I want to believe

[Kairi9020]

I want to believe that you are still here
Not rotting away in all of my fears
I want to know if the light will reach you
If it can't,
I'll fade into darkness to be with you

I'll give you all you need
No matter how much the fee
Please believe that I won't let my tears spill
Into the sky we go again because this will be my will

Underneath the moonlight sky
And above the beauitful blue ocean
This is more then a fantasy
This is more then we can handle
I truly believe, that this is passion

The person in the past,
The one I loved long ago
Has come and now has to go
Believe that we will meet again
But this time, he's only a friend

I'm swimming in deep rivers
I'm walking long distances
I'm dreaming wild dreams
I'm turning my light into a powerful beam
Before you know it,
I'll shoot it into the sky
And lose it forever

Beautiful light
Wonderful feeling
I'm losing sight of it
But it's something I'm willing to do
I just want to be with you

I'm told if I love something
I have to let it go
Why does it hurt?
Your eyes barely notice me
But your heart wants me to be by your side
Please don't feel blue
Because I'm always here for you

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I wrote another poem. I was bored so if it's not my best, you know why.

[Gerdneek]

wow that was good. i would gotten stuck b/c i would have added the word orange.

[Delicious ♥ Ambrosia]

That was really good. :)

[Kairi9020]

Thank you. ^^

[Devil's Angel]

LOVE IT! :D

[Cherry]

Astoundingly amazing. I cannot put my finger into how that poem took me by the heart! I adored it!

[Laplace]

I want to believe that you are still here
Not rotting away in all of my fears
I want to know if the light will reach you
If it can't,
I'll fade into darkness to be with you

I'll give you all you need
No matter how much the fee
Please believe that I won't let my tears spill
Into the sky we go again because this will be my will

Underneath the moonlight sky
And above the beauitful blue ocean
This is more then a fantasy
This is more then we can handle
I truly believe, that this is passion

The person in the past,
The one I loved long ago
Has come and now has to go
Believe that we will meet again
But this time, he's only a friend

I'm swimming in deep rivers
I'm walking long distances
I'm dreaming wild dreams
I'm turning my light into a powerful beam
Before you know it,
I'll shoot it into the sky
And lose it forever

Beautiful light
Wonderful feeling
I'm losing sight of it
But it's something I'm willing to do
I just want to be with you

I'm told if I love something
I have to let it go
Why does it hurt?
Your eyes barely notice me
But your heart wants me to be by your side
Please don't feel blue
Because I'm always here for you

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I wrote another poem. I was bored so if it's not my best, you know why.

Thank you... For depressing me more, now I fell better, how much I love to be depressed.

[Nymph of Destiny]

Very nice poem, Kairi~!! *claps* I can't really find anything to critique, great job. :)