A silly poem-fic: Myde goes to a recital

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  1. MadDoctorMaddie I'm a doctor, not a custom title!

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    A silly poem-fic I came up with during my music schools recital. So you could say this is semi-based on a real life incident xD
    Nothing too special, but it was fun to write at least ^^''


    Little Myde goes to a recital​


    So tonight had had to be my big chance,
    that I had told everyone of in advance.
    Tonight was the night I was supposed to reach the stars.
    Oh how I'd waited for this day to come!

    I had practiced all the songs over and over so many times
    that I had thought I was losing my mind!
    Every note I had memorized in my head,
    even the ones I wasn't supposed to play.
    I was so exited about this,
    it was the time for the sitarist to shine!

    So then we had gotten on to the stage,
    had tuned our instruments, had done the little sound-check.
    Now all we could do was wait,
    as the audience piled in through the gate.
    In to the hall they came,
    ready to see me do what I did best.
    Oh, and the rest of the band had their fans too.

    Now it was time, the clock struck seven.
    I started to get nervous,
    what if I forgot what I was supposed to play?
    The others were relying on me,
    they'd even given me my sitar-solo,
    I couldn't screw up now!

    Then we started to play,
    and I felt the nerves melt away.
    Oh what a rush it was,
    to be there, in front of everyone,
    playing my heart out to them all,
    as they cheered us on.

    But I just had to glance up from the neck of my sitar,
    and what I saw nearly threw me off,
    I guess I hadn't been the center of attention after all.
    Now you guess who the true star of the show was.
    The music teachers young son, that's who.

    The silly little boy had rushed to the stage,
    as his mother had started to play.
    Oblivious to the 'ooh's and 'aah's around him,
    he went straight to the keyboard,
    and sat in his mothers lap.
    I could see how tempted he was to press the keys,
    it's a miracle that his mother kept him at bay!

    Our song had ended,
    and the audience gave us our standing ovation.
    But we all knew it wasn't completely ours to claim:
    That little boy had stolen the crowds hearts.

    Hope you enjoyed it <3​
     
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    Awww. That's bad. XD Ah well. I liked it. Amusing and fun. 8D
     
  3. MadDoctorMaddie I'm a doctor, not a custom title!

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    Thak you ^_^
    Ohh, I've done things to characters that are far worse than this >8D

    xD I thought you meant that the poem was bad at first, then I read it again... Misreading ftl.

    Thanks for the reviews ^.^''
     
  4. MadDoctorMaddie I'm a doctor, not a custom title!

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    Again, I could have been so much worse >83
    But thanks, I don't think my fic has been called creative before this 8D :glomp:​
     
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    You wanted me to reply so I guess I will ^^

    That was nice. Myde sounded completely like a bit younger version of you though xD