Angels Don't Like Heroes

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  1. Juicy Chaser

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    I want more too 8D

    The characters are developing nicely.. :3
     
    Juicy, Dec 20, 2008
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  2. Luna Lovegood nani panda-kun

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    Hurrah! Great character developement! 8D
    KEEP WRITING!
     
    Luna Lovegood, Dec 20, 2008
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  3. scarred_heart634 Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was awesome! Your a really good writer, i loved it! :D
     
    scarred_heart634, Dec 22, 2008
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  4. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Oh... so that's what happens in the two chapters I missed eh?

    >w< Awesome job as always~
     
    Dinny, Dec 30, 2008
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  5. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Okay, okay, here I am posting.

    I must say it's an acceptable story.

    But I must admit I've seen the plot a couple of times, only time will tell how good this really is.
     
    Chevalier, Dec 30, 2008
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  6. Arch Mana Knight

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    D8 Dun eat meh...

    You love me for my taste. E>

    Thank you. ^^ I wrote more.

    Yups. :glomp:

    The plot will get better(hopefully). I'm still working out all the details and improvising. =p

    UPDATED.
     
    Arch, Jan 1, 2009
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  7. Nova We left a scar size extra-large.

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    Great story. It's easy to read, and it has a good plot so far :D
     
    Nova, Jan 1, 2009
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  8. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Ooh~! With that chapter I wonder how this story would unfold... >w>

    go on, more more! =D
     
    Dinny, Jan 1, 2009
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  9. jettie Twilight Town Denizen

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    i.agree.with.everyone.else
    it.is.really.good
    first.thing.i.noticed.was.how.u.could.picture.it.all
    u've.set.up.so.much.for.the.story.and.a.lot.on.the.characters
    i.can't.wait.for.more
    8DD
     
    jettie, Jan 4, 2009
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  10. Arch Mana Knight

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    D8

    8D

    Thanks. *squishes*

    ^-^ I'm glad it's easy to read.

    Got more. :glomp: *squishes also*

    I've set up a lot. Thanks for the comment. 8D

    Gonna be updating slower now. School will drain a lot of my time. I've only got one sentence written for the next chapter. @-@

    UPDATED
     
    Arch, Jan 4, 2009
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  11. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Is the girl gonna turn Mary Sue?
    O_0

    It seems like things are stabilizing.
     
    Chevalier, Jan 5, 2009
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  12. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Ugh, that just reminded me school's coming the day after tomorrow D: ;~;

    But, as always very well writen <3
    Keep it up, and feed us more chapters! >3
     
    Dinny, Jan 5, 2009
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  13. Sonic the Hedgehog The Blue dude is back!!

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    Dude,keep going,I loved it,go on.I want more please!!!!!!!!I'll give you a bucket of candy if you keep going.
     
    Sonic the Hedgehog, Jan 5, 2009
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  14. Arch Mana Knight

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    I wrote a lot in two days. Kinda...>>

    Things will never stabilize! And I'll do everything I can to keep her story and character from being regular and boring.

    Hope your school doesn't...hehe...*winks* Read the chapter.

    I finally got a chance to write!

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    Arch, Jan 10, 2009
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  15. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Intense cliff hanger... wow... lol, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. XD
     
    Maka Albarn, Jan 10, 2009
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  16. Arch Mana Knight

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    Thanks.

    I couldn't wait to start the next chappy. 8D

    Hehe...wait more.

    I UPDATED because I was impatient. Now...FIND OUT WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO GREY. 8D
     
    Arch, Jan 10, 2009
    Arch, Jan 10, 2009
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  17. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I loved this chapter so much.

    The best one yet.
     
    Xaale, Jan 10, 2009
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  18. Aura Goddess

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    *claps*

    Loved it! And it is so far the best one. Keep it up.    ​
     
    Aura, Jan 10, 2009
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  19. Arch Mana Knight

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    Thanks. I hope I keep getting better.

    :glomp: *squishes* I like writing "moar". :3

    I did! D8 Dun hurt meh. ;-;

    *bows* Thank ya.

    I love cliffhangers!

    It actually did! 8D

    UPDATED.
     
    Arch, Jan 16, 2009
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  20. Luna Lovegood nani panda-kun

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    Not Michelle! ><
    YOU AND YOUR EFFING CLIFFHANGERS! Dx
     
    Luna Lovegood, Jan 16, 2009
    Luna Lovegood, Jan 16, 2009
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