A new story I'm planning on writing

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  1. Aura Goddess

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    Thank you I try my best lol
     
  2. Sumi suicidé

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    if that's 100%, what's 120%?
     
  3. Aura Goddess

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    Um being the greatest story ever made.And that nothing can top it.
     
  4. Sumi suicidé

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    Oooh...*hugs self for thinking of 120%*
     
  5. Aura Goddess

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    Lol but I think there's no such thing as 120%.
     
  6. Sumi suicidé

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    Too bad, now there is *sticks out toungue*
     
  7. Falling Star Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol, 120%?! Hehe

    Ok back on task, love the story so far! Both of them are great! ("My story, but you included" and "A new story im planning on writing"!) Love them, love them, love them! (wait's for more)
     
  8. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That chapter was good, really interesting, espically when I realized who Cid was, took me some time to figure out who was Cid hehe. Anyways good chapter, keep up the good work!
     
  9. Aura Goddess

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    But do you know who the girl is?(The one that was looking for Cid)
     
  10. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    oooohhhhh the next keyblade guy... so totaly guessable..(is that a word?)
     
  11. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    Aerith was the one talking to Cid right? and good story, can't wait to read more...
     
  12. Paladin12345678 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Lol, I thought it was Kairi! ^_^'
     
  13. Absol Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Awesome so far :3
     
  14. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    haha. posting so vakh can find this easily.
     
  15. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    I like it! ^-^

    Give us updates in the Writers family when you start, please!
     
  16. Aura Goddess

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    Chapter 2-The Second Day

    “But it all ends here. There can’t be two Keyblade masters.”
    “O purest of hearts! Reveal to me the Keyhole!”
    “The darkness may destroy my body, but it can’t touch my heart.”
    “But I’m not gonna to betray Sora, either, cause he’s become one of my best buddies after all we’ve been through together!”
    “All for one and one for all.”
    “My friends are my power!”
    “All worlds begin in darkness, and all so end. The heart is no different.”
    “You see, darkness is the heart’s true essence.”
    “That’s not true!”
    “The heart may be weak. And sometimes it may even give in. But I’ve learned that deep down, there’s a light that never goes out!”
    “Every light must fade, every heart return to darkness!”
    “Kingdom Hearts fill me with the power of darkness...”
    “You’re wrong. I know now without a doubt, Kingdom Hearts.....is light!”
    “Kairi!”
    “Sora.”
    “Kairi, remember what you said before. I’m always with you too. I’ll come back to you! I promise!”
    “I know you will!”

    Alex awoke from his dream. Alex sat up and began to think why he was having these dreams. He then looked at his clock to see it was 6:15 am.
    “I’m early.” he said.
    He then got up and got ready for school. Alex got to school at 7:00. Since he was early to school, he decided to go see Kaori. He went over to where Kaori would always be before school starts.
    “Kaori.” said Alex walking over to her.
    “Alex.” Kaori turned around to see Alex. “You finally came early to school.”
    “Oh yeah. I woke up earlier.” explained Alex.
    “Well, I’m proud of you.” said Kaori smiling.
    The bell rang at 7:15 for them to get to class. Alex and Kaori walk into their history class and saw the same young woman they met yesterday writing “Mrs. Gainsborough” on the board.
    “Hey Kaori, look. Isn’t that the lady that came up to us yesterday?” asked Alex.
    “Yeah that is her.” replied Kaori.
    All the students took their seats. The woman waited until it was quiet and all the students were seated.
    “Hello class, my name’s Mrs. Gainsborough but you can call me Mrs. G, which ever you prefer.” continued Mrs. Gainsborough. “Your teacher, Mrs. Johnson, won’t be able to teach you for the next month. Something has come up.”
    One girl in the class raised her hand.
    “Yes.” said Mrs. Gainsborough.
    “So you’re going to be our teacher for the next month, right?” asked the girl.
    “Yes. She left me papers of what she wants you to learn.” explained Mrs. Gainsborough. “Ok so lets begin.”
    And so Mrs. Gainsborough started the class. Throughout the class, Alex was thinking about the dreams he’s been having.
    Why am I getting these dreams? Do they mean anything? wondered Alex.
    Kaori looked at Alex. She saw he wasn’t paying attention. Kaori just signed and left him alone. The bell rang for lunch.
    “Alright class we’ll continue tomorrow.” said Mrs. Gainsborough.
    The class started exiting the class room when Mr. Highwind came in.
    “Hi Mr. Highwind.” greeted Kaori smiling.
    “Hello Kaori.” responded Mr. Highwind.
    Mr. Highwind and Mrs. Gainsborough began to talk. Meanwhile Kaori and Alex got a table for them to sit.
    “Alex, you are starting to worry me.” said Kaori.
    “What? Why?” asked Alex confused.
    “Because, for the past few weeks you haven’t been yourself.” explained Kaori.
    “It’s because of these dreams.” said Alex.
    “These dreams? Why do you keep on talking about these dreams?” asked Kaori.
    Chris came and Kaori and Alex stopped talking about what they were talking about before. After a while the bell rang for them to get to their next class. Alex and Kaori got to their woodshop class. After a while, Alex ask Mr. Highwind to go to the bathroom. As Alex was heading back to class, he saw something moving around the ground.
    “What is that?” he asked himself.
    As it got closer, he saw what it was.
    “Oh man! It’s those things from my dreams! What are they called...uh....um....uh.”
    The heartless cam and jumped at Alex. Alex ducked and began to run. The heartless began to chase Alex. Alex turned around to see the heartless getting closer. He looked around to see any object he could use to protect himself. All of a sudden his right hand began glow.
    “What?” said Alex confused.
    Alex raised his hand towards his face and the Kingdom Keyblade appeared in his hand.
    “Wh-what is this thing?” he asked.
    The heartless jumped at Alex. He swung the keyblade, hitting the heartless. The heartless hit the wall and vanished. Alex just looked at the spot where the heartless vanished. Then the keyblade disappeared as well. Alex just stood there confused. He then turned around and headed back to class.
     
  17. 00Roxas00 剛情のロクサス

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    Wow :D Nice, I like the story and the characters n_n Keep it up!
     
  18. BaseSebastian Kingdom Keeper

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    I heard about it from a certain somebody in a certain family and just had to read because the person who suggested it was...er...you...:D

    I like it!
     
  19. Aura Goddess

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    >.>

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    Yeah sorry I haven't updated this story in a while.I was starting school and I couldn't work on it.I'll try to have it up soon.I'm very sorry for those that like it so far.