This story takes place 15 years after Kingdom Hearts 2 The walls that hold up the worlds are now starting to deteriorate. The only way to save the walls is to find the Six Elemental Keybladers and bring them together ontop of Radiant Garden's Castle, before the next Solar Eclipse........Or else all the worlds will fade into eturnal Darkness...... Main Characters Water Keyblader Name: Jordan Rain Age:15 Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: Loyal, funny, his friends are the most important thing to him. He has very little self-confidence. Keyblade: Poseidon’s Wrath Light Keyblader (Not know yet) Name: Taylor Nicole Age:15 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: A true blonde. Tries to be serious but sometimes fails. Very kind and loving. Keyblade: Oathkeeper (Taylor's) http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p295/Chronox45/Keyblade.jpg Darkness Keyblader (Not know yet) Name: Christian Cline Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: Funny and likes to joke around but can be serious. Keyblade: Anti-Oblivion http://i452.photobucket.com/albums/qq242/penguinxy64/thKagekeycg.jpg Other Keybladers Twilight Keyblader (Not know yet) (Mrs.Lovet from Serebii.net) Name: EllenX Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: She wants to know why the keyblade chose her, she also wants her heart back. Appearance: About 5.5 feet. Untidy, wavy reddish brown hair. Brown eyes. Keyblade: Black with an emerald encrusted in the handle. Wind Keyblader (Ginji from Serebii.net) Name: Gin or Ginji Age: 21 Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: serious or random Keyblade: a wide blade sword with a black dragon on it Earth Keyblader (oooo from Serebii.net) Still filling form Ice Keyblader (Chelsea Star from Serebii.net) Name: Wolf Gender: Male Age: 18 Appearance: Personality: Quiet and Brave. Keyblade: A crystal like one. Fire keyblader Name: Chakor Age: 18 Gender: Male Appearance: http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb223/Flo_20072006/fire_guy.jpg Personality: kind and benevolent keyblade: http://media.photobucket.com/image/fire keyblade/Splatty1/Keyblade.jpg Thunder/Lightning Keyblader (keybladewarrioroflegend from Kh-vids.net) Name: Phenox Age: 17 Gender: Male Personality: kind to friends but brutal to enemies. Appearance: Keyblade: gold with an angel wing at the end. Jewels are set in 4 spots on the handle and blade. the hilt is 2 angel wings melded together. ~~~~ I'll put up more went I finsh typing the first Chapter.
Chapter One: Awaking ‘Where……Am I falling?’ a browned haired boy thought as he opened his eyes. He looked around to see he was falling straight through the sky. He tried to scream, but……… nothing came out. The boy than tried to move his body, but got the same thing as his screaming….nothing…..He looked down again to see the ocean below. It got closer but the second. ‘ I’m going to be crushed by the force of the splash!’ he closed his eyes tightly, ready to die……The splash, never came…..nor did the water…… The boy opened his eyes again to see he was now falling through the ocean. ‘How is this happening?’ he thought again, confused. As he fell, he saw a platform started to appear it was all yellow with a beautiful young browned haired woman, holding a rose. He turned all the way around till he was on his feet. He could also move again as he walked around the platform. He looked at the young lady, “She beautiful…” is what he tried to say, but it looks like he still couldn’t talk. The platform shook, and the boy started to freak out. ‘OMG, what else could go wrong?’ Three stands appear around the edge of the platform. On the stands were an Axe, a Dagger, and a Trident. “Which will you take?” a mysterious voice said from above. “Who are you and where am I?!” he tried to say, but still nothing came out. “What are you waiting for? Will you take……..the Axe, a symbol of power and destruction, an everlasting greed for violence. The Dagger, a last resort weapon, a symbol of cowards, thieves, and traitors alike; an eternal selfish sprit. Or the Trident, a Symbol of balance and Justice, a goal setter and finisher. Choose wisely…” The boy went over to the Axe first. ‘No…..It doesn’t feel right….’ He went to the middle stand to where the Dagger was ‘…..This isn’t it……’ He went to the final stand, where the Trident was hovering. ‘It feels like….it’s calling me’ his hand reached up and grabbed the shaft of it. The instant he did, it started glowing with a golden aura, and than the aura went into him. The boy felt more confident, and braver than ever before. The gold aura slowly faded away, and the Trident returned to its normal bronze color, and so the boy went back to normal. ‘Great…Now what?’ he thought to himself. The Axe and Dagger disappeared in a flash of Light. The platform shook again and as it did three more stands appeared around the platform. ‘Now there are six stands….’ Another flash of Light appeared, and now in the stands were six different color orbs. “Now, these are the six Elements of the worlds. Each one with its own unique ability and weakness. Which one will you choose?” The orbs than exploded on there stands. A small Flame spouted from the ruby orb. A small Tempest shot forth from the emerald orb. A small Thundercloud came slowly from the amber orb. A small Glacier hovered from the diamond orb. A small Mountain plopped from the dark brown orb. Lastly a Whirlpool floated from the sapphire orb. The boy started with the Flame, he liked the warmth, than he started to feel like he was completely on fire. ‘This is not a very good feeling!’ He quickly stepped away from the flame towards the tempest. When he got there he felt lighter some how, he slightly moved his hand and instead got a quick reflex. ‘Cool, but no…’ He jogged from the tempest to the thundercloud. As soon as he came close to the cloud, it shot lightning towards him, and roared with thunder. He quickly dodged it, ‘Okay than….’ He thought as he than jogged over to the Glacier. It welcomed him with its coldness. The boy liked it at first, but than his body started to become numb and so were his senses. It also felt like his…heart was becoming colder as well. Some how, he walked over to the next stand, gaining his senses back with each step. When he got to the Mountain stand it felt like gravity was pulling him down. He stopped, trying to gain enough energy to go to the next stand. The boy got enough energy and slowly pushed himself to the last stand. The gravity was normal again when he got in front of the final stand. The Whirlpool spiraled as he looked at it. It seemed to calm him, but at the same time make him more focused. The boy put his hands out and picked up the Whirlpool without having to touch it. “Water, the life and soothing element. With this element, you can control all the water around you, and also heal with it. It is also the Truth element which means; as long as you have this element you can not lie. Is this what you want?” “Yes…..” He was so shocked that he could speak again, he almost dropped the Whirlpool. The Whirlpool glowed dark blue, then went in side the boy. Freaking out, he screamed. Just then, a dark figure started to appear in the middle of the platform, as the other elements and there stands disappeared. The boy looked at the figure, and started to stepped back, but almost fell off the platform. “Don’t be frightened……” The figure started to take form. “You must not be afraid of the darkness….For you must face it through out your Journey.” The figure finally was…..a sea serpent is roared at the boy. “Before you can start you Journey….You must face the Darkness in your heart before you face other Darkness….” His Trident glowed in his hand and water appeared around him. It was like they were telling him to fight the thing. “Okay, I’ll fight, because I want to get back home alive.” He said with pride. He then charged the foul beast. As he charged the serpent, spit large poison needles at the boy. He jumped, and barely misses him. He slashed down with his trident onto the body, but the hit bounced off. “Damn it!” The boy cursed as he rolled out of the way, before he was smashed by the Sea serpent’s tail. The tail than wrapped around his leg and pull him up. “Let me go, damn it!” He slashed harder this and cut off the tip of the tail that held him. He braced himself to hit the platform, but instead a spout of water caught him. “Now were talking!” he stabbed the platform. The result was water spouts coming out around the Serpent. It wasn’t scared by the water at all, it embraced. “No you don’t!” he pulled out his trident with his right hand, and with his left, waved the water around the serpent. An orb was formed around the Serpent it swam around it like it was nothing, and shot more needles at the boy. This time, he slashed away the needles. He than started to slowly closed his left hand. As he did the orb got smaller the more he closed his hand. It got so small that the monster couldn’t move any more. Keeping his left hand tightly closed, he started to think ‘Now what am I to do? Its scales deflect my hits…..’ His trident began to glow, and is did the water. “Throw the trident……and trust it.” a new mysterious voice said. His trident glowing brighter than before; as if it was agreeing. “Okay….I’ll try it…If this doesn’t work….I’m screwed….” He held the trident up with is right hand and than threw it. Water sprouted and went around it and shot it like a torpedo, making it faster and deadlier than before. The trident struck the head of the Sea Serpent and went thought it and came out the other end of its tail. Water splashed on to the platform, and so did the Serpent. It picked up its head slowly and hissed angrily. With its last breath it slammed back onto the platform, the result was Darkness covering the entire platform. Darkness surrounded the boy as he tried to swat it away, but it started to cover him. “Don’t be afraid…….You are the one who will gather and lead the others to save the worlds……Jordan Rain, Elemental Keyblader of Water……” Then the boy, Jordan Rain, was engulfed by Darkness ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well, did I do good? I took ALOT of time to type this.
I thought it was very nicely done. I enjoyed reading the details of the different orbs and the attack of the sea serpent or water hydra that represented his darkness. Good job. ^_^
It is a good story. I liked how you showed us what the characters look like so that we can imagine them in the story. I have always liked to see visuals with that. The interaction with the characters well done and very emotional. Nice job. ^_^
Chapter 2 is up! :D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Chapter 2: Fate’s Shore “Jordan…….” A voiced called. ‘Am I dead?’ Jordan asked himself. “JORDAN!” a blast of shinning light blasted through the darkness. Jordan started to hear waves, rising on and off the shore, and palm tree’s swaying in the wind. “Jordan, I’ll say this one more time…….Get the HELL up now!” yelled famine voice again. “Taylor?” Jordan started to open his eyes. When they were fully open the stared at a blonde headed girl with bright blue eyes. “Finally, you’ve been sleeping for hours on end!” Taylor roared again at Jordan. Jordan blinked at her comment “I’ve been sleeping but I….” he thought about what he was going to say next but got cut off. “No excuses, slacker!” the girl yelled again. “Slacker?” mumbled as he got up and brushed off his dark blue Coexist shirt and his tans shorts. “While me and Christian made the Club house, you just sat down and yelled at us if we did something wrong.” He explained while staring at Taylor, a little angry. “Well, I made the design so I did my part. Hey! Don’t change the subject!” she bellowed back staring back in the same manner. “Taylor, you are the blondest girl I know, changing the subject is one of many of your blonde characteristics.” Jordan explained with a smirk on his face. “I.Am.Not!” the blonde bellowed again. “Wanna bet?” “Bring IT!” The two of them were now eye to eye to each other, rage filling there eyes. “Hey Taylor, there’s a kitten.” Jordan blurted out while pointing to the Shore’s pier. “KITTEN!” Taylor totally forgot about Jordan as he ran towards the pier, looking for the cute little kitten. As she ran Jordan ran towards the Club house, laughing as he did. When the blonde got to the pier and looked around, with her eyes full of excitement. Than she realized what just happened…..Her eyes quickly changed from happy to pure hate. “Damn it! I’ll get you for that Jordan!” She turned around and cursed with each step she took towards the Club House. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I know it's short, but the next one will be longer.
