well here is an poem havnt done one in a while i hope you guys like it :) The time stand still as the crimson sun goes down telling us good night, I look at her my heart is torn and broken and i wish i could relive those memories that felt so right, we both looked down at the ground as the sad bitterness tells us whats now not the past, I would love to tell her that i love her and i dont want it to end but somethings we can never get past, our eyes fills with tears of regret wanting it to be something diffrent thinking about our moment, we walk away as the sun goes down as our love dies both of us wishing we did something different, returning home to lay on the bed looking up at the celling wishing, the picture I take out of my pocket showing a love that was so true that began in the past dissappearing, as the tears falls down my cheeks i wonder why is this happening, then i try to act the same the next day but a part of me is missing, i do the same routine ending up in my bed looking at the celling missing the love that was true but now dead as my hope and happyness began dissappearing by the bitter end.
our bodies die but our love stays forever Everything happened so fast we was smiling and now we lay down on the ground, We look at each other asking the same question will we hear each others last sound, Our sight becomes blurry as our bodies become numb, We look at each other smiling thinking about being dumb, The last bit of my strength i hold you close to me, She holds me close back cause the love she can see, The time stands still as our breaths slowly becomes less, I look at her and she looks at me as our bodies slowly becomes lifeless, we look at each feeling cold as our blood covers the ground beneath us, I can feel myself losing touch with life I look at her eyes as I stroke her hair, A peaceful embrace we do then our lips touch as our love stays in its lair, She rest her head on my shoulder as she slowly close her eyes entering the endless loneliness, I look at her and i rest my head on hers as I start to close my eyes I say one thing "i will be there by your side even after we die" I say to her not thinking about the bitter sadness, Our love makes our cold bodies become warm as our hearts beats slower, The rain starts to fall giving the scene a sad shower, Our last thoughts are about the memories of our life as our conscious continues to drop, We stay close to each other as our hands stay touched we whisper "i love you " to each other as our lives stop, Our bodies die but our spirits goes up to the sky with our hands touching as we leave the world behind us.
Lovely. 8D I can feel the ' love' in this poem. And it rhymed very well. But there were a few grammer issues. But otherwise it's good. :]
yeah sure will and i typed this up after i watched the death scene of Hige and Blue of Wolfs rain and after i listend to the song untel the day i die :)
O_O We've much in common already. What inspired you the most for this poem? The death scene or the song?
