You Decide

Me and J.D. 129 had a rap battle
You guys decide who won. And no we do not hate/dislike eachother in anyway. It was all in good fun.

Today 12:54 PMJ.D.129
Alright man, here

I'm way past greatness...you're barely fine
ya skills probably ain't nothin', compared to mine
listen closely, cause my message is sublime
this ain't the the time, to be spittin' some lame rhymes
this is mad flow, you know you can't mess with it
jump on the stage and leave ya fans desolate
I'll blow up fast you're moving damn slow
I a fukin' arteest like Vincent Van Gough
Cinderella story, without the horse and carriage
life's a *****, I'll leave you without the marriage
go to war with it, make you divorce it
I only spit the truth, yeah I'm on some Al gore ****
I drive the opposite of a 4-6, your like the
cereal rabbit...you can't handle any more tricks
I got fiends outside here, smokin rock
like Jay-Z said, show me what you got


Today 02:14 PMGhetto
Time to dust off my mic and play the rhyme game
But I'll be sure to finish within your time frame
Since I know it's almost past your bed time
I'm a murderer so call this a dead rhyme
Like a vetran who just came back from the border
I'm crazy with post traumatic stress disorder
And I'm gonna go hard like it's the fourth quarter
So just sit and watch like a sports reporter
My vocab is unlimited, but you are finite
I just sleep by day and kill your people by night
I spit deadly poison worse cyanide
Hard body ***** so call me iron-hide
And I'm techno-robotic like a transformer
I stay in the street like a street performer
Failure and success, later not the former
I'm changing the world like a terraformer
And the first change will be to end your life
Which was filled with failure and endless strife


Today 02:59 PMJ.D.129
Wanna live the American dream, I'm livin' it
my rhymes could light you up and smoke you like a cigarette
used to have fakeness around and got rid of it
me bussin off with this flow is so imminant
I ain't forgetin it, I can still remember the days
where lyricists could rip it up in so many ways
but today, its' dead and I know that you hear it
in that case like Jesus I'm invokin' the spirit
some **** has gotta go
vital to the survival though
*****es jumpin' off the game yellin' Geronimo
your is flow mono, my **** is stereo
and your chance for improvein' on it is very low
I'm a hoodlum but never the principal's office
no matter how hard you try you can't stop this
got my hands up, but you can't nail mine
now I'm sittin workin on my bars like jail time
and when I spit I set tracks on fire
make *****es lose they mind like Mariah


Today 03:14 PMGhetto
Never in the office? I used to live there
I was a free spirit so I didn't even care
But I'm different know so envoke my spirit
Look deep inside and learn to fear it
Potential so raw that hell couldn't hold it
My flow is wild, no one can controll it
My **** is just straight up outrageous
Like going through the bible and tearing out pages
Life is a movie and you're a comedy
I'm a documentary about the world econmy
From the mind of Peter Joseph, call me Zeitgeist
I will sieze world power and pull a little heist
You're a lyrical hostage and you wont survive
I'll cut ya head off, eat your brains and thrive
I'm the answer to the problem *****, I solve
But you will die because you can't evolve


Today 06:56 PMJ.D.129
Lived in the office? something you should get used to
that's after the ****ing army recruits you
you'll be another shirt, another suit and tie
nothin really special, and I don't wonder why
you wanna get deep? like 10 feet hail?
you say you're the economy cause you're a big fail
comedy? I'm the Dark Knight you can't face it
give you a bad ending like Freddy vs. Jason
I'm the mutha****in general, 22 biscuit
I run this ****...you ain't even enlisted
you probably dead broke, you should go and fix it
I'm a playa, you on some p u s s y whipped b i t c h s h i t
man this is the last straw,
when I ****, i burn rubber like nascar
you're outrageous? ya, ya damn right
you're like a female comin' to a man's fight
you just standin there and you ain't fightin
evoke my spirit? man I told you no bitin'


Today 07:40 PMGhetto
You hate the army and love in the same rhyme
That was contradiction and I caught you this time
Or maybe I misunderstood
But that still aint good
Gotta make your rhymes clear
So I can see as well as hear
As I fill you with fear
Since you are no where near
me
I'm the beast
look me up in the bible
I am the one that wins without using a rifle
Joker was a comedy but ledger was a tragedy
Since tragicly he faded out of this reality
But I kick back and laugh
Because you aren't even half
Half as good as me
As good as I can be
And if you aint as good as me
Then what the hell you gonna be?
You just talk about puss-c
So its easy for me to see
You just like the industry
Which does not include me
You just run your mouth about sex and drugs
So take some salt you stupid slug
You have no awareness of the world around you
You are lucky that I even found you
So I can end you and your stupidity
And unlike you, they can't get rid of me
So I'll blow you to hell with a bit of C4
Then kick back and laugh like no one did it before

We each went three times. Read em and tell us who you think won.
My last one was long but the flow was off o.o

OH SHAT I FORGOT THE POLL DX

 

To be honest I'm not to sure.

So did you guys prepare this or was it off the top of your head's?

 

Top of the head.

 

Thats pretty damn gewd.

I'll read it over again, then I'll give you my final decision.

 

Me too, but wasn't completely fair because both of us had to type it which gave us more time to think. But it was still off the top.

 

J.D.129 had a good flow and kicked ass at the beginning and had good flow. Ghetto you did too and if you had good flow at the last one you would have laid J.D.129 flatter then a 15 cent hooker so sorry man but I think J.D.129 won but you guys were really close.

 

****, guys. I didn't know you two were snapping like that.

Anyway, both of you had your times and were really original and did your things. You guys really are a perfect match, but I have to go with J.D. 129. I'm sorry, but that cereal rabbit line was just fire. xD But yeah.

 

o.o
I b lewzin
C'mon people, more votes! More publicity!

 

I agree with the 2 users above me. (hippie & VGN)

 

You should have said 'Dawg' somewhere in there. Anyway, I have to agree with *HJ* here.​

 

tell your friends everyone! lol

 

You both suck. jklol

 

Well I've pretty much lost this one, but we shall battle again B|

lul trig I almost fell for that

 

I love how as soon as one of you starts cussing, the other does too. =D

I thought they were both pretty decent. I think structurally, I like J.D. 129's more. But Ghetto had some epic topic's. :3 Zeitgeist reference wins.

 

Yay! Go Zeitgeist! I knew that was gonna help me xD

 

lol, this sounds bad, but what is that?

 

www.thezeitgeistmovement.com

www.zeitgeistmovie.com

Only the most inspirational documentary ever. :3

 

Quoted for truth. Watch it.

 

Guys, you should teach me how to rap one day.
However, I think Ghetto gets the win, but you both did excellent raps.

 

Teaching, eh? Interesting....if were to teach you it would be like a learning experiece for me as well.