Writer's Family

[Dmaster]

Writer's Family
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg164/avsfan3721/writersfam.png?t=1216542472
As the name says, it's basically a family for people who like to write.
rules:
1. Don't diss other people's work, give constructive critism.
2. please don't swear and if you must please censor it.
3. Dont spam!
4. Please mantain a story rating of PG-13
5. If you wish to join please PM me and/or Demi.


Note#1: i made this for Demitryx, she was tired at the time and got me to do it.

Members:
Demitryx - Princess of Eternal Shadow
Dmaster - Princely Summoner
Destinystar - Angel of Twilight
Random Angel - The Poetic Angel
Destined - The Prolific Pirate
Cupcake - The Mythical Typer
VaKh87-The Adventurous Writer
tummer73 - (title has not yet been specified)
Unsaintly Saint - Musical Typer
KHHottie30 - Spiritual Storyteller
amythest - organized and rediculously exotic organism (oreo for short)
darkcloud - Twilight writer
DiveIntoTheHeart - Artsy Writer
Rainbow Stoner - The Stoned Writer
Thalassa_Shells - Angel's Silent Song
Mexony - Pencilwhip
K.H.Nut13 - Fan Fiction Warrior
DeathSight44 - Moogle emperor of moogliness
sillypuddy - The Joy-bringer fairy sister
BamaSebastion - (Title not yet specified)
Ansem59 - The Paragraph Aniliator!
LullabyCaiden - Biographical Writer of Adolescence.
Paladin12345678 - Pen of Destiny

[Random Angel]

I'll join! Ummm

[Dmaster]

okay. uh... what do you want your title to be...? (please make it a book character title/thing...)

[Random Angel]

ummm.....I can't think of one right now...

[Dmaster]

okay, pm me it later then...

[Random Angel]

okay. I'm just tired right now :sweat:

[Dmaster]

lol it's okay.. brb

[Random Angel]

okay... I got to go soon anyway

[Heaven's Angel]

ohh! I love to write poems and stories!

can my title be "Angel of Twilight"? :P

[Random Angel]

ohh! I love to write poems and stories!

can my title be "Poetic Angel"? :P

why didnt I think of that? xD

[Heaven's Angel]

I changed it... :P

[Random Angel]

I changed it... :P

you didnt have to you know but thanks mind if I take it?

[Dmaster]

lol, yeah you're in Destinystar just one question: who's going to be the angel of twilight?

[Heaven's Angel]

sure, u can take it ^^

I'm gonna be the Angel of Twilight and she wants to be the Poetic Angel :P

[Dmaster]

ok thanks! i'l ladd you's now...

[Heaven's Angel]

m'kay... :P

wanna see some of my work? :)

[Dmaster]

Yes please! ^-^

[Heaven's Angel]

okay! This is a poem that I just recently wrote at space camp and ur the first I've shown on KHV :P my and my boyfriend were on seperate teams and I missed him alot so I wrote a poem about it. Seriously, i was close to crying... guys in that place had dorms two floors below the girls and I never got to see him for more than 10 minutes... and we had planned to be together on this trip 6 months ago... anyways, that's the story behind this poem... I wrote it in my dorm two days before I came back home... I usually write about my feelings :3

This feeling
This longing feeling
The feeling I have to be beside you
It's growing stronger

Why can't you be with me?
Why must we be kept apart?
It makes no sense
I miss you so much

I want to break this wall
The solid wall that stands between us
I wish it would collapse
Then I'd be with you

But that's only a wish
Even if the wall collapses
It will only rebuild itself
And we'll be separated once more

But I won't give up
Just two days now
Two more days
And I can be with you again

[Dmaster]

wow O.O that's good! you've already read angel's crest :P sssooo... yeah... lol, just to clarify i know how you felt because i had a similiar issue a few days back...

[Heaven's Angel]

lol thanks ^-^ I plan to turn all of my poems into a book called "Twilight Angel" or something like that :3

err... angel's crest...? >>

seriously? it sucks to be in situations like that >.<

[Destined]

Finally a family for writers!! Allow myself to enter this society family if you would be so kind.

[Heaven's Angel]

Finally a family for writers!! Allow myself to enter this society family if you would be so kind.

Destined! *tackles* hey! =D

[Dmaster]

Yay! Destined i was hoping you'd join! yeah, what's your title?

^-^

you don't remember? i'll go find the link! (if i posted it here i'd fill a few pages i think ^-^')

i know!!!!!!!

[Heaven's Angel]

okay! I think I'm gonna write something right now... hmm... :P

[Dmaster]

lol, okay... here's Angel Crest's link (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=39714)

[Destined]

a title eh...

I dunno. You'd think for someone who's a creative writer that the ability to come up with a title would be as easy as blinking.

From hence forth my title shall be....Destined, The Prolific Pirate.

[Heaven's Angel]

wow... the first chapter is amazing! =D wOOt! go Dein! XD

[Dmaster]

lol, danm straight. and i'll add you now!

thanks! ^-^ if you scroll down you can find the second chapter... and let me just say this: Vlad can f*cking bite!

[Heaven's Angel]

err... can my title be "Angel of Twilight" instead...? it just sounds better... >>

...bite? O_o

[Destined]

So if we are posting links to our works...

The Destined (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=18173)

The Sacrificed (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=1498677#post1498677)

[Dmaster]

lol, ok ^-^

and speaking of which Destined... i'm still waiting for chapter 2 of sacrificed! oh and thanks again for adding Hiero and Alex!

[Heaven's Angel]

I'm going to just let u guys know that I may not read some of the excessively long stories that are posted on here... I just don't have enough time to search through stuff like that, but I WILL read all poems and newly beginning stories :P

[Sexy Sheva]

I'd lvoe to join please =D


Cupcake - The Mythical Typer

[Dmaster]

ok, you're in Cupcake (or Riku's#1fangirl >D yesh i remember!) ^-^

And ok thanks for the warning Destinystar

and just to clarify, even though this is a writer's family you don't have to talk about books/poems or anything feel free to cosplay or mess around :D

[Destined]

lol, ok ^-^

and speaking of which Destined... i'm still waiting for chapter 2 of sacrificed! oh and thanks again for adding Hiero and Alex!

I know. I had planned to iron out the chapter this last week while i was in florida for spring break...but needless to say Disneyworld, Islands of Adventure, rum and swimming pools got in the way.

I have the outline of what I want to do for chapters 2 through 5, but the problem is I don't have the time to sit down at my computer and just type. I fear it may be awhile before the story continues, but i haven't given up on it.

Speaking of disneyworld, while i was walking around the magic kingdom I got the brilliant idea (that hopefully hasn't transpired yet) of blending Charlie and the chocolate factory with Disneyworld and KH.

Basically Sora, Kairi, Riku recieve the bottled message from the king saying that the project he had started before KH was completed and he wanted to offer the three the first chance to enter the KH first theme park: Disneyworld.

Then somehow ORG 13 gets involved....then I lost focus when I smelled the churros.

Sound good?

[Dmaster]

lol, it's too bad about you not having enough time but i can guarantee almost all the fans of the series will wait for ya to finish! and i wonder what kingdom hearts style Disney World would be like...

oh, and i'ma have to go now, i'll be back later! (with Demi hopefully) till then cyas! *waves*

[Heaven's Angel]

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=42274
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=43815

a few short stories from a while back~! :3

c ya Dmaster! ^-^

[Sexy Sheva]

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=42274
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=43815

a few short stories from a while back~! :3

c ya Dmaster! ^-^

:glomp:

:P

[Heaven's Angel]

:glomp:

:P

*huggles* lolz hi~! ^-^

[Sexy Sheva]

Good Morning everyone <3

[tummer]

i'll join, i love to write

kairi's rose (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=41798)
the big surprise (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=46001)
sora's craving adventure (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=46003)
[ul=http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=46144]their night out[/url]

[Near-to-Tears]

Happy Easter everyone.
Hope the Easter Bunny brings loads of eggs. ^^

Hee hee... The other Co-Creator has finally gotten off her big fat butt and decided to say Hi.
So hi! ^^'

ZOMG! Destiny! *Tackles* XD

*Hugs everyone else* Yeah... I'm hyper. Too much easter chocolate.

Soo...

I might post more of my stuff once I write it... I don't get around to it much these days...

And you're in, I'll make him add later. ::D

[Sexy Sheva]

Happy Easter everyone.
Hope the Easter Bunny brings loads of eggs. ^^

Hee hee... The other Co-Creator has finally gotten off her big fat butt and decided to say Hi.
So hi! ^^'

ZOMG! Destiny! *Tackles* XD

*Hugs everyone else* Yeah... I'm hyper. Too much easter chocolate.

Soo...

I might post more of my stuff once I write it... I don't get around to it much these days...

And you're in, I'll make him add later. ::D


Hello =D :glomp:

[Destined]

Morning y'all and happy easter!

[Near-to-Tears]

Hello =D :glomp:

*is glomped* hiya!
Morning y'all and happy easter!
Morning to you. Kinda evening for me lol.

How are you guys?

[Sexy Sheva]

Great =D


I'm gonna be working on my story when my mummy gets of my computer

*brick'd* =P

[Destined]

Morning to you. Kinda evening for me lol.

How are you guys?

Doing good, just waking up, still on florida time, but doing some hw i put off all week, you?

[Near-to-Tears]

Great =D


I'm gonna be working on my story when my mummy gets of my computer

*brick'd* =P



Doing good, just waking up, still on florida time, but doing some hw i put off all week, you?

lol

Urgh... I'm writing something for my english class. But I really don't want to right now. Oh well... Has to be sooner or later. But I'm not really trying so it's not that good. =\

You been to Florida recently? I'm going in like... two weeks...

[Destined]

Yea, just got back from spring break down there and i'm allready missing the 80 degrees....you going to Disney or Universal? I can answer any questions you might have.

[Near-to-Tears]

Hotel's in Disney. Yay, two weeks of screaming children. >>
I went a couple of years ago but I don't really know what'ss changed since then.

[Sexy Sheva]

._.


shame on you two :p


I've never been to florida


farthest I've been is South Carolina xD

[Near-to-Tears]

Furthest I've been... Australia. XD

Normally I don't leave the country though... Until I was 12/13 the furthest I'd been was Frace, and then I went through the Channel Tunnel. >_>

[Aura]

I'm sorry to say but there's already a thread like this.I made one.

[Near-to-Tears]

Sorry, we didn't realise.

I did just check your's out after you posted... It died in febuary and it's now not viewable to most members I believe. So it was an honest mistake. This isn't me trying to be nasty, I swear.

However... We have quite a few members now I don't think it's fair to shut this down for a dying thread. I appolgise on both mine and Dmaster's mistake. But according to the Fourm Family rules your thread should of been deleted by now. If you don't believe me you can check for yourself. Again, I am truly sorry for not realising. But we are allowed to post this I think.

[Heaven's Angel]

Demitryx! *huggles* hey! ^-^

there's already one like this...? Is it active...? >>

EDIT: ohh... I see the problem... >>

[Sexy Sheva]

Demitryx! *huggles* hey! ^-^

there's already one like this...? Is it active...? >>

EDIT: ohh... I see the problem... >>

HI DS

:glomp:

[Near-to-Tears]

Heya! I finally gave into Dmaster's whining and posted XD XD

Yeah, once again it was an honest mistake but like I explained it should of been deleted by now anyway.

[Sexy Sheva]

Heya! I finally gave into Dmaster's whining and posted XD XD

Yeah, once again it was an honest mistake but like I explained it should of been deleted by now anyway.

true


after a whole month, if its not posted in, then it will be deleted, BUT if its posted in before the month is up, its not considered 'dead'

[Near-to-Tears]

It's been exactly a month since her's was last posted in I believe. And no one has posted since one or to people asked to join... It has about 3 posts.
I hope that it's alright we've done this... I feel bad now...

[Sexy Sheva]

It's been exactly a month since her's was last posted in I believe. And no one has posted since one or to people asked to join... It has about 3 posts.
I hope that it's alright we've done this... I feel bad now...

if its been exactly a month then it should be closed down and deleted by now

[Near-to-Tears]

At least that's alright...

Still feel bad about it XP
Urgh... I have too much conscience sometimes I think...

[Sexy Sheva]

At least that's alright...

Still feel bad about it XP
Urgh... I have too much conscience sometimes I think...

don't worry about it xD

Ask VaKH to join this family =]

[Heaven's Angel]

oof! *falls down* lol hai :3

it's good to have alot of consience :P

ooohhh! good idea, cupcake! =D

[Near-to-Tears]

Heh... I try not to... It's gonna bug for a while though...

I feel bad about everything I do that annoys, upsets or even just makes someone think "Hang on a second"...>_>
It gets annoying.

Yeah, I will... But I'll wait and see if she does on her own first. I don't want to seem condesending and pushy.

[Aura]

Sorry, we didn't realise.

I did just check your's out after you posted... It died in febuary and it's now not viewable to most members I believe. So it was an honest mistake. This isn't me trying to be nasty, I swear.

However... We have quite a few members now I don't think it's fair to shut this down for a dying thread. I appolgise on both mine and Dmaster's mistake. But according to the Fourm Family rules your thread should of been deleted by now. If you don't believe me you can check for yourself. Again, I am truly sorry for not realising. But we are allowed to post this I think.

No its fine now.If its not a problem I'll be glad to join:)

[Near-to-Tears]

Thanks for not making a issue of this. ^^

And sure, I'll get Dmaster to add you soon as he gets online.

[Aura]

I'm not the type of person to make an issue of something little.It was just an honest mistake:)

[Sexy Sheva]

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

[Heaven's Angel]

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

lol random much? :P (somebody had a little too much candy, eh? XD)

[Near-to-Tears]

I'm not the type of person to make an issue of something little.It was just an honest mistake:)

Still, there are some who might of. I'm just glad you're not. So welcome to our family. :3

Bet it's not as random as what I did today xD

[Aura]

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

Lol that was random.

Still, there are some who might of. I'm just glad you're not. So welcome to our family. :3

Thank you.I love to write:)

[Sexy Sheva]

lol random much? :P (somebody had a little too much candy, eh? XD)

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:3

[Heaven's Angel]

<<

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brb *goes to get easter basket* XD

[Sexy Sheva]

<<

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brb *goes to get easter basket* XD

same here XD

I left my chocolate in my lil bros room




o.o uh oh *rushes*

[Near-to-Tears]

Thank you.I love to write:)
Same here when I get the chance. I'm kinda writing right now, but it's some stupid assignment I'd really rather not be doing. Not my writing style at all...

<<

>>

brb *goes to get easter basket* XD
lol, you'll be ill Destiny! XD

same here XD

I left my chocolate in my lil bros room




o.o uh oh *rushes*
Wow... If I'd left my stuff in my brother's room I'd never see it ever again after three minutes.

[Heaven's Angel]

lol It doesn't matter! I always get ill on Easter :3

[Aura]

I'm actually currently working on two stories.I'll give you the link:)


http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=44097 This is my first one.

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=45798 And my second one.


Tell me if you like it:)

[Near-to-Tears]

DestinyStar! lol XD
I ate a whole egg this morning without noticing. Osmosis in action I tell ya. O_O

What I read is really good, you write better fights then me by a long shot. I get hung up on battle lines D:

Might as well post something myself...
Well, this is for my english GCSE coursework. (You tell me what a GCSE is and I'll give ya a cookie XD )
So it's something I've been told to write. Basicly I have to pretend I'm a passenger on the 9/11 plane that never made it to it's target. And it's all emotional and I always feel as though I over do it... So sorry if it sucks, and I'm so sorry if it upsets anyone. It's just coursework and I don't even want to write it because I feel like I'm betraying their memory... So this is her last phone call to her boyfriend and she's got emotional issues through out the rest of the writing and couldn't bring herself to say "love" for the enitire thing... I can't really explain much more.

Quickly I cycled through my phone book and tapped the dial button. Patiently I waited for the call to go through, then I heard that oh so familiar voice on the other end: “Do you have any idea what time it is here Con?”
“Jamie,” I smiled sadly “Sorry to wake you… B-But I’m on a plane right now… And… and it’s been hijacked… and after the World Trade Center thing… I don’t think I’m gonna survive… I…I just wanted you to know I love you. And… That I’m so sorry I didn’t say that sooner. I love you, I can’t even begin to tell you how much… I’m, I’m sorry.”
“Conni… I love you too... And you will be all right. I just know you will.”
“Yeah?”
”Yeah.”
”I…I love you but I… I have to go… If I can I will call back. I promise.”
“Bye Con…”
“G-Goodbye…” I mumbled, unsuccessfully fighting back my warm, stinging tears as I hung up. “I love you…” I repeated as I once again smiled at the wallpaper. Gently stroking the screen with my thumb as my tears splattered onto the keypad. Wiping my eyes quickly, trying my hardest not to smudge my make up. Taking a deep, shuddering breath I moved onto the next name, Lily. My best friend, my first friend and the one who had always known me the best…

[Sexy Sheva]

I'm actually currently working on two stories.I'll give you the link:)


http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=44097 This is my first one.

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=45798 And my second one.


Tell me if you like it:)

I would read those, but my specialties are on Short Stories/ Novels, not fanfics


I love to read about the personalities and appearances of new people instead of reading about somethings i already know about <3

DestinyStar! lol XD
I ate a whole egg this morning without noticing. Osmosis in action I tell ya. O_O

What I read is really good, you write better fights then me by a long shot. I get hung up on battle lines D:

Might as well post something myself...
Well, this is for my english GCSE coursework. (You tell me what a GCSE is and I'll give ya a cookie XD )
So it's something I've been told to write. Basicly I have to pretend I'm a passenger on the 9/11 plane that never made it to it's target. And it's all emotional and I always feel as though I over do it... So sorry if it sucks, and I'm so sorry if it upsets anyone. It's just coursework and I don't even want to write it because I feel like I'm betraying their memory... So this is her last phone call to her boyfriend and she's got emotional issues through out the rest of the writing and couldn't bring herself to say "love" for the enitire thing... I can't really explain much more.

Quickly I cycled through my phone book and tapped the dial button. Patiently I waited for the call to go through, then I heard that oh so familiar voice on the other end: “Do you have any idea what time it is here Con?”
“Jamie,” I smiled sadly “Sorry to wake you… B-But I’m on a plane right now… And… and it’s been hijacked… and after the World Trade Center thing… I don’t think I’m gonna survive… I…I just wanted you to know I love you. And… That I’m so sorry I didn’t say that sooner. I love you, I can’t even begin to tell you how much… I’m, I’m sorry.”
“Conni… I love you too... And you will be all right. I just know you will.”
“Yeah?”
”Yeah.”
”I…I love you but I… I have to go… If I can I will call back. I promise.”
“Bye Con…”
“G-Goodbye…” I mumbled, unsuccessfully fighting back my warm, stinging tears as I hung up. “I love you…” I repeated as I once again smiled at the wallpaper. Gently stroking the screen with my thumb as my tears splattered onto the keypad. Wiping my eyes quickly, trying my hardest not to smudge my make up. Taking a deep, shuddering breath I moved onto the next name, Lily. My best friend, my first friend and the one who had always known me the best…

I really do love the suspense of the plane being hijacked and I love the romance of two best friends. You got the emotions just right towards the ending, it really showed me how scared and frightened she was

9/10 great job <3

[Heaven's Angel]

wow... ur one of those people who write really emotional stuff... oddly, I love books that make me cry... and I love sad movies, like Titanic or Bridge to Teribithia... XD

[Sexy Sheva]

wow... ur one of those people who write really emotional stuff... oddly, I love books that make me cry... and I love sad movies, like Titanic or Bridge to Teribithia... XD

._.

thats weird i ended up crying in my sleep because it was like a story xD

[Near-to-Tears]

Thanks Cupcake :3
I'd of made it longer if I could but I'm on a word limit -_-
I'm about half way done and I've got 1,250 words and the maximum is 2,500...

lol, you think so? I thought it was tacky as...

[Aura]

DestinyStar! lol XD
I ate a whole egg this morning without noticing. Osmosis in action I tell ya. O_O

What I read is really good, you write better fights then me by a long shot. I get hung up on battle lines D:

Might as well post something myself...
Well, this is for my english GCSE coursework. (You tell me what a GCSE is and I'll give ya a cookie XD )
So it's something I've been told to write. Basicly I have to pretend I'm a passenger on the 9/11 plane that never made it to it's target. And it's all emotional and I always feel as though I over do it... So sorry if it sucks, and I'm so sorry if it upsets anyone. It's just coursework and I don't even want to write it because I feel like I'm betraying their memory... So this is her last phone call to her boyfriend and she's got emotional issues through out the rest of the writing and couldn't bring herself to say "love" for the enitire thing... I can't really explain much more.

Quickly I cycled through my phone book and tapped the dial button. Patiently I waited for the call to go through, then I heard that oh so familiar voice on the other end: “Do you have any idea what time it is here Con?”
“Jamie,” I smiled sadly “Sorry to wake you… B-But I’m on a plane right now… And… and it’s been hijacked… and after the World Trade Center thing… I don’t think I’m gonna survive… I…I just wanted you to know I love you. And… That I’m so sorry I didn’t say that sooner. I love you, I can’t even begin to tell you how much… I’m, I’m sorry.”
“Conni… I love you too... And you will be all right. I just know you will.”
“Yeah?”
”Yeah.”
”I…I love you but I… I have to go… If I can I will call back. I promise.”
“Bye Con…”
“G-Goodbye…” I mumbled, unsuccessfully fighting back my warm, stinging tears as I hung up. “I love you…” I repeated as I once again smiled at the wallpaper. Gently stroking the screen with my thumb as my tears splattered onto the keypad. Wiping my eyes quickly, trying my hardest not to smudge my make up. Taking a deep, shuddering breath I moved onto the next name, Lily. My best friend, my first friend and the one who had always known me the best…

Wow that was really good.I could feel the emotions that these two characters are feeling.Great job:)

[Sexy Sheva]

Thanks Cupcake :3
I'd of made it longer if I could but I'm on a word limit -_-
I'm about half way done and I've got 1,250 words and the maximum is 2,500...

Thats very good

its half as long as my last story

So i know it will be a good story to read <3

[Destined]

9/11....it's still hard for my to write about it or read works based on scenarios about the tragedy. It is well written and it does hold you suspense. My only thought is that if the assignment asked you to write as if you were on a different plane during 9/11, not on a hijacked one, then maybe you might want to edit the line about the WTC, or have the other person inform you of it; might be even more emotionally charged.

9/10

This is a work i did for a creative writing class about two characters celebrating the other's birthday. I took it a step further and well... here it is The Unnamed Customer (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=34567)

[Sexy Sheva]

9/11....it's still hard for my to write about it or read works based on scenarios about the tragedy. It is well written and it does hold you suspense. My only thought is that if the assignment asked you to write as if you were on a different plane during 9/11, not on a hijacked one, then maybe you might want to edit the line about the WTC, or have the other person inform you of it; might be even more emotionally charged.

9/10

This is a work i did for a creative writing class about two characters celebrating the other's birthday. I took it a step further and well... here it is The Unnamed Customer (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=34567)


I like your storyline, but i do believe more detail would be better <3

explain better what the characters emotions are

[Aura]

9/11....it's still hard for my to write about it or read works based on scenarios about the tragedy. It is well written and it does hold you suspense. My only thought is that if the assignment asked you to write as if you were on a different plane during 9/11, not on a hijacked one, then maybe you might want to edit the line about the WTC, or have the other person inform you of it; might be even more emotionally charged.

9/10

This is a work i did for a creative writing class about two characters celebrating the other's birthday. I took it a step further and well... here it is The Unnamed Customer (http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=34567)


Wow that was sad.I liked it:)

[Heaven's Angel]

Hmm... I'm gonna have to try doing that assignment one day... :P

[Near-to-Tears]

I might post it when I finish... But I don't want to accidently offend anyone...

Thanks VaKh87. Hope my teacher likes it, though he'll hate me for being so far over the limit. XD

I wish it was on a non-hijiacked one... It's the ending that worries me. I have to write about the impact, and the uprising against the hijackers. Luckily we got to see the film version before hand which has helped. Disturbed the heck out of me but it helped a lot with the phone conversation. But earlier in the story I do explain how they've heard. I just copy-pasted a bit I was working on.

But I do think anything to do with 9/11 has to be well thought through. And being on such a time limit doesn't help me at all about that, but hopefully I'll be able to hold true to the emotions and thoughts of the people. I doubt I will, but at least if I try.

[Aura]

You saw the movie in your class or at your house?If I would have seen it in my class I would have cried.Movies of the 9/11 attack make me cry all the time.

[Near-to-Tears]

In class. I was hiding behind my coat most of the time. Expecially when one man got stabbed in the back of the neck. That was disturbing...

You know... Thinking about it. My english class is very emotionally scarring. So far we've watched "A Veiw From The Bridge" where the lead dies and is a incetious pedophile, "Romeo and Juliet", "Fahrenheit 9/11" which just made me physically ill... The 9/11 film I can't remember the name of and the most recent "Frankenstein" where a woman gets her heart torn out with Frankenstein's monster's bare hands and she sets herself on fire with the oil from a oil lamp and runs through the house setting fire to everything...

My teacher is evil...

[Heaven's Angel]

We're not allowed to watch stuff like that at school... it's illegal O_o

[Near-to-Tears]

We are, we're made too actually. By the Govenment and all. It's on the Curiculum so we have no choice. But we're all 15 and these are 15+ rated films. So it's legal. Just not a nice experience.

[Sexy Sheva]

well, 9/11 was a tragic day

I can even remember in 3rd grade seeing it in the classrooms o.O


EDIT:

Hey i got my new story up

there's gonna be chapters :3


http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=46798

[Near-to-Tears]

All I remember is seeing it on TV after school... It happened when it was 12:30 or so here... But I've seen footage of the Towers collapsing. It makes me sick just thinking of it... What it must of been like to witness in the streets...

[Sexy Sheva]

All I remember is seeing it on TV after school... It happened when it was 12:30 or so here... But I've seen footage of the Towers collapsing. It makes me sick just thinking of it... What it must of been like to witness in the streets...

i can imagine ._.

i bet it was terrible


I do know that the police and fire departments made them exit the streets because the structure was collapsing and some of the structure fell down

[Aura]

I remember I was in 4th grade.This girl in my class was crying because of what happened.Nobody in my class was talking.My music teacher was getting mad because nobody would answer her questions.She had to walk out to relax because she was mad and sad.I remember she said,"I know what has happened today but..."she stopped there and had to walk outside.When I saw it in the news before my grandma took me to school,I didn't understand what was going on.When I got home I was sad to hear it from my parents that something so terrible has happened to this country.Eventually as I got older I understood what happened that dreadful day.

[Heaven's Angel]

Into marvelous light I'm running
Out of darkness and out of shame
By the cross you are the truth
You are the life
You are the way

sorry for being random, but I'm trying to lift the mood a bit... ^^

[Sexy Sheva]

Into marvelous light I'm running
Out of darkness and out of shame
By the cross you are the truth
You are the life
You are the way

sorry for being random, but I'm trying to lift the mood a bit... ^^

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D


someone plwease check out my story? =3

[Near-to-Tears]

We weren't told... All I remember of school that day was the teachers whispering and this dreadful and sinister 'silence'. Everyone knew something was up, we just didn't know what. I knew when I found out later the magnitude of it all, even if I was only 9 at the time... But I never truley knew the story until this year. I was always to afraid to ask.

[Dmaster]

... O.o i missed alot... anyways, Vakh and tummer73, i would add you's but i need your titles...

oh and sorry about creating this one>_< didn't know there was already something like it.

[Aura]

... O.o i missed alot... anyways, Vakh and tummer73, i would add you's but i need your titles...

oh and sorry about creating this one>_< didn't know there was already something like it.

Don't worry about it.Its fine with me.

Anyways I would like VaKh87-The Adventurous Writer

[Dmaster]

ADDED! and thanks ^-^

[Random Angel]

so whats up everyone?

[Dmaster]

hey RA! what's new?

[Random Angel]

hey RA! what's new?

Hi :glomp: I got chocolate.....and ate some. Now I am hyper

[Dmaster]

lol, me and my friend did that before...i couldn't finish my easter bunny and he isn't allowed choclate :3 what a great mix!

[Random Angel]

lol, me and my friend did that before...i couldn't finish my easter bunny and he isn't allowed choclate :3 what a great mix!

;3 I ate my bunny. It was small and hollow. First I eat the back so it was 2D xD

[Dmaster]

lol, welp, not sure if you've ever done it, but you eat the ears first, then you fill it up with milk and you drink it! it make the choclate taste nice when you eat it and the milk taste good too:3

[Sexy Sheva]

*glomps*

Rawr

Hey everyone 8D

[Random Angel]

I love eating the ears but I'd never put anything in it...I will next time though xD Thanks for the idea

[Heaven's Angel]

hmm... I may fill mine with yogurt :3 but that is a smart idea! =D

hiya, cupcake! =D
wanna rp with meh? >>

[Random Angel]

how did my post change color? >.<

[Aura]

Now that I hear everyone saying they have a chocolate bunny I want one now lol

[Sexy Sheva]

hmm... I may fill mine with yogurt :3 but that is a smart idea! =D

hiya, cupcake! =D
wanna rp with meh? >>

YES

After i post a Gir drawing :P

[Saintlikesgirls]

isn't there already one?

[Dmaster]

hey destinystar, can irp' with you... i need something to do.. :sleepy:

and ican't believe none of you's thought of filling it! it's delicous and makes the perfect cup! but word from the wise DON'T even try to make tea i it! it melts and you have boiling hot water all the way down your legs BURNING you!

[Saintlikesgirls]

sorry bout post above....

uhmm... could i join?

and once again... isnt there already a writers family?

[Random Angel]

I wanna rp with yall


and I thought about it but never did it

[Aura]

sorry bout post above....

uhmm... could i join?

and once again... isnt there already a writers family?

Yes there is but nobody really replied in it.It really doesn't bother me that Dmaster made a new one.

[Dmaster]

SORRY! and Unsaintly Saint, i need a title!

[Aura]

Its fine with me.

[Saintlikesgirls]

yeah i know i was just wondering if i was 'accepted' first XD
uhmm how about...
emo Saint?

[Dmaster]

Unsaintly Saint - Emo saint? :sleepy: if you want it but i would put a little more effort into it if i was you...

[Saintlikesgirls]

i dont really know what else......
Musical Typer? i dunno...

[Dmaster]

... ok... *sigh*

[Heaven's Angel]

<_<

>_>

hai, Saint :3

[Saintlikesgirls]

hi XD
my fillaz own your fillers

[khhottie30]

Can I join?

[Dmaster]

sure, what title do you want?

[khhottie30]

Hmm...

How about "Spiritual Storyteller"?

[Dmaster]

ok. i'll add you now!

[Saintlikesgirls]

ello ello ello?

[Near-to-Tears]

What's going on 'ere then?

lol, that reminds of the cops today XD

[khhottie30]

Hello, everyone!

[Sexy Sheva]

:glomp: Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

[khhottie30]

Hey, Sarah!

What's up?

[Sexy Sheva]

lots and lots of homework :s

[Dmaster]

Do you want me to help?

[Sexy Sheva]

Do you want me to help?

xD


at 3:00am i was asleep :p

Meh, I got it done =P


Over 100 problems in algebra o__o

[Near-to-Tears]

Algebra is evilness incarnate...

[khhottie30]

I hate algebra.

One time, my teacher was gonna make the entire class do 20 trinomial problems for homework.

And I was going to a concert that night.

But her aide asked her if we could do the work tomorrow, and luckily she said yes.

[Saintlikesgirls]

lol are you all in algebra 1 or 2?

[Heaven's Angel]

I was suppossed to be in Algebra 1, but my mom held me back because that's the highest class at my school, so they'd have nothing to teach me next year... so I'm in Course 3...

But I like algebra ._.

[Near-to-Tears]

I have no idea what any of that means. :3

I just ignore the teacher when he starts on algebra.

[Heaven's Angel]

lol... XD XD

I just got a weird text message... O_o

[khhottie30]

lol are you all in algebra 1 or 2?

Algebra 1.

I'm in 8th grade.

[Saintlikesgirls]

i was in algebra 1 last year *shrugs*

[Near-to-Tears]

Again: not a clue D:

[tummer]

hey everybody.

[Saintlikesgirls]

Again: not a clue D:

pre alg - 8th
alg - 9th
geo - 10th
alg 2 - 11th
trig/others i dunno... - 12th...

[Near-to-Tears]

I think I get it...

Heya Tummer

[Sexy Sheva]

Hi family =D


Oh god, you're talkign about algebra and i have algebra homework tonight ;_;


its so hard D:

[Saintlikesgirls]

tis not... alg 1 im guessing?

[Sexy Sheva]

tis not... alg 1 im guessing?

Yupppppppppp D:

[Saintlikesgirls]

easy.... awit till next year.... i was in honors algebra 1 and it was so easy... now im in honors geometry so much more harder than alg...

[Random Angel]

soooo whats up everyone?

[Sexy Sheva]

soooo whats up everyone?

I just posted a new picture :3


Yourself?

[Random Angel]

I just posted a new picture :3


Yourself?

I had coffee flavored candy

[Sexy Sheva]

I had coffee flavored candy

yuckie D:


:P

I had a marshmallow sparkle bunny with a small chocolate egg in its hand :3

(It was about 1 inch long and 1/2 an inch wide >_>)


I just gave DestinyStar her 3rd rep gem :3

[Random Angel]

yuckie D:


:P

I had a marshmallow sparkle bunny with a small chocolate egg in its hand :3

(It was about 1 inch long and 1/2 an inch wide >_>)


I just gave DestinyStar her 3rd rep gem :3

That's awesome

[Heaven's Angel]

*hugs cupcake* I <3 u ^^

[Destined]

oh man, was I the only one here who actually had class today?

[Heaven's Angel]

umm... i guess so ._.

I'm one spring break this week :P

[Random Angel]

oh man, was I the only one here who actually had class today?

I went to school but left early

[Near-to-Tears]

Bank Holiday. Nearly the whole country has the day off XD

[Random Angel]

Bank Holiday. Nearly the whole country has the day off XD

you little lucky punk

[Destined]

that's cool. I wish i had today off for easter but didn't. Anyone written anything while i was gone?

[Heaven's Angel]

I wrote a poem in the original work section >>

[Near-to-Tears]

you little lucky punk

*Sings*
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair
In seventy-seven and sixty-nine revolution was in the air
I was born too late into a world that doesn't care
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair

[Random Angel]

*Sings*
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair
In seventy-seven and sixty-nine revolution was in the air
I was born too late into a world that doesn't care
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair

Never heard that... ..I'll give you something to wish for

[Saintlikesgirls]

*Sings*
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair
In seventy-seven and sixty-nine revolution was in the air
I was born too late into a world that doesn't care
Oh I wish I was a punk rocker with flowers in my hair

you're a bit hyper.....

[khhottie30]

I'm trying to write a song.

It's gonna be called "So (Un)Lucky".

[Heaven's Angel]

*lays down* I'm really bored... -_-

[Near-to-Tears]

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=yyapY97ugNk

That was mean RA ; _ ;

[Random Angel]

*lays down* I'm really bored... -_-

Awww...we can't have bored people!

*picks up and dances*

DANCE NOW!


I'll look and I didnt mean to be mean T-T

[Near-to-Tears]

Dance I tell you DANCE!

*hugs RA*

*Continues to sing*

[Heaven's Angel]

*whines* i dun wanna dance D:

[Random Angel]

Everyone dance!

*hugs dem*

I got something for you if you wait just a few seconds dem

[Dmaster]

*sits down and reads* Hey, has anyone else BESIDES me read Rowan of Rin? or at least a book in the series?

[Near-to-Tears]

*Does the Macarena whist standing on a table* XD XD

:3

Oooh... Present :D

[Random Angel]

*sits down and reads* Hey, has anyone else BESIDES me read Rowan of Rin? or at least a book in the series?

*tiltes head8 never heard of it

*Does the Macarena whist standing on a table* XD XD

:3

Oooh... Present :D

you might already of seen these and I just got them in the last couple of seconds >.<

http://s181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Near/

[Near-to-Tears]

I like... never read these days D:

Squeeeee! NEAR NEAR NEAR NEAR! *Huggles* :3 *Runs around happily*

[Random Angel]

I like... never read these days D:

Squeeeee! NEAR NEAR NEAR NEAR! *Huggles* :3 *Runs around happily*

Yay~ I made you happy *runs around with*


I've been reading only manga lately...

[Saintlikesgirls]

not reading anything anymore....

[Dmaster]

damn... well has anyone read Ranger's Apprentice?

and let's see if this works...
Ladies and gentleman please, would you bring your attention to me.

[khhottie30]

Hello!

Again.

[Random Angel]

damn... well has anyone read Ranger's Apprentice?

and let's see if this works...
Ladies and gentleman please, would you bring your attention to me.

*stares at in awe*

[Near-to-Tears]

*Tackles RA while she's looking at Dmaster* >D

My evil plot suceeded!

[Saintlikesgirls]

....weirdos....

[Random Angel]

*Tackles RA while she's looking at Dmaster* >D

My evil plot suceeded!

*is too much in awe to notice she been talcked*

[Heaven's Angel]

I'm leaving... be back in a couple hours! ^-^

[Near-to-Tears]

....weirdos....
Hai.

*is too much in awe to notice she been talcked*
lolz

by Destiny. *waves* I won't see you tell much later though.

<_< >_>

*tackles Saint*

[Random Angel]

bye....did someone call me weird?

[Near-to-Tears]

Join the tackling of the UnSaintly Saint for he insulted us!

[Random Angel]

But I am weird


*talckes saint*

[Saintlikesgirls]

*on the floor* uph....

[khhottie30]

Dogpile!

*tackles UnSaintly Saint*

[Near-to-Tears]

Same here, but he intended to in**** us which is insulting :3

Triple Tackle! lol

[Aura]

Algebra isn't that hard.Well for me.I'm in Geometry B and its ok.Just as long as you pay attention.


Anyways what's up?:)

[Random Angel]

having a dog pile


lol

[Near-to-Tears]

Come join the glomping of Saint :3

[Aura]

The glomping of Saint?O.o lol

[Near-to-Tears]

lol, we're all tackling Saint. XD

HE'S BEING EMO IN A BAD WAY! >O

[Random Angel]

lol, we're all tackling Saint. XD

HE'S BEING EMO IN A BAD WAY! >O

YES! >D fill

[Aura]

Then shame on him for being emo in a bad way lol

[Saintlikesgirls]

X|.........

[khhottie30]

I think we killed him...

[Random Angel]

YAY~ I mean booo! I mean... I have no idea what I mean...

[Aura]

Yeah I think we did...

[khhottie30]

Should we have a funeral or throw a party?

Or both?

[Random Angel]

Neither....both. A party funneral

[Aura]

Lets have a vote...I choose both XP

[khhottie30]

Anyone opposed?

...

Then it's settled: we're gonna throw a party funeral!

[Aura]

Ok whose invited?Everybody in this family?



Aww I need to go.I have homwork to do:( Bye everybody.

[Random Angel]

Awwwwwwwwwwww


And just for the record it was my idea xD

[Saintlikesgirls]

i....u..... nevermind.....

[Random Angel]

i....u..... nevermind.....

I kid!! I wuv you!! *hugs*

[Saintlikesgirls]

*is hugged AGAIN*

[Sexy Sheva]

Hi famiy :3

[Dmaster]

Hi everyone... i need something to do... hey why don't we post links to a amv or something of our fav song for awhile?

mine (http://youtube.com/watch?v=MlvVI05BDOI)

oh and random question: does anyone else besides me ever feel like they're gonna end up replaced? (Demi please don't hurt me...)

[Heaven's Angel]

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=46752

there's this movie i made... it looks like yaoi in the beginning and i didn't mean for it to ._.

and yes, I get that feeling quite frequently...

[Dmaster]

okay.. .normally i wouldn't watch yoai but i'll take your word for it and watch it anyway >_<

yeah... well, i actually have proof i'll be replaced if i left >_<

[Heaven's Angel]

it's not really yaoi, it just sort of seems like it >.<

... i feel as if I've already been replaced...

[Dmaster]

lol, ok.

really? how?

[Near-to-Tears]

Someone say yaoi?

*Smacks Dmaster over the head with her Death Note* Don't make more people emo! Bad enough with Saint with you making everyone else into little stero-types!

And how my Nobody? *Hugs*

[Dmaster]

lol, hey Demi...

*rubs back of head* sorry... >_< it started of as a random Q though...

[Heaven's Angel]

no... nobody said the "Y" word... >> XD

... It's a bit of a confusing story...

[Dmaster]

yeah... no one said it <_< >_>

okay...

[Near-to-Tears]

lol. *Goes to Emo courner with an LxLight doujinshi*

Come on Dest, what's wrong?

[Heaven's Angel]

lol... XD

... It's a bit of an on and off thing. I keep feeling like my best friend (Jap>>) is replacing me with another one of my friends, and they keep hanging out just by themselves... I feel like she doesn't like being friends with me anymore... T-T

[Dmaster]

lol

oh... well Demi can offer you more advide there, but still, if she replaces you she's not worth it... and if you're like me and just go on thinking you're not worth it then, like me, you have issues... you're a fun person and so if other people don't want t orecognize that, it'stheir lose. (and i've only known you a short time...)

[Near-to-Tears]

Oh Mah gawrsh...O_O Buttsechs!! Eww... << >> *Thows book at Dmaster* XD

I had that same issue a while back... Sucks doesn't it?
All I can say is try and stay friends with her, but you have to face the fact that maybe you won't be best friends anymore. And you'll have to settle for "Friend" status instead. I know that sucks but reletionships change. Spesh aroud your age. I'm now not friends with anyone I was perticulary close to at your age, and that was only three years ago. Sorry I couldn't help to much more.

[Heaven's Angel]

yeah... I had three friends when I first moved to this neighborhood... she's the only one who hasn't moved so far... I just can't bear the thought of us not being friends anymore... it's the longest friend relationship that I've ever had... 3 years... T-T

[Dmaster]

as Demi said relationships change. can't say no more because i'll just make things worse...

[Near-to-Tears]

You'll still be friends sweetie. Just not as close as you once were. You'll make new friends, life goes on. Everything has it's time, just maybe it's you friendships time.

And if you go emo on me too D I swear I shall tie you and Saint together like L and Light and see what haapens >O

[Heaven's Angel]

Yeah... but i don't want our relationship to drift apart... 'cuz that makes me know that soon we won't be friends... because every day I see them hanging out more, I get even more jealous, and sometimes a little angry at her... I'm kind of afraid that one day I'll do something stupid to make her hate me...

[Dmaster]

Stress-relievers? and what i meant by that is have a go at people who are used to taking it like meh and Demi. it should make you feel better.

O.o wait... he wouldn't do anything would he?

[Near-to-Tears]

Yeah... but i don't want our relationship to drift apart... 'cuz that makes me know that soon we won't be friends... because every day I see them hanging out more, I get even more jealous, and sometimes a little angry at her... I'm kind of afraid that one day I'll do something stupid to make her hate me...
That's just something you'll have to trust yourself not to do. That's what I had to do and it seems you're far more controlled with your emotions then I am.

Stress-relievers? and what i meant by that is have a go at people who are used to taking it like meh and Demi. it should make you feel better.

O.o wait... he wouldn't do anything would he?
lol, but don't choose me. I'm already too emoed for the week.

No! At least it's doubtful any road.

[Heaven's Angel]

controlled? Bah! I only wish... >>

[Dmaster]

lol, but don't choose me. I'm already too emoed for the week.

ok. That means you can use me as a stress-reliever or find your own.

*sighs* ok... (if Saint should read this) sorry if that little scene insulted ya Saint, but i dun kno you as well as Demi does...

[Heaven's Angel]

ok. That means you can use me as a stress-reliever or find your own.

*sighs* ok... (if Saint should read this) sorry if that little scene insulted ya Saint, but i dun kno you as well as Demi does...

I'm a little confused as to wat ur talking about... O_o

[amythest]

can i join?

amythest- organized and rediculously exotic organism (oreo for short)

[Dmaster]

lol, soz. a better explanation is htat my version of a stress reliever, is someone who lets you have a go at them ands stuff... i've been Demi's a few times, and i doubt anyone can throw worse than her (no offense Demi...)

and sure thing Amethyst!

[Heaven's Angel]

ohh... I get it... but it isn't really right to put others down... <_>

oh and srry... me and amy r using the same computer and we sort of got mixed up on who posted what XP

[Dmaster]

it's ok. ^-^ so long as you don't actually mean to insult me i'm fine. or you can do it the rough way and have me pester/annoy the living daylights outta you till you do... what happens with Demi...

lol, it's okay!

[amythest]

hi DS... you spelled my username wrong... yai know i spelled it amYthEst because i wanted people to call me amy not ame... ^.^ so ya...

[Near-to-Tears]

And he wonder's why I take a swing at him from time to time XP

[Dmaster]

And he wonder's why I take a swing at him from time to time XP

no i don't.

[Heaven's Angel]

er... do u guys know each other in real life? >>

and I dunno... using people as a stress reliever isn't right... yet I let people use me as one all the time... O_o
I'm so hypocritical XD