that was such a beautiful poem and it was like about love and a guy wrote it which is just like wow cuz it has such a powerful meaning its awesome :) btw who is the lucky person? and u sure u okay cuz if not i noe how u feel maybe i can help u
Yush I love when people ask questions. :D


Um it was towards no one. And it had no meaning towards me. I just didnt want to say that because it'd kill it. D: