Ar Tonelico: A Lost Melody

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  1. Melody_of_Elemia Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Ar Tonelico: A Lost Melody

    Light...Its what reyvateils think of. Singing hymns to keep the work at peace but three disasters that happend have change everything. A reyvatiels have stop singing. As if the ancient words have been lost forever.
    reyvateils have lost their ability to sing. Now a group of reyvateils go on epic jounery with knights of Elemia to bring their abilities to life.

    There's the story of this lost melody. You can create a reyvateil of a knight. Here is set up:

    Reyvatiel set up:

    Name:
    Age:
    Generation:Class D to A,pure blooded-B reyvatiel or an Orgin Reyvateil
    Song Magic: 5 max for attack
    2 for healing
    background story:
    Description: As in what she looks like.

    Knight of Elemia:

    Name:
    Age:
    Weapon:
    Background story:
    Description:

    Ok heres is my Reyvateil.

    Name: Kimiko Hayashi
    Age:16
    Generation: Orgin Reyvateil
    Song Magic: Energy ball
    Lighting Strike
    Ice Storm
    Ring of Fire
    Healing Angel
    Reincarnation Angel
    Background Story:
    She lives in a small village called The Skwate Village but was attacked. Her family died and had to live on her own. She learned how to grathmeld and to create song magic outside of her cosmosphere. She loves singing for world peace and love.
    Description:
    Has long black hair, icy blue eyes, her Skwate Village outfit.




     
  2. Birth By Sleep 13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    This will be fun, like always.

    Name:Lakra Suzuki
    Age:17
    Generation:Pure-blooded Reyvateil.
    Song Magic:Plasma Ball
    Lighting Wrath
    Hells Fire
    Cage of Light
    Phoenix Light
    Last Breath (healing)
    Life Generate
    Background Story:
    Lakra lives in Platina and of course is a reyvateil. She doesn't use her song magic very much so she uses a baton and is highly expericed in physical combat. She has a small ring that turns into her baton. She is learning how to use her song magic from Tastiella of Em Phanya.
    Descripion:
    Has icy blue hair along with green eyes. She an outfit similar to this outfit

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  3. Zexion King's Apprentice

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    Knight of Elemia:

    Name: Eien Ishida (in japanese ishida Eien) <actually this is my real name>
    Age:17
    Weapon:Lance Named "Justice"
    Background story:Eien is just a child(10) when Mir started the trouble,his parents died on a accident.all he got is nothingness. lyner is the one who make him obsessed about the Knight thing and teach him some of lyner's moves and experience.when he grows up (17) he joins the Knights of elemia to show lyner what've he learn past 7 years , and how to protect others
    Description:he has Black hair ,red eyes, a lance on his back and Elemia Armor.
     
  4. Kingdom_Girl_1513 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    This is awesome. Creating a reyvateil or knight of Elemia. This thread is awesome. Anyway,

    Name:Natsumi Nakamura
    Age:22
    Generation:Orgin Reyvateil
    Background story: Natsumi lives in Em Phanya with Tastiella Du Lu. She know more about the Teru Tribe than anyone in Ar Tonelico. She's highly skilled in her song magic and never let anyone dive in her cosmosphere. Why you ask, she doesn't want anyone to see her true feelings because in the real world, she's very certain.
    Descripion: Has red blond hair, brown eyes and wear purple armor mostly. She somtimes wears a lovely outdoors dress with red roses on them.
     
  5. Zexion King's Apprentice

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    hey!, when the game starts..?
     
  6. Melody_of_Elemia Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Well we can start it now if you want....
     
  7. Zexion King's Apprentice

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    Lol..^^
    you do it First ^^
    i'll catch up with you girls ^^
     
  8. Melody_of_Elemia Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Ok then.

    In Platina, Lakra practices her combat skills hoping to become the first female Knight of Elemia. She wants to make a difference in the world but as for me, Kimiko Hayashi, the leader of the Knights of Elemia, I can't let her join well because its against the law for a female to join the Knights of Elemia. Lakra is a reyvateil, btu she isn't very expericed in her song magic and it takes a while to learn how to use them.
    As Lakra practices, dark clouds covered the blue sky. Lakra looked up and said
    "Oh my gosh" Then, Thunder was heard. Eien Ishida, the head Knight, ran to behind her and said
    "Come on, we have to get outta here". Lakra looked at him and said
    "If we're gonna stop this, we have to stay here and fight." Eien ingnored her and grab her by the arm and they began running to the see the governor of Plantina.
     
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    When they got in the building, Leard Barsett, Lyner's father and governor of Plantina, stood up and walked up toward them. He stop once her reached the edge of Lakra's hand. She looked up him as he looked back then he said
    "Hello Eien. What's going out there? I here people screaming." Eien got up and helped Lakra up and then said
    " Well as you can see sir, The sky is pitch black, thunder is being heard and creatures attacking Platina."
    "And who is this young lady here?" Eien looked at Lakra. She began to wonder why she was even here.
    "Well I really don't know her name. I just ran into as a went outside."
    Too Lakra, Eien looked stupid for not asking her name while they running their way in here. But still she had to speak up and say her name.
    " I'm Lakra, the person who been trying to become a Knight of Elemia for the past year now."
    Leard had w surpirsed look on his face when finally met the girl who been trying to join the knights of Elemia.​
     
  10. Zexion King's Apprentice

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    tch..this is the debate between leard and eien...
    and then Eien said this to Leard Barsett
    "Sir.., can you let her Join..?"
    Leard Said..
    "hmmm..? what are you saying..!? she's A girl ! a knight of elemia must be A man!"
    Eien said..
    "I've Seen her Abilities for past few years.., and she has a material to be a knight!"
    Leard said..
    "you..how dare you Defy Me!"
    Lakra Said..
    "Eien please..Stop, you don't have to do this!"
    Eien Said..
    "I don't Care!, Just Let Her join the Knights of Elemia!"
    Leard Said..
    "Eien Ishida...For Now on..you Are Banished From Here!"
    *Eien and Lakra Shocked*
    Eien said..
    "Fine...! i'm leaving.."
    Lakra said..
    "Wait..! Eien!"
    Lakra chased Eien into the gate..
     
  11. Melody_of_Elemia Merlin's Housekeeper

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    "Why did you do that for me? I don't even know you and have you be stocking me or somthing."
    Eien looks at her. Too her, it looked like he was trying to think of answer.
    "Well...uhh, when you put that way Its just plain rude but know I haven't been stocking up. I walk pass her everyday and I see you pratice. Why do you want to be a Knight of Elemia anyway?"
    All of her the male family members have been knights of Elemia as the females have been Holy Maidens. Lakra wanted to be like her father but her mother was trainning her to be a Holy Maiden.
    "I'll tell you later first we have too find out whats causing all this trouble" Eien and Lakra ran off to the Altar of Aposles and saw viruses pouring out.
    "Aww man, not again."
    "huh..what?" Lakra said with a questioned look on her face.
    " Well this happend before. Hey i got an idea, If we defeat the person who did this, you just might become a knight of elemia"
    Lakra looked at him with a smile and took out her Baton.
    "Alright, Lets show them what we're made of"
     
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    The virus was hug but there was only one possiblity, Mir has returned to hate humans. Lakra began to attack the virus but she was hit to the ground in pain Eien looked back and ran to her.
    "Are you ok?" Eien asked her as he helped her up.
    "Yea, I'm fine but this virus, It's impossible to defeat. We're gonna have to find a cystal or somthing down in the Lower World. Let's go talk to Kimiko."
    Eien and Lakra ran off to find Kimiko. She the leader of the Knights of Elemia. Orginally, it was Shurelia but she just couldn't handle being a tower administrator and a leader of Elemia Knights, So Kimiko is now they're leader.
    Eien and Lakra were still in sreach for Kimiko until Eien saw her.

     
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    Sorry i'm kinda lazy..
    so i create it with dialogs.

    Eien: hey! Kimiko!*runs towards her*
    Kimiko:what is it Eien, is something wrong..?
    Eien: listen You've gotta Help!Lakra, Let's go!*grabs Kimiko's hand and then run*
    Lakra: OKay.
    Kimiko: Eien! What's the meaning of this!?
    Eien: you'll see...

    Eien shows her the virus..

    Eien:...see..
    Kimiko:whoa..that's huge..
    *ROAR* *the virus Roars*
    Lakra: we have to do something about it..
    Eien: Lakra!, you go distract it!
    Lakra: wh-what..? why..me..
    Eien: it's Okay.., don't be afraid. you'll be fine.
    Lakra: Okay..*runs to distract the virus* HEY! YOU! OVER HERE!!!
    *ROAR* *the virus roar and distracted*
    Eien: kimiko...
    Kimiko: huh..? what.?
    Eien: Let's combine your song and My strength..
    Kimiko: What..!? i'm not a reyvateil!
    Eien: Don't LIE!
    Kimiko: ......
    Eien: i know that you're a reyvateil..i often saw you singing..and crafts songs..
    Kimiko: *laugh* you got me..Okay! Eien Get Ready! *sings a Song*
    Eien: *Evil smile and the eyes is more red than before*..*laugh* I can Feel the Power.. GET READY YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING VIRUS!!! *attacks the virus and the virus vanished..*
    Lakra: yay! we did it! *HAPPY*
    Kimiko: phew..we did it..Eien..?
    Eien: ghh...*have a terrible headache*
    Kimiko: is something wrong..?!
    Lakra: Eien..
    Eien: i'm okay....don't worry about me.. you two just tell Leard about this..got it..?
    Kimiko: understood..
    Lakra: Eien..you sure you're okay..?
    Eien: JUST GO!!!
    Lakra: *gasp*
    Kimiko: Lakra let's go..
    Lakra: okay.. *lakra and Kimiko left*
    Eien: ngggh!..this headache..

    that's all..
    i'll post another one later..
     
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    Name: Okozawa
    Age: 19
    Weapon: gravity hammer
    Background story: He was born naturally as a knight of elemia. At the age of 17 though, he was killed during training, when accidently falling off of a cliff. As careless as it was of him, he was brought back to life by a Reyvatiel, who used her song to bring him back from the dead. He now had a large tatoo on his back, of which the magic has been insealed within. Though the one who did it ended up passing away, he can still stay alive as long as Reyvatiels can sing, but now that they may no longer sing, his life force is slowly depleting, making him weaker and weaker with time. Now his only hope is to join those who wish to help retrieve it by going with them, so that he may keep himself from dieing a second death
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    As Kimiko and Lakra walked to see Leard Barsett, Kimiko looked at Lakra.
    "Don't think these viruses are gone for good. They will come back soon. She will attack us."
    Lakra stopped thinking of Kimiko has just said.
    "She? How do you know this virus is a She?"
    "Well, this has happend before. The reyvateil that attacked us before, her name was Mir, The Mother Virus."


    That's all I got so far..someone continue
     
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    I'll finish it for you Misha...

    "Mi-Mir..I thought she was happy with her new life in Metafalica..Well guess I was wrong." Kimiko gave Lakra a smirk.
    "I guess something happened and she began to hate humans again. We have to stop but well need two of the best reyvateils to protect you and Eien on you-"
    Lakra looked at Kimiko with a look that meant "WHAT!"
    "Me and Eien on a journy..no way."
    "If you want help save Ar Tonelico then you and Eien are gonna have to fight. And I'll even help."
    Lakra looked down. A tear shed down her face. Kimiko saw the tear and began to worry..
    "I'm sorry..for yelling at you."
    "It's ok but how are we gonna to find the best reyvateil. I dont know any."
    Kimiko began to think of the best reyvateils. A smile grew on her face which meant she the best reyvateil.
    " We have to go to the Em Pheyna, in the Lower World."​
     
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    "Why there?"Lakra asked Kimiko
    "Miss.Natsumi Nakamura lives there and she is one of the powerful reyvateils that lives but as powerful as Mir of course." Kimiko and Lakra ran off to find Eien tell him they're plan. They got a the thing they needed and were off. They got to airship dock.
    "I take it we're taking airship to the Lower World."
    Eien amd Kimiko both looked at Lakra for saying something that stupid. They could walk they're way to the Lower World but that you take a Long time.
     
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    Yes..come join in our RPG.
     
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    Lazy as usual...

    Eien:tch...this..headache... dammit...!*eien suddenly remember what leard said to him* heheh..i got banished from here huh... i've got to get outta here..*eien left the elemia and travels into the lower world*

    somewhere at elemia..
    Kimiko: eien..? are you there..?
    Lakra: where could he be...?
    Kimiko:...hmm..do you got any clue where he'd go..?
    Lakra: *gasp*! *she remembers what leard said to eien*
    Kimiko: lakra?what is it..?
    Lakra: i remember...
    Kimiko: remember what..?
    Lakra: Leard banished him from here...
    Kimiko: WHAT!? then.... where could he be..?
    Lakra: don't ask me..i don't know..either.
    Kimiko: Let's Search For Him!
    Lakra: huh..?
    Kimiko: C'mon! *grabs her hand and go somewhere*
     
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