My Sister

[Random Angel]

Every time I cry,
You are there at my side.
Every time I feel sad,
You cheer me up.
When I come home,
I get a big hug.

I can not live without you.
When we are apart,
Life doesn't seem worth living.
You are my my life.
Every time I mad,
It can not be at you.
Every time we are togerher,
I am the happist I can be.
Whatever you do please dont leave.
*****************************

Made for my sister! It all is true and came from the heart.

[#1 DinestyX]

love it! that is so sweat!

[Random Angel]

love it! that is so sweat!

thank you I am glad you like it

[#1 DinestyX]

u and ur sis must be very dif from me and mine!!!

[Random Angel]

u and ur sis must be very dif from me and mine!!!

well we fight all the same just cant stay mad at each other

[#1 DinestyX]

me and my sis r twins and r parents r the ones that make us constently look the same so we r sick of eachother

[Random Angel]

me and my sis r twins and r parents r the ones that make us constently look the same so we r sick of eachother

rebel ..........

[#1 DinestyX]

what do you meen?

[Random Angel]

what do you meen?

if you want to dress differntly then do or you might as well be the same people

[#1 DinestyX]

r mom got us identical clothes!!!!!

[Random Angel]

r mom got us identical clothes!!!!!

dont wear the same thing a day and mix up the outfits

[#1 DinestyX]

she gets mad...r mom is evil!!!

[kingdom945]

hinta's right. you deserve to be your own unique person. before I was born, my father wanted to name me shari shawna because that was my mom and sister's name. now, I am glad to be brittany because I am who I am and I will be who I want to be.

like I said, you have a huge right to be different, and maybe you can explain to your parents that you hate it. No offense, but I hate it when people do that too, but it is because I cannot tell most apart, and I feel embarrassed and so on, especially when I don't get their names right!

[#1 DinestyX]

well u can sorta tell us apart cuz I took my school scisers to my hair...I got grounded 4 so long!

[Random Angel]

well u can sorta tell us apart cuz I took my school scisers to my hair...I got grounded 4 so long!

stand up against them

[#1 DinestyX]

yah i gess

[kingdom945]

sissors to hair...?

sissors>hair

awesome. you really should think about standing up. how did you cut your hair? like... what style?

[#1 DinestyX]

I am realy babd at cuting hair but I choped it up to my ears...now it is at my sholders and her's is to her knees

[kingdom945]

wow

mine used to be down a little passed my rear end.... when I was five. lol.

[#1 DinestyX]

r names r also alot alike

Destiny and Stepheny

[kingdom945]

those are nice namessssss

[#1 DinestyX]

yah if they wheren't ours

[kingdom945]

ouch... harsh....

[xiegin]

O wow thats so nice :D
Great job its a very kind poem :D

[Random Angel]

O wow thats so nice :D
Great job its a very kind poem :D

Thank you she is the only person who keeps me happy I wouldnt be here if it wasnt for her

[Nymph of Destiny]

Aww, that's so sweet...great job. :) Although in the second verse, I think you mean to say 'when I'm mad' instead of 'when I mad'...or may use 'angry' instead of 'mad'...either way is fine. Overall, awesome poem! :glomp:

[Random Angel]

Aww, that's so sweet...great job. :) Although in the second verse, I think you mean to say 'when I'm mad' instead of 'when I mad'...or may use 'angry' instead of 'mad'...either way is fine. Overall, awesome poem! :glomp:

thanks and opps

but coming from you that means a lot thanks again

[Nymph of Destiny]

thanks and opps

but coming from you that means a lot thanks again

Anytime. *hugs* I can't wait to see any other works from you~!!

[Laplace]

I personally hate it, sorry Hitna, but I only like sad and depressing poems, because is how is the life, sad and depressing, still is good putting apart that I didn´t feel nothing for the poem, and that I hate a little my both sisters.

[Random Angel]

I personally hate it, sorry Hitna, but I only like sad and depressing poems, because is how is the life, sad and depressing, still is good putting apart that I didn´t feel nothing for the poem, and that I hate a little my both sisters.

that is because you are emo....sorry but that is how you act you know you should really lighten up life is just too short

[Laplace]

that is because you are emo....sorry but that is how you act you know you should really lighten up life is just too short

I am not emo, is just, I been depressed, and I couldn´t find the reason.

[Random Angel]

I am not emo, is just, I been depressed, and I couldn´t find the reason.

Sorry well I wish that I could help but I can not

[Destined]

i really enjoy your poem and it's heart felt honesty

[Random Angel]

i really enjoy your poem and it's heart felt honesty

yay glad you liked it

[Fruity~]

Every time I cry,
You are there at my side.
Every time I feel sad,
You cheer me up.
When I come home,
I get a big hug.

I can not live without you.
When we are apart,
Life doesn't seem worth living.
You are my my life.
Every time I am mad,
It can not be at you.
Every time we are togerther,
I am the happiest I can be.
Whatever you do please dont leave.
*****************************

Made for my sister! It all is true and came from the heart.

I did some corrections for you nad erase the r please. ^^

[O R A N G E]

I have a sister too.

But I'm not sure I think this much of her.

I'm glad you and your sister can have enough of a bond for you to write a poem about her. Good job.