A new poem : The apologie

[Kairi9020]

I wish a simple smile could make you love me again
I wish a simple breath could wake me up again
I wish the bright lights will never fade
I wish I could open my eyes
I wish I could awaken from this deep slumber
I wish I could simplify this, clarify it
I wish again and again

I want to go back in time and finally surrender
I could apologize
Maybe, I'll actually practice and become a better person
I want to be, no, I need to be perfect
You're depending on me

I have to learn stop wishing, to stop dreaming
I have to learn
There's no excuse for these hateful feelings
I don't like to beg
But if I have to,
I'll get on my knees and cry
I'll cry because I made the mistake

I know you'll turn your head away
I know you'll let it get to me
I know I'll keep begging
And even if you noticed the saddness in my eyes
You'll also know there's no way to forgive a mistake like mine

A small infatuation held me back
This music that goes on for all eternity
Without an ending
Lands, skies, oceans...They all disappeared
The friendships I've made, the loves I've found
They are all lost in the distance
So now, I walk this empty valley on my own

Without wanting to
I let it go
I let it all go

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Just another poem I wrote....I"m not sure if it's very good though..

[Laplace]

I don´t like too much, because is kinda depressing for my current mood, but good I should say.

[Last of the Organization]

It has a good length to it.....good free verse......but a little depressing atmosphere.....overall it was good though......

[Kairi9020]

It was ment to be depressing...:rolleyes:

[Nymph of Destiny]

Wow...that was awesome Kairi! *claps* Really, it was awesome!! Although you accidentally misspelled 'apology' in the title, everything is really great! XD

[Crumpet]

nymph.... always picking up spelling errors

wow .. it was very nice *claps*

[Jordier0xs0x]

That was good. Were you In a depressing mood when you wrote that? >.>

[Hakurei Reimu]

The way u executed the poem to match its topic-brilliant. This is great work.

[Mr.Sprinkles]

I love it its really deep

[O R A N G E]

It's a good poem, but it is very depressing. It makes me feel like huggling j00 to make you feel better. XD

That sounded creepier than I wanted it to.

Anyway, good job.