View Full Version : Poem: Words
Nymph of Destiny
11-14-2007, 06:54 AM
Words that flow so smoothly from your mouth
So soft and tantalizing
Like telling a fairytale
Weaving your story from your fingertips
Adhering to your lips
Moving and flowing with the action
As slippery as the sands of time
That escapes and eludes its capture
To be scattered across the wind
Planting its seed elsewhere
Blossoming beautifully, yet so wickedly
Spreading incessantly across others' lips
Once thrown and extracted
Can never be withdrawn...
---
Just a poem I've thought of...hope you like it! :)
:bounce::woohoo: I enjoyed it Nymph! :)
Nymph of Destiny
11-14-2007, 07:09 AM
:bounce::woohoo: I enjoyed it Nymph! :)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :glomp:
Random Angel
11-14-2007, 04:53 PM
I like everything you do! just so awesome
Nymph of Destiny
11-14-2007, 11:46 PM
I like everything you do! just so awesome
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) :glomp:
Heaven's Angel
12-04-2007, 03:01 AM
I luv it! keep it up! XD XD
Mr.Sprinkles
12-04-2007, 03:08 AM
GREAT WORK from Nymph from happy freak T.F XP
Nymph of Destiny
12-04-2007, 03:17 AM
lol Thanks, both of you! :) *:glomp: Destiny and TF*
Destined
12-04-2007, 03:45 AM
Weaving your story from your fingertips
Adhering to your lips
The wording for this.....WOW. It sent a twitch down my spine, good job.
Last of the Organization
12-04-2007, 03:51 AM
Pretty good length....mainly describing the length when I say that....not saying its not good enough or anything like that.....good free verse.....but for atmosphere had me a little confused lol....at first it sounded light-hearted...but then it started to change near the end....but I did like it.....of course I really like your happy ones :P......your becoming a good poet....keep it up......
O R A N G E
12-05-2007, 12:52 AM
LOL.
You made a poem about words using words themselves. But it describes them well. I love it when words are used artistically. Good job.
Nymph of Destiny
12-05-2007, 01:31 AM
Thanks everyone, I'm glad you like it. :)
vBulletin® v3.7.3, Copyright ©2000-2010, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.