Random Angel
01-27-2008, 01:30 AM
just a little story that I just made up....not too orginal at first
Intro
This is the beginning of our world. Two sisters landed on a world that was lifeless. They wanted to make a place to live together for the rest of their lives. They simply wished life on that world and it happened. Trees grew out of the ground. Rivers and lakes made their home there. The world was now the most beautiful place in the universe and a paradise. The sisters soon grew lonely; the animals could not talk back to them. So they created human like beings. The beings loved the sisters and they worshiped them. The beings needed homes to live so they created a city. A city of beauty and was talked about throughout the universe as the best city ever made. Their technology quickly grew and they were able to leave the world on ships at any time they pleased, not that anyone wanted to leave. One of the sisters was named Desire; she was beautiful as a rose and all of the men wanted to be named her lover. Desire’s sister was named Envy, named that because she envied everything, even her sister. She grew jealous of her sister and that jealously turned into hate. She to had people who would do anything for her and not her sister. She had a young man get close to her sister. Desire fell in love with the man without knowing that he was plotting to kill her. She could read minds and hearts but thanks to her sister’s spell the young men was protected by Desire’s power. One night he was given a sword by Envy, which was specially made to kill her sister. He went into her room in her and her sister’s castle and pierced the sword through her heart and she died. Envy told the kingdom that someone had broken in and killed her beloved sister and everyone mourned. The man who killed her thought that he would became king but Envy just laughed when he asked and threw him into jail and told everyone that he had killed Desire. He was shocked by this and yelled out the she told him to. Envy, of course, denied having anything to do with her sister’s death and even started to cry saying how could he say such a thing! She had him put to death within the same day. A week later she was talking to the people of her kingdom when her sister appeared as an angel. She told the people what really happened for she found out everything by the man who had killed her, who was now in heaven. She had became leader of Heaven, or now known as Mother to some or just plain God, and said that her if her sister wanted to lead so much, she shall lead Hell. She banished Envy to Hell to rule it all of eternity. Before she left she said this: “I will come back!” and she was gone.
Now, a thousand years later, people have forgotten about the sisters and the lost city of Envy and Desire. Strange things are happening now. People are going missing. My sister disappeared last week. Whole cities are even being wiped out and became ghosts towns. Strange beings came to this world and killed many. We call them Demons. Now the paradise in gone. Dirt is stained by blood; the air is spoiled by the sound of swords clashing. People are trying to rebuild somewhat but the cities are now small towns and villages. I live in the only big city that is left. They say we will have to leave soon so we won’t disappear like the others, but like me, some don’t want to leave their home just because of the Demons, that would mean they’ve won. Those people formed together and are fighting against the Demons, the call themselves ‘The Last Hope’ rebellion, and they are. They are all we have left. These people are either normal humans, humans with special powers, or Elves, that what we call them because they don’t talk to us much and when they do they don’t say what they would be like to be called. They are an old race that talk about the old city and look different from normal humans. They are not trusted much. There are even some rebel Demons in the rebellion, these Demons have a mind of their own (most do not and are like wild animals).
Now we must fight…or die.
like it hate it. I dont really care and btw the next chapter will come out within this or the next week
Intro
This is the beginning of our world. Two sisters landed on a world that was lifeless. They wanted to make a place to live together for the rest of their lives. They simply wished life on that world and it happened. Trees grew out of the ground. Rivers and lakes made their home there. The world was now the most beautiful place in the universe and a paradise. The sisters soon grew lonely; the animals could not talk back to them. So they created human like beings. The beings loved the sisters and they worshiped them. The beings needed homes to live so they created a city. A city of beauty and was talked about throughout the universe as the best city ever made. Their technology quickly grew and they were able to leave the world on ships at any time they pleased, not that anyone wanted to leave. One of the sisters was named Desire; she was beautiful as a rose and all of the men wanted to be named her lover. Desire’s sister was named Envy, named that because she envied everything, even her sister. She grew jealous of her sister and that jealously turned into hate. She to had people who would do anything for her and not her sister. She had a young man get close to her sister. Desire fell in love with the man without knowing that he was plotting to kill her. She could read minds and hearts but thanks to her sister’s spell the young men was protected by Desire’s power. One night he was given a sword by Envy, which was specially made to kill her sister. He went into her room in her and her sister’s castle and pierced the sword through her heart and she died. Envy told the kingdom that someone had broken in and killed her beloved sister and everyone mourned. The man who killed her thought that he would became king but Envy just laughed when he asked and threw him into jail and told everyone that he had killed Desire. He was shocked by this and yelled out the she told him to. Envy, of course, denied having anything to do with her sister’s death and even started to cry saying how could he say such a thing! She had him put to death within the same day. A week later she was talking to the people of her kingdom when her sister appeared as an angel. She told the people what really happened for she found out everything by the man who had killed her, who was now in heaven. She had became leader of Heaven, or now known as Mother to some or just plain God, and said that her if her sister wanted to lead so much, she shall lead Hell. She banished Envy to Hell to rule it all of eternity. Before she left she said this: “I will come back!” and she was gone.
Now, a thousand years later, people have forgotten about the sisters and the lost city of Envy and Desire. Strange things are happening now. People are going missing. My sister disappeared last week. Whole cities are even being wiped out and became ghosts towns. Strange beings came to this world and killed many. We call them Demons. Now the paradise in gone. Dirt is stained by blood; the air is spoiled by the sound of swords clashing. People are trying to rebuild somewhat but the cities are now small towns and villages. I live in the only big city that is left. They say we will have to leave soon so we won’t disappear like the others, but like me, some don’t want to leave their home just because of the Demons, that would mean they’ve won. Those people formed together and are fighting against the Demons, the call themselves ‘The Last Hope’ rebellion, and they are. They are all we have left. These people are either normal humans, humans with special powers, or Elves, that what we call them because they don’t talk to us much and when they do they don’t say what they would be like to be called. They are an old race that talk about the old city and look different from normal humans. They are not trusted much. There are even some rebel Demons in the rebellion, these Demons have a mind of their own (most do not and are like wild animals).
Now we must fight…or die.
like it hate it. I dont really care and btw the next chapter will come out within this or the next week