Poem: Fade

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  1. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Okay...I'm just typing this now....



    ~Fade~



    How would you feel

    If I never were to heal

    If I fell into the dark abyss

    Would I be loved? Would I be missed?


    If I were to fade

    The sword would be laid

    I'd be alone

    Soon to be bone


    Does anyone really care?

    Would anyone not be able to bear?

    Maybe it's be best

    If I would endlessly rest


    Would tears flow from one's face?

    Would my heart slow to a pace?

    Would my soul really die?

    Or has it already? Am I just a lie?


    Maybe someone would call to me

    But that is something I'll never see

    I guess I am ment to stand in this lonely light

    With no one else in sight...



    So...what do you guys think?

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  2. Rosey Chaser

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    I love it. Its so heartfelt and it seems so true. keep up the good work!
     
  3. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Its nice...kinda sad. But still nice none the less.
     
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  5. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    ....Thanks you guys....
     
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