Tale For The Underdog [Portrait of a Dreamer]

[Kroshanks]

A vision like a distorted dream
Is what I know to be my shifting life
As if it were someone's humorous scheme
That i must constantly walk past this strife
I feel like all I know is to sleep
Because I know I've had what's to take
My only fear is if this dream's too deep
That I'll have no choice but to wake
Perhaps I have far too old of a head
To say that I should be wise to know more
But alas I won't stop walking ahead
Until the day I knock on heaven's door

Questions and/or opinions si vous plait.

[Nymph of Destiny]

Hmm... waune, une partie du 'besoin du I profité, et 'rêve 'est accidentellement mal épelé, mais autrement, le grand travail :) Maintenant si je peux seulement vous convaincre de traîner l'histoire de votre KH-vids ici... badinant juste. Vous pas devez si vous ne voulez pas à. XD
















lol Okay, in English:

Hmm...well, some of the 'I's need to capitalized, and 'dream' is accidentally misspelled, but otherwise, great job. :) Now if I can only convince you to drag your KH-vids' story here...just kidding. You don't have to if you don't want to. XD

[Kroshanks]

Hmm... waune, une partie du 'besoin du I profité, et 'rêve 'est accidentellement mal épelé, mais autrement, le grand travail :) Maintenant si je peux seulement vous convaincre de traîner l'histoire de votre KH-vids ici... badinant juste. Vous pas devez si vous ne voulez pas à. XD
















lol Okay, in English:

Hmm...well, some of the 'I's need to capitalized, and 'dream' is accidentally misspelled, but otherwise, great job. :) Now if I can only convince you to drag your KH-vids' story here...just kidding. You don't have to if you don't want to. XD

XD Cool. Anyway, I've lost ideas for my story lately, but I'm still trying to continue it. I just need some good ol' fashioned rocket-sauce (inspiration)

[Heaven's Angel]

good job! XD XD

Nymph...? O.O You speak spanish?

[Nymph of Destiny]

good job! XD XD

Nymph...? O.O You speak spanish?

That was French inspired from the "si vous plait". XD

[Heaven's Angel]

oh... >.< it looked like spanish to me for a second... lol...