ha i wrote this one when i finnished my test early today The unbroken gaze I gaze into the depths There a shadow lies Ever piercing me A shallow gloom amidst the rain Of sparkling inky blue Ringed with black as if in a cage but that does not break my gaze, through the fog of mornings wrath you shine forth and clear my mind of worry and woe when the light becomes to strong a dark does steady me to see what life and love truly are now into mask less life i stare and pierce its soul like it did mine but there’s no shadow any more rather now there’s light instead light that once was mine for now we share this light and both do gaze unblinkingly until the end they cannot hide your wisdom, your heart, your eyes
Well, not as good as your other one, but good, so, I'd say a 7.5-ish to a 8/10. Did you ever finish it? Cause it's just leaving a gap.
