Body Language (Short Singing Clip)

[Mike]

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This is my first time recording and adding a short clip of me singing Jesse McCartney's latest song "Body Language". I haven't taken voice lessons or anything, so it won't sound perfect, but I gave it a shot. I usually just dub Roxas/Ven's voice, but wanted to go to the next level. What do you guys think? Suggestions at all?

Link: http://www.box.net/shared/9f3eo6sjl6

[Chevalier]

Ehm...It feels like you're holding back. Don't do that.

In regards to the voice and all, It's pretty clear that you need to work in controlling the higher-ranged notes in the song. And try to avoid being nasal.

Overall, it wasn't bad, but it lacks that essential control and firmness in the voice.