Another of my emo poems: Revenge

[Laplace]

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My heart is broken again and alone
I only feel sadness and depression
I don´t care about my life
Everything is ruined and I can´t change that

My heart burns with rage
My emotions quiver in pain
I suffer and cry in my depression
Everything is wrapped in black now

I don´t feel, I am nobody
I am cold, heartless, nothing
Everything for me has no meaning
I die, I suffer, I am not going to be crying

I want to destroy everything that I hate
Make them die, suffer and obliterate in despair
I will have my revenge
Anyways I don´t care about them

I want revenge, I will kill them
And for that I will crush them
They will suffer and cry
I will make them pay

I don´t have mercy and they will die
I´ll make them suffer, I´ll destroy them all
They will feel my revenge and my wrath
Nothing will stop me, I´ll make them cry

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Yes, I am angry with somebody right now.

[Sadden Blood Warrior]

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My heart is broken again and alone
I only feel sadness and depression
I don´t care about my life
Everything is ruined and I can´t change that

My heart burns with rage
My emotions quiver in pain
I suffer and cry in my depression
Everything is wrapped in black now

I don´t feel, I am nobody
I am cold, heartless, nothing
Everything for me has no meaning
I die, I suffer, I am not going to be crying

I want to destroy everything that I hate
Make them die, suffer and obliterate in despair
I will have my revenge
Anyways I don´t care about them

I want revenge, I will kill them
And for that I will crush them
They will suffer and cry
I will make them pay

I don´t have mercy and they will die
I´ll make them suffer, I´ll destroy them all
They will feel my revenge and my wrath
Nothing will stop me, I´ll make them cry

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Yes, I am angry with somebody right now.

holy chaser that was good but kinda creeped me out

[Catch the Rain]

Chaser that was fantastic, very dark, and the overall effect was very powerful.

The ammount of anger and rage that is within this is very clear and very well expressed.


I really liked it.

[Kairi9020]

Wow Chaser. That was really good. I liked it a lot. I hope you work things out with whom ever you're mad at.

[Devil's Angel]

Nice cool poems. so much emotion XD :ff10sora: :woohoo:.

[Nailpolish <3]

Its really nice. Yeah I could tell that you were angry. Including the fact that the text is red. Hmm, someone really close to me has depression, and she felt the same way. I'm pretty sure anyways. Really, it was really like that. I loved it. Good work.

[Laplace]

Thanks everyone, is good to know that I am good in more than one thing.

[Kaitou Sai]

It's good, kinda scary though...