Poem: Chaos Flame

Okay, this is a poem I wrote when I was 13...so please don't laugh.



Battles that rage on

The place without dawn

The fight that never ends

And where wounds never mend


Blazing fire

Painful chaos

Never to intertwine

Never to be fine


This never ever ends

My mind always bends

I'm always caught in a bind

This war in my mind


I'm lost in the bowels

Of the emotional fowels

That lead me to confusion

And never to revolation


I'm stranded in the dark

With no backbone or bark

I am not the same, and yet I am...



What do you guys think of it?

 

Very good FireNanaki.

 

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! You should post somemore of your poems. I'd love to read them

 

Thanks you guys!! I was kinda shy to post it, really....

 

As I said before, I think if you want to post anymore you should. *shruges* But if you dont want to you dont have too, but i think you should :)

 

Sure, I will!!! I have A BUNCH that I wrote last year, so I shall post them.

 

I really like your poem, great job. You should totally post more of you poems.

 

Thanks, I will!! Not right now, but I might post another tonight.

 

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I might post somemore too, but first i would have to find them........... Ill be looking for other poems that you wrote :D

 

WOAH! You go girl! That was good. I wish I could write poems like that... to get out some stress. But I pretty much suck at all writing of any kind. So I guess I'll just stick with running to relieve stress... just something that any random person like me can do. ANYWHO... post more! :D

 

Thanks!! And no worries!! You shall find a talent sooner or later! Everyone's good at something!!

 

FUN!!!!!! Running is awsome. But to relive my stress I sing. Yep, im weird

 

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I sing sometimes.... for fun.... if no ones around or it might kill them O_o ..... last time it happened

Me: lalalalalaaa
person: AHHHH! ::dies::
Me: Uh-oh I'ma be in big trouble for this! :: pulls out a stick::
:: pokes lifeless body::


HAHA....j/k

 

lol. That's how bad my singing is!! I WANT to sing good..but whatever. I deal with my graceless noise that I claim is that of singing....Why am I like this?? O.o;

 

I have no idea if my singing is singing or not... O_o
I'd be tooooooooooooooooooo shy to sing in front of ppl anyway.

 

Same here. I'd have to be drunk to sing infront of other people....either that or be making an AMV that I'm TRYING to embarress myself in....But those situations are VERY unlikely.....

 

Same....... My audiences are my shamppo, soap, conditioner, and water!:D

 

Lol... me too sometimes... but then it happens again.
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Me: lalalalalalaaaaaa
(my cat is sitting bathroom window)
Cat: MEOW!!! ARRRRR! ::falls out of window onto floor::
Me: ::grabs towel:: Oh man she blacked out! NOT AGAIN!
:: pulls out stick:: :: pokes unconcious body::
I'ma be in even more trouble now!









:p j/k again :p

 

Seriously..I NEVER want ANYONE to hear me sing....Only my enemies. lol.

 

My friends actually think i sing okay But I DISAGREE WITH THEM!!!!!! But i can only go high (like way up there) and hold it for about 10 seconds and then brake the window....................