Kingdom hearts-you included

Ah these chapters are very good. I'm very interested in this.:D

 

you can join... though i dont know when sora will be back

 

that was so rockin!
you captures rinns personality almost perfectly!
although the random words probably wouldnt be that frequent
and i noticed a few spelling errors
but i loved the part about the popcicle XD

 

kingdom like omg - strangley?

 

? erm... what?

 

did you read it... you called donald strangely

 

yea, i dont get that at all
lolz

 

was funny though

 

Name:Eden
Gender:Female
Good/bad:Good
Weapon:A colorful blue, red, and orange staff
Powers: Alchemy/Water/Ice/Animals
Personality: very kind, and she'll try to protect her friends, no matter how trivial the danger is, like a friend being yelled at. She'll be by a friends side no matter what.
What the look like: Shoulder length black brown hair, a turquoise blue t-shirt and black sweat pants. her skin is a pale peach
Additional information: Her greatest weakness is seeing or hearing of death and being alone.

 

see im the only nastay girl here

 

YAY!!!! ED!!!!! *hugs*

 

its eden lol - im gonna read again

 

yes, but i call her ed
and she calls me rinny-chan
lolz

 

O_o? Ed? Rinny-chan...

 

do you mind if i call u ed?

 

Heya all ye guys-i mean girls....and that other guy......uh hi.Im back!So here comes the story!!!!!!!!

As all of the companions ran out of the hide-out, finding out what the noise was all about, they saw the most scariest creature-or maybe it was a heartless? You never know.
The creature slammed some trees with its large cob-webbed fist, and the trees fell down, like a million wood-cutters had struck it.
All of the companions looked up, wide-eyed.
Sora, Rebecca, and Rinn took out their key-blades.
Sora couldnt ask about their keyblades because he was too focused on the creature, but in his mind, he thought, whats with all these key-wielders?!
A white cloaked figure appeared in front of all of them, startling the fighters.
"Which one of you is named...Sora?" The white figure said. He/she spotted the other keyblade wielders. "So theres three of you?"
"I'm Sora!" Sora called, recognizing the organization coat. But it was white, so he was confused.
"Ok. So wheres Maxi?" The organization person called.
"Uh...what are you talking about?" Goofy asked, taking out his shield.
"Right." The figure called, snapping his/her fingers, and heartless zoomed out of the earth, made out of rocks and clay. They were the same shape as Dusks.
"Whos Waxy?" Rinn called.
"Uh-oh." Donald quacked, as more earth-dusks came out.
"Let me say this again. Where is Maxi?" The figure said, and the adventurers knew he/she was losing its temper.
Rinn stepped out from the line of defenders. Her face was maybe confused, and she asked, "Crix?"
The figure seemed surprised, and the organization member took off the hood. The face was filled with a smile, and it was a girl. She had black eyes which matched her dark hair.
"Crix? Ha!" The girl crossed her arms. "So. I'm looking for the key-blade wielders and yet, I find myself standing with only some of them. So I ask you one more time. Wheres Maxi?"
"Were telling you that we don't know who you are talking about!!!" Rebecca said.
"Fine. Be that way." The figure said, pointing her finger at them. "Kill!!!" She raged.
Didnt we destroy all of the organization members?! Donald quacked in his mind.
The girl disappeared into darkness, and she left all of the defenders to fight the creatures.
All of the creatures jumped at them, and the fighters fought madly against the constant raid of them.
Sora fought with all of his strength, but just like the heartless at the grave yard, Donald and Goofy also werent so good.
"You really are weak, Moema." Rinn said glumly, hitting Sora in the head.
"Ow."
A heartless earth dusk swung around Sora, grabbing him, and flung him.
He flew, and he soared directly to a tree...closer...closer...
A man caught him, Sora guessed in his twenties, and he saw he had silver hair, blue eyes, and the beginning of a beard. He had small horns on his temples, and a few sharp claws. "You haven't seen a demon did you? Blue eyes, and hair. He has two ringy weapons? Name...uh...Neizon?"
Sora looked dumbly at the half demon, and a black creature came behind his back.
"No." Sora said.
"Oh." The strange man dropped him.
"Did any-" The man saw all the heartless. "Rebellion."
A large sword came flying out of no where, and it fought by itself in the air.
"Lucifer." The man said.
The dark creature on his back started throwing red blades at the creatures.It struck all of them, and the man took out a rose, and flung it. The blades detonated, detonating also the creatures.
He laughed. "Roses are blood, tulips are grey....say...what did you have for dinner today?" The man said, dancing around."Gilgamesh!"
He kicked and swung his legs and arms around, his greaves and gauntlets glowing.
All of the heartless were gone. Except the large creature.
All of the old defenders stared in awe at the fighter.
The large creature,hmm.Thats too long. I'll call it Bob. Bob raged, looking at all his allies-which were none anymore.
"Lucifer. One more time!!" He laughed. The creature happily gurgled, and more blades struck Bob, more and more, until Bob was only a red spiky creature.
The man took out a rose again, threw it, and said, "Fire in the hole!"
KABOOM!

The explosion rocketed everything, rocks bounced, the white figure, far off, seeing the entire scene from a branch, fell off, cursing.
Mickey turned around, curious what was happening.
A pale girl, walking on a trail, looked around, not knowing what just happened.
I could go on forever.
A black cloaked figure-the same one the organization member was talking too, growled, spotting the lights.
Lastly, a boy about age 19 in a cloak heard the explosion.

Ok!!!Thats it!More is coming!

 

That Dante wasn't the Dante I was talking about, but I think I like yours better! Please moar! By the way, why haven't you read my update on Heart of a Demon? Just so you know, the man in red in Heart of a Demon is Dante. But I like your version, who seemes to be in permenant Devil Trigger and has living weapons. YAYZ!

 

ok, im srry if i did it wrong, but thanx for the "i like urs better"
its coming....its coming!

 

That was good!!
I can't wait to read more:D

 

Name:Evan
Gender:Male
Good/bad:Good
Weapon:Oathkeeper keyblade
Powers:Can also seal keyholes and do magic.
Personality:Loves fighting, is kind, brave,and smart.
What the look like:
Additional information:Evan has had some dealings with the organization in the past, for instance, they gave him his keyblade and they told him he could weild it. They wanted to make Evan join the organization, but he would never.He now wants to destroy the evil organization.