Angels Don't Like Heroes

Nevermind. New favorite chapter. That was so sad! I LOVED it.

 

Damn it! Why'd you kill her? DX
I'm sad now. Grey loved her. ; ; The chapter was good, surprising and sad. Although I don't really like that you killed Krystal, this really has to be my favorite chapter. Grey did show baddassness. 8DD
Anyway, sad chapter but good. Hurry with the next one. DDDX​

 

Why'd it have to be Krystal, though? ;~;
Wasn't expecting Daniel to come back at all. 8D GAH! Awesomesocks chapter!

 

I don't know why but the beginning made me feel like crying. >> DDD:
Very good. Chapter was great and I really hope Grey will escape and beat those people. B| And I pictured Michael's eyes in my head. Kind of creeped me out. D:
I seriously can't wait for the sequel. I loved this story. ^^;​

 

This is such a good story. I can't wait to read the sequel. This is one of the best stories I've read in awhile.

 

D8> I wasn't expecting it to end yet. Especially not so sadly. ;~;
And you were beating your gums about how you're "not a good writer". >-> Sequel! >8D

 

So sorry it took me forever to have time to read this ):

But wow, I'm such an idiot of forgetting (for just a moment) on how much of a great writer you are.
That was simply beautiful.
Probably my favorite read so far.
Okay, I'm going to go read the whole thing again.
It's just pure magic.

Ahh, I can't get how awesome it is out of my head!
Lol.
Five stars.

 

I never commented on this while it was in the other section but I've been following it from day one and I've only just finished it. I'm surprised it ended this way. Like I have said before you have a fairly plain style, it's simple and to the point but it works out well enough. Though there are flaws they aren't outstanding enough to mention here. Overall I like it a lot more than I'd initially expected and I will be reading more from you in the near future. Good first story. Beats anything I've ever done.