Poem: Friends By My Side

Yeah...another poem by me. This one I did a few weeks ago....Uhh..yeah...



Standing in the darkness alone

Cold straight down to the bone

I hate this sad feeling

My heart beats slow, almost sealing


Then the light shone down on me

So far bright, I can barely see

They stood there all along

That is where I belong


Since then I am bathed in light

I won't give it up without a fight

There's no turning back now

And no reason for them to bow


But the darkness still rests inside

The struggle has never died

I'm on the edge of darkness

Grasping onto the light of bless


My friends are there, though, by my side

There's no reason for my to cry

Reaching the light is the key

So, my friends, you'll see...



That's for ALL of my friends!!! Even though it sucks...lol.

 

That's pretty good!

 

Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was...

 

That was pretty good.

 

Thats so beautiful! That has a lot of feeling in it and thats what makes it so good.:)

 

Thanks! I ALWAYS write poems with feeling...

 

Pretty good.
I could say more but it would be a page of rambling on about Kingdom Hearts and my own writing and all the things I'm saying now. Only a page of it.

 

Uhh..okay? (possibly taking as a compliment..?)