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Skittles
03-26-2008, 08:27 AM
I'm not much of a writer. I'm more of a drawer, so Im sorry if this doesn't make sense.Help would be nice, I'd really appreciated it! <3
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Prologue ~
Rivers of blood, flowing down. Sigh. The rain pored hard tonight. “You won’t be able to tell we were here. BG will pay big money!” I didn’t care, yet another person has died at my hands, another night, again. I griped my hand hard.. My weapon if chose tonight, was my Hima. My gun, gleamed as the water flowed within itself. Reflecting off the slight glimpse site of night. I never like doing this, but it was destiny, Im told. It’s my life job, I was told. There’s nothing I can do, nothing.
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It's a manga I've been working on. I was trying to put it into words. Dx
I'll continue if wanted, heh. xD

Heaven's Angel
03-26-2008, 02:27 PM
lol u used the word "Destiny"!!! XD

I like it! It's kind of... creepy... but it's good writing, no doubt ^^

the only problem I see is in your title. Did u mean to put Siners? or did you mean to put "Sinners"? >>

The Fifth Element
03-27-2008, 07:39 PM
Tis good...a wee bit confusing but good nonetheless. Please continue.


Help would be nice, I'd really appreciated it!
and if you wanted me to, I can help

Skittles
03-28-2008, 09:56 AM
lol u used the word "Destiny"!!! XD

I like it! It's kind of... creepy... but it's good writing, no doubt ^^

the only problem I see is in your title. Did u mean to put Siners? or did you mean to put "Sinners"? >>

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Tis good...a wee bit confusing but good nonetheless. Please continue.



and if you wanted me to, I can help

It's a Sin. xDD
I can never get these things going, Dx

If you want, yes please! :3