Suffering

[Laplace]

I hate my life
I have to end this now
My suffering is flawless
I end this quick and painless

My rage burns me
My sadness freezes me
My heart is broken
My emotions are destroyed

Why it has come to this?
Why it ends like this?
Why I suffer like this?
There must be another way, isn´t it?

The love is a lie
My hopes are die
Hapiness doesn´t exists
It´s all just a dream

It has to be this way
There isn´t another path
My suffer I have to end
This is the only way

My life is all suffering
I have to end this
I can see my blood
In the floor falling and flood.

Nothing bad for 5 minutes or so.

[.Kairi.]

Depressing...You really captured the mood well.

[Laplace]

Depressing...You really captured the mood well.

Is because I use my mood to write my poems, that is why I am so good.

[mixt]

Very depressing. Hope you’re not actually feeling that.

You did a nice job of holding a good rhythm and mood. Only a couple of lines that seemed a bit too forced.

My hopes are die

and

In the floor falling and flood.

[Laplace]

Very depressing. Hope you’re not actually feeling that.

You did a nice job of holding a good rhythm and mood. Only a couple of lines that seemed a bit too forced.

My hopes are die

and

In the floor falling and flood.

Yes I feel that and thanks for the comment.