clawtooth35
11-24-2007, 05:04 PM
Hello ppl this is the first chapter/ prologue of my in progress novel- Sashu. If you wish me to post additional chapther them please say so.
During the night the lake had frozen over. However that did not detract from its charm. The wood had become frosty under the moons watchful gaze and yet again it was still as endearing as ever. The tops of the trees to the grass on the forest carpet were stationary, unmoved: even by the icy, spiky, wind that blew from the hills. Everything was doused in a thick covering of cold that chilled the bone .Winters? breath had come.
Animals of every class and species scampered around trying to find food as they had had no warning of Winter's coming .Cats and mice, dogs and foxes. Even the noble Swans, whose feathers now blended perfectly with the landscape as it had started snowing, pitched in for all had to be perfect for Winters arrival.
In the late afternoon when fur and feather alike were panting, they were finished. They had created a grotto with stag, resturaunt and bar and it was all perfect, better some thought than the great cities of the North. Then they heard a sound, chimes tinkling a merry tune as if some great deed or event had taken place. Then suddenly two great, white Viehals, the fairest beasts in the land, whose footfall is so soft that it barely made an imprint on the fine snow and exuded an aura of hope and light. They looked like deer but weren't, they were slightly larger and each one had a mane of silver hair. The carriage they were effortlessly pulling looked as if it had been forged from ice and a lustrous blue light shone forth from within. Tension mounted to an impossibly high rate, as all there knew what was inside.
The carriage door opened and out stepped, a woman with long blonde hair wearing a lengthy green dress. She had a kind, rounded face and her eyes a deep green-blue. As she walked the powdery snow supported her weight as if it had been ordered to.
The village Elder, a tall Tawny Owl, stepped forward.
"Welcome back Madam Winter", he greeted.
"It is good to be back, I trust everything is in order, Elder Russet", She replied, "Only, I bring grave news from the North", She added in an undertone.
"I will converse with you about that later", he whispered sounding slightly shaken, "After the festivities", He added with a cheeky wink.
And what festivities they were. There was wining, dining, shows and fun, later when the cubs and chicks had gone to sleep there was story-telling. Tales of knights and dragons. Fables about princesses and witches. Even one about the anecdotes of an extremely funny Ferret. When the party was finished, everyone slept. Except for two Leaders who were worried, worried for the fate of their kingdoms.
During the night the lake had frozen over. However that did not detract from its charm. The wood had become frosty under the moons watchful gaze and yet again it was still as endearing as ever. The tops of the trees to the grass on the forest carpet were stationary, unmoved: even by the icy, spiky, wind that blew from the hills. Everything was doused in a thick covering of cold that chilled the bone .Winters? breath had come.
Animals of every class and species scampered around trying to find food as they had had no warning of Winter's coming .Cats and mice, dogs and foxes. Even the noble Swans, whose feathers now blended perfectly with the landscape as it had started snowing, pitched in for all had to be perfect for Winters arrival.
In the late afternoon when fur and feather alike were panting, they were finished. They had created a grotto with stag, resturaunt and bar and it was all perfect, better some thought than the great cities of the North. Then they heard a sound, chimes tinkling a merry tune as if some great deed or event had taken place. Then suddenly two great, white Viehals, the fairest beasts in the land, whose footfall is so soft that it barely made an imprint on the fine snow and exuded an aura of hope and light. They looked like deer but weren't, they were slightly larger and each one had a mane of silver hair. The carriage they were effortlessly pulling looked as if it had been forged from ice and a lustrous blue light shone forth from within. Tension mounted to an impossibly high rate, as all there knew what was inside.
The carriage door opened and out stepped, a woman with long blonde hair wearing a lengthy green dress. She had a kind, rounded face and her eyes a deep green-blue. As she walked the powdery snow supported her weight as if it had been ordered to.
The village Elder, a tall Tawny Owl, stepped forward.
"Welcome back Madam Winter", he greeted.
"It is good to be back, I trust everything is in order, Elder Russet", She replied, "Only, I bring grave news from the North", She added in an undertone.
"I will converse with you about that later", he whispered sounding slightly shaken, "After the festivities", He added with a cheeky wink.
And what festivities they were. There was wining, dining, shows and fun, later when the cubs and chicks had gone to sleep there was story-telling. Tales of knights and dragons. Fables about princesses and witches. Even one about the anecdotes of an extremely funny Ferret. When the party was finished, everyone slept. Except for two Leaders who were worried, worried for the fate of their kingdoms.