*Sigh*

[Laplace]

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Roses are red
Like blood on the floor
Is time to end
Is only a matter of time

Everything shall fade away
Very soon I will dissapear
I just a matter of time
A matter and then die

I don´t feel like dying now
But my end will come soon
Everything dies
And now is my time

Very soon I will end my suffer
Everything is torn and cutted
That is how is my heart
Torn, destroyed and breaked

I will not suffer anymore
In the place I will be now
No more sadness or depression
Just happiness and joy

Everything dissapears from my mind
Everything dissapears as I die
Everything fades away
Everything flies away

I could simple forget everything
But everything keeps pressing me
Like walls trapping me
I won´t fight, I will die

This is what I deserve
Thought that I didn´t do nothing
But I will accept it
Is my punishment for nothing

I just wanted to live
But everything wanted me to die
So I will fulfill their wish
I will fulfill they task withouth think
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....................... I don´t know what to think now.

[Ghetto]

Deep. Very deep.

[Shade Tail]

Wow....... Just wow...
Out of all the poem's you've wrote, This one has to be the best I've read...
It's the only poem that's actually made me cry aswell.
Kinda makes me think of war when I read this, cos lots of innocent people that have done nothing get killed...
I'mma rate this poem 11/10

[cloud's buddy]

it is beautiful

[Laplace]

Thanks ^^.

[Dark Shadow]

This One I Love Its So Awsome I Am Showing My Friends ^^ So Kool ^^

[Laplace]

This One I Love Its So Awsome I Am Showing My Friends ^^ So Kool ^^

Thanks ^^.

[Sadden Blood Warrior]

uhhhhhh nice but creepy

[Laplace]

uhhhhhh nice but creepy

I know =/, and thanks ^^.

[Nymph of Destiny]

This is a good poem...but this was written in the past, right? Everything's okay now...?

[O R A N G E]

Chaser I sincerely hope you're feeling better now and that this was written a while ago. Are you okay? The poem is good, but I'd hate to know it was written becuase you are sad.

[Dark Shadow]

I Think It Was Awsome And Kool!!!!

[Laplace]

This is a good poem...but this was written in the past, right? Everything's okay now...?

Yes, I wrote it like two weeks ago.

Chaser I sincerely hope you're feeling better now and that this was written a while ago. Are you okay? The poem is good, but I'd hate to know it was written becuase you are sad.


Yes, I am okay.

I Think It Was Awsome And Kool!!!!

Stop spamming please -_-.