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A sample RP that i used on another RP forum, but i think its very detailed.

Please excuse it being a bit on the gore side, it was the only one i had done recently.

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The sounds of Terran screams filled the halls, a sound that made Volthaduran grin as he sat in his chair drinking what was left of a fine wine that he brought down from the supply ships. " ahh.. the sweet sweet sounds of agony and pain, music to my ears" sipping the last of the wine from his glass as he stood to stare down into the monitors placed at the end of the room.

placing the glass on the table he walked down towards the monitors and took a look, rooms full of humans with limbs torn and blood gushing from their wounds... something that would seem so inhuman looked satisfying to Volthaduran, there was a neat and clean room for his own interrigations. Just recently he had interrigated a few terrans who had tried to escape his grasp from the last attempted raid on his castle.

"It seems i have been falling behind in my interrigations, my fellow brothers in arms are exceeding my expectations... best not let them beat my record" he let out a small chuckle as he walked over to an elevator and pressed the interrigations floor button and closed his eyes waiting for the lift to begin moving.

Past memories rapidly filled his mind as he recalled the very first time he stepped off a shuttle craft and smelled the air, the very first kill he had made with his bare hands when he had been given orders to put the planets leaders into disarray, they were happy memories but then came the disgusting flash backs.... The first time he had met a lycan, the scar on his chest throbbing with pain as the face of the wolfkin had almost torn his very heart out...

The elevator stopped and the doors parted, a chime brought Volthaduran back to reality and he stepped out and walked over towards a guard standing near his door. "Is the prisoner ready to have a chat?" he asked with a slight grin exposing what was left of his fangs, the guard simply nodded and opened the door. The smell of fresh flesh filled his nostrils as he walked in and looked at the prisoner who was bounded to the wall by chains and restraints.

"and how are we doing today... terran filth" he emphasized the word filth as the prisoner looked up at him with what little energy he had left and spat at his face. "oh do we have to do this all over again? the last one here did that also" putting a claw ring on his finger and with exact precision he cut a small X right into the prisoners upper chest, "Now im only going to ask you this once, where are your companions and how many are there?" he stood waiting with his right hand placed on top of the prisoners shoulder, stuttering the prisoner replied "F*** you.. Vam.. Vampire"

Volthaduran sighed and placed his thumb on the cut "You know... your going to make things very painful for youself, just tell me what i want to hear and ill make it..." he applied his thumb to the wound with a great amount of pressure causing blood to spill rapidly "slightly painful" the prisoner grunted from the wound and bit down on his lips to keep from screaming. "whats the matter? dont feel like talking?" Volthaduran placed another ring on his finger and made a second cut but this time it was closer to his neck "this one will hurt like hell" blood was flowing from the neck but it wasnt a fetal cut just enough to get the point across..

the prisoner let out a small scream through his teeth and that gave Volthaduran the satisfaction he was looking for "I can make this all go away, you just simply have to answer my question" he said again putting his free hand near the neck wound preparing to apply pressure on it, before Volthaduran applied the pressure the prisoner began to mutter " Stop... ill tell you... ".

Seeing that his means of interrigation had worked Volthaduran removed his claw rings and stopped applying pressure on the wounds, "Excellent, we are making progress... now tell me everything.". Steping back from the prisoner Volthaduran took a chair and sat down with his legs crossed, the prisoner still looked at him with anger but he had no chance of survival, "th..they are by... the mountains."

Seeing that he had gotten what he was looking for, Volthaduran stood up and took the scythe was placed in the room earlier. "Well then, it seems i have no more use for you" placing the scythe above the arm of the prisoner he lifted the scythe up and swung down hard, the limb came off with fresh blood splattering the side wall. "You shouldn't have lied to me... your going to die now" he said as he swung the scythe again cutting the leg out from under the prisoner, his screams growing louder and louder with each limb cut form his torso.

several minutes later the screaming had stopped and the room was covered wall to wall with blood and in the center was the prisoner, head decapitated and limbs spread out... Volthaduran had another glass cup with him, but wine wasnt inside it... "Another interrigation, another satisfied thirst" he began chuckling to himself as the guard came into the room and whispered into his ear.

"Of course the son's of a b****es want me to go back, i've been having too much fun since i was first sent here" he finished drinking the glass and threw it across the room smashing right above the chest and the pieces fell into the chest making a perfect Satanic star right where the heart was.
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DeathWing980, Dec 29, 2007
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Kizon looked at Mira. She's in Day one pain in the place of Impact. Day two pain alover the body. Day three diterating of organs and vointing black sluge. Day four Coma. Day 5 death. Day six possible reaniamation in the form of a living dead creacher. This is bad.

Kizon got up. A shiled superated Mira and the others from Kizon. Has he stood his jaket came off. A Berserker hit Kizon with his hammer hard. Kizon flew through the air a Samurai slashed at his torso makeing a cut throgh his chest. Kizon yelled in pain. A Dancer threw him at a Gambler who span around like a top cutting up Kizon. He yelled again. A Dragoon stabed Kizon in the both wrist. He Yelled even louder now. They we're torchering him. Kizon fell on the ground and said, "Please no more.' He was crying in pain. Two creepers stabed him through his legs. Kizon screemed. "Please I beging you stop,' Kizon was dessprate. They repeated the prosses again. Kizon layed on the floor. "Please enouth just kill me," Kizon beged them to end his pain. But they didn't they left and the sheilds came down.

What do you think?
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Destroy Canadians!!!

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Here's one, is it any good?
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destruction...:yelling:

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Sumi, Jan 26, 2008
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this is a sample of my new rp that I just made 5 minutes ago, not apart of the story and dialog, since I JUST made it, just by me, acted out by me too.

sora: "I just don't think I can leave the keyblade here with myself, it is just......mickey, the other....axailas, and maybe the heartless too, might be coming, so I have to leave it here with you....."

axaila montblanc: "NO!!!!" he started, as he looked at the keyblade with great sorrow, " You HAVE to have this, it is your only weapon!"

sora: "You don't really get it do you..........I have a heart, and that, my fellow friend, is the only weapon I need to stand up to my enimies" He said with a great smile.......

how do you like guys?
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uh yeah, check me out!

i don't think i can put down what i do but. . .
i do have samples from another site i go unto.
i truly let my colors flow.
don't hurt me because i'm not advertising this or anything!

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how i do <-- click the link, please.

this is kind of how i role.
really.
i do.
i'm awful, though.

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Um.. What exactly is "Rping"? Is it like a story starter? the body? a random paragarph that happens to have depth?

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Heres a sample of my work for now , I like spacing alot for some reason . :3

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Nuthura : " My mother ?! Is she dying , what is happening to her ?! I don't want her to leave me !!! I will be all alone in the worlds , is my brother even alive ? . . .. "

She said tears flying from her eyes .

Meanwhile . . .

Phisoxa : " My fault ?! Who's dream was I ?! Yours ?! You wanted me to come to life , you created a monster Xehanort !! "

Xemnas snickered for some reason and he looked at her .

Xemnas :" It has been a longtime since I heard you call me that . "

She stood and looked as if she wanted to attack him .

Saix came in and knocked on the door .

Xemnas and Phisoxa looked at him .

Xemnas : " Yes , Saix ? "

Saix : " Sir , it appears we have more intruders in our castle , not including Sora and his party , but Little Niemie and a friend of hers . "

Xemnas : " Little Niemie ? Eh ? "

He grabbed Phisoxa by the collar of her coat and dragged her up close to him .

Xemnas : " Hear that , you own daughter has come to rescue you . "

Phisoxa : " Nuthura ?! "

He shaked her and Phisoxa looked into his eyes .

Saix : " What should we do about her ?"

Xemnas : " Leave her alone for now , there is nothing that she can do for now . "

Saix : " Right . "

He bows , and walks out .
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Kiara walked down Terrence, towards the old building at the end. She knew today was going to be busy. She soon came upon the door. She looked to make sure no one followed her. She opened and went in quickly. She saw many kids sleeping and some playing around. She smiled and put the two baskets she had down on the ground, which was the only place to set things. The floor creaked once she sat on her knees opening it up. She pulled out a basket of biscuits to give the small kids. She then stood up giving most of the children a piece. In the other basket she had, she decided to give them all an apple and a small canteen of water.
"I wish there was more I could do for you kids, but if father finds out, he wouldn't let me out of the palace again," she said.

Brad stood next to her and put his hand on her shoulder.
"Don't worry Kiara. We'll find some way to help them... I promise that everything will be okay," he said smiling. Kiara smiled back and picked up the two empty baskets.

"Thank you Brad. You're a very great friend," she said then gave him a friendly hug. She smiled and walked out of the small broken down house. She began to walk up the street towards Greenwood.

OOC: Woot, 13 lines >D
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meh, i is just bored :p

Whooo :D

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~Sasumi~ said: ↑

Um.. What exactly is "Rping"? Is it like a story starter? the body? a random paragarph that happens to have depth?
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No one answered my question...

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~Sasumi~ said: ↑

No one answered my question...
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Rping is roleplaying.

Its portraying in a story that someone or yourself has created, and you and the others make up the story as it goes along

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oh... that's cool! I'm gonna go try! WHEEEEE!!!!

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Another sample of my work , yet with lots of spacing like always . :3

???? : " What buisness to you have here , Lady Phisoxa . "

A old man in a wheelchair sat at the end of the table .

Phisoxa : " I am looking for my teacher , Lazard , looks like my son kicked you off the throne of the Realm of Light . "

She chuckles . There were murmurs among the others in the meeting room .

Lazard : " Don't take it funny , I have been on that throne for hunderds of years . I feel ashamed . "

Phisoxa : " Don't feel bad for yourself Lazard , there is no time for a weakness like that in this war . "

Lazard : " Quite right my dear. "

Phisoxa : " Where is His Majesty ? "

Lazard : " Oh he left , a few minutes ago , I am sorry you came all this way to find him . "

Phisoxa : " No sir , do not feel sorry . "

She bows .

Lazard : " I am afraid dear , that you must make haste , there are those Soldiers who dare call themselves Servants of the Light Realm running around here , and I do think that someone has spotted you . There are also bounty hunters in the gambling and lounge room , they are looking for you . Please leave now . "

He starts to cough alot .

Phisoxa : " Sir what is wrong ? "

Lazard : " I am dying my dear , I fear my time here may be slipping away quickly and I shall join the Farplane. "

Phisoxa : " I feel horrible for you . "

Lazard : " Go now !! Hurry !!! "

He points his finger at the door . Phisoxa bows a low bow and runs out .
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Aiphos walks further down the trail and she sees a trail of blood now on the tracks . Aiphos ran forward , and stopped . She was standing near the lifeless body of a little boy . She bends down and puts her fingers to his pulse .

Aiphos : " He is still alive . "

She said standing back up .

Aiphos : " He looks like he played dead to avoid getting killed . "

She said as the little boy sat up , the blood wasn't his though .

The Boy : " I am so glad to see you !!! It almost ate me , but is looks like my mother got dragged off by it . "
He started to shiver , and tears flowed down his cheeks .

The Boy : " She is dead , isn't she ? "

Aiphos was silent .

The Boy : " She is never coming back ? Ain't she ? "

He rolled up into ball and started sobbing .

The Boy : " Lady , how can you just stand there and show no expression on your face ?! My mother died , can you feel any sadness ?! What is wrong with you ?! "

Aiphos : " It was the way I was raised . "

She said with a calm look on her face .
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Jordyn hissed again. That word, just made her want to kill him even more. She tightened her hand, and the sword picked itself up from the ground and over back to her.
"Never say that again... Not in front of me," she hissed. She had an angry look on her face and she couldn't stand the word as she hated it more than her demon half. It confused her though. She wouldn't be so angry, but yet, her demon side makes her angry. Makes her want to see the blood of a killed person.

Jordyn felt another spark, and she held her hands tightly around the sword.
"Kill me now!" she shouted, demandingly. It was already hard enough for her to deal with this. She felt the cool sweat run down her face along with a salty tear. She turned the sword and pointed it at her stomach. Ready to jab it in, and never become this again, thought struggled. Her demon half pulled back, and herself pulled forward.
"Kill me!" she shouted again, more sobbing like than demanding.
"Please. kill me," She said weakly, falling to her knees. Her eyes flushed out with water from her eyes, where she'd been crying. She softly cried and felt herself ready to attack, at such a weakened stage. If she could control herself at the moment. She would kill herself, at the very instant.

OOC: Holy f**k what a long post o.O
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"Your kind!?" she asked, her eyes suddenly red again. She cackled.
"Big mistake," she said, in an angry way. She stood up, and took a running first step, until she tripped. She tripped herself and made her hit the pavement.
"Stop!" she shouted. She couldn't tell whether it was the demon or the human part.
She looked back up at him.
"Please... Don't let her take over then," she said. She took her sword again, Ready to hit herself over the head with it. That was how it calmed down last time, but this time it wouldn't let her. She growled and tried to stop herself, but she couldn't help herself.
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Jordyn felt the pressure intense. She growled as she stabbed the sword in the ground, and her eyes grew red with slits. Even more pulsating than last time. She looked up, her only thoughts were on the people around her. Her instincts told her to go kill them. She wouldn't. She won't! She tried to convince herself rather than anyone else. She promised, she wouldn't, no matter what. A promise would be too hard to break for her, thought, the demon would make sure of that.
"Kuro... Sorry," she said softly, as if she began to take back over her body, but she didn't. She grabbed the sword finally able to move her hands. She held the end of the sword up and she pierced the tip through her stomach slightly. She didn't even let it go through her back, but it was at the climax of her pain. She let out a fierce groan as she felt the demon inside her get as angry as it could, which made Jordyn regret now, to hurt herself.

But was it really Jordyn that hurt herself? Or was it the demon's harsh plan to hurt her, so that they wouldn't attack her? Maybe that was it. She could now feel the demon inside her release the stress, as it went on without anger. She did exactly what the demon wanted, which was something she regrets terribly.
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Not much though . ^ ^ And Cupcake , Awesomeness . 9w9

Aiphos bent down next to the boy and looked him straight in the eyes .

Aiphos : " Right now , there is nothing that is going to bring your mother back , laying on the ground and crying is not going to bring her back . She is watching over you , and when she looks down upon us , she doesn't want to see her son acting like a infant in the dark . Now c'mon , use your legs and stand . "

She reaches out her hand and the little boy grabs on it .

Aiphos : " What is your name ? "

The Boy : " It's Phykes . "

Aiphos : " Come Phykes . "

The little boy sticks to Aiphos .
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I really love the fact that you make the story sound like a play <3 =D

My most recent RP post (a few minutes ago)

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Jordyn now disgusted herself. She felt the warm crimson liquid run across the wound and into her shirt. She felt dizzy now, and disorientated. She could see the siblings run over and she could barely hear them. It was like a dream to her. She took slow shallow breaths as she just figured out what she had done to herself. She let out a small whimper and a teardrop ran down her face. She squeezed her eyes closed as she felt the demon inside her leave. It felt so much better now. She didn't know whether to chuckle at her success or to cry at her shame.

Either way she figured that the most important thing to do was get help. Still dizzy she looked up and an instant headache came into her head. She fell back, finally collapsing from the pain in her stomach. She opened her eyes softly and they were back blue. Her skin color and her attitude changed. Her voice was back to the way it was before the change. She shook slightly, whimpered softly, and slowly cried. She could sense the blood from her stomach. She smiled slightly.

All the demon was interested in was blood. It finally got what it want. The look of blood, the smell of blood. To taste the victory of seeing it. Jordyn was glad it was not the siblings. She was greatful it wasn't Frank. And she was glad she hadn't hurt such an innocent person. Someone who could've helped her, or someone who could've hurt her. Either way, no one deserves to die on the hands of a beast.

And such a strong beast too. Jordyn could only imagine such a power as that. It seemed too real for her to have. Maybe this wasn't a dream? Maybe it was something that she had always feared. A nightmare. She looked around, looking for Shiro, Kuro, or frank. Her eyes gave off a blurry sensation and it was hard to pinpoint who was who. She could tell from the aura, Frank wasn't with them. She still felt the aura of the three half demons.

"K..uro....Shiro.... Please, forgive me," where the only words that could pass through her lips. Nothing for her to ask for help. She didn't care if she lived or died. All she cared about was her new friends and if they would be upset with her tragic choice. She looked at Shiro softly. She was positive it was and she shook a little more.
"I don't care....if I live or die.. Just please...forgive me," she said weakly again. She felt absolutly tired and weak, but she knew she would need to stay awake, because she wasn't sure on the next moves. She still couldn't hear anything perfectly, it was still disorientated. When she spoke herself, it seemed to echo and stay soft in her mind. She took a slight sigh, and waited for one of them to reply.
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Yours sounds like a book lol . :3

I write scripts for plays lol . :3

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Yours sounds like a book lol . :3

I write scripts for plays lol . :3
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I am currently trying my best to get started on a book for my English Class or something x] Or for something to do when i get bored

I'm gonna get a literary degree in college hopefully and be an English I/English 2 teacher =D

I love plays, and i hope to read one of yours soon =]

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Lets stop spamming and get back to the topic . :3

Aiphos walks over to a few chewed up bodies .

Aiphos : " Hmmm . .. I think they got both of them . "

She bends down and puts her hand on their chest .

Aiphos : " Their life light is gone , I thought correct . "

The two bodies faded away , there was suddenly three growling noises coming from the bushes .

Aiphos : " They are back . "

Phykes shrieked and hid behind Aiphos , who took out her dual katanas . The three monsters came flying out and stood on the ground infront of them .
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Aiphos walked in , the little Phykes kid tagging along .

Phykes : " So you work for SOLDIER ? Awesome !!! "

Aiphos : " I don't think SOLDIER shoud be awesome . "

Phykes : " Why not ? The kids back at home want to be in SOLDIER some day ! Maybe I do !!! I want to fight against beasts like those who killed my mother and be loved by everyone and the man on the poster on my friend's bedroom wall . "

Aiphos : " You children actually think about us that way ? "

Phykes : " Yeah you guys are like all time heros !!! "

He said smiling up at her . A frown appeared on her face .

Aiphos : " I sure hope we are heros . . . "

Phykes : " What do you mean ?! "

Aiphos : " You will find out soon enough . "

Aiphos walked over to the SOLDIER lobby room .
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"Wounds? What wounds? It's just a scratch," she chuckled, in a way that seemed spine chilling.. It was for her though. But really... Just a scratch? Jordyn looked down at the blood still seeping from the wound and she still laughed. The demon got what it wanted. The smell and feel of blood. It made her stomach just turn and ache from the smell and sight of it. She watched as they brought her in the apartment. She chuckled.
"Wow, you guys take this wound seriously," she said. She didn't seem like herself. She seemed more adventurous now. She seemed to just have an easy side that really doesn't matter anymore. She felt the sharp pain of the wound in her stomach and she just laughed every time she felt pain. Was she happy to feel the pain? Maybe it was that the demon loved pain. To see it and cause it. Now maybe it had an effect on Jordyn too. But what was the effect? The effect to just feel pain. Deep down, she wanted to cry, at every throb in her stomach.. But every time the pain came. She laughed. Thinking it was some sick joke. She growled again. Feeling another pressure come in her stomach again.
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Jordyn laughed. More than what she should have. It hurt so bad that she even started to cry but yet the laugh seemed even more like a cackle. Her eyes were red now.
"Just try," she said, her voice even deeper and echo. Her eyes went back blue and she let out a sigh. She rose up and shook her head.
"No.. Don't heal me," She said. She tried standing up, taking on the threat that the siblings had said. She didn't care. It might actually be good to be out for days. Her mind closed off from all that is happening.
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Hearing them talk to her, she let out a sinister chuckle. It wasn't only her blood that attracted the demon. She could feel them put the sutra's on her arms. Her eyes turned again, the demon inside her angry. She watched them sit back, and her eyes grew even more dark.
"You think..it's my blood?" she cackled. She watched them closely.
"You're wrong," she said in a hiss. She sat up and tore the sutra's off, throwing them at the ground. She got in a defensive position to fight. The movement made her want to scream out, for the pain in her stomach. It had still hurt. She was ready to attack. And nothing would stop her now.
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I've been a busy little bee today :3

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Jordyn watched as some sort of person had come up and started casting some sort of spell. That is what it looked like to her, but whatever it was, was pointless. She felt nothing different, only, the beast was gone. Her eyes had gone back normal and back blue again, and she felt so calm again. The beast had gone away for a while. She chuckled softly and felt her knee's give out, and she fell back, off the building, now falling towards the ground. Her heart sank and it felt like a roller coaster as she began to fall. Was this really the end? Damn that stupid demon inside her

But why would the demon even lead her there? Did the demon want her to fall down? Maybe that was her goal. When she was dead, the demon would take over. No more problems out of the human. It made her think more. She felt too weak now to turn and grab a pole or something on the way down. It was thirty stories after all. Maybe, she would die, and the demon would wreak havoc on the town, but why stop there?

Maybe the demon would even hurt her friends. No.. She wouldn't let that happen. She wouldn't! Her eyes started to pulsate, a rather purple color now. She felt no demonic aura, but she felt power. It came from the crystal. It was a power that she had never felt before. Maybe, all she needed was faith.. The faith to help her friends. She wouldn't leave them without a fight

She watched the fall as she grew more and more closer to the ground. Her eyes filled with tears. She had to think fast, but it was hard. Her body still felt so tired, and so weak. She grabbed onto a flagpole and held on tightly. It was hard. Very hard. She let out a small gasp as she looked down and saw it was still too much of a high jump. Maybe about five more stories. The fall seemed short though..

"Shiro....Kuro..." she said softly. She knew they couldn't hear her, but it was worth a try. The power in her grew even more, as she felt herself getting stronger. The weakness felt as if it passed over her, and that she could now feel a light presence over herself. Though she thought, her new friends would probably jump too, to save her. Gladly she hoped none of them would, because she grabbed the flagpole. She felt one of her fingers slip, and her whole body jerked down.

"No!" she shouted aloud. It wasn't fair now! The demon in her had made her go this far. The demon was making her pay. Why!? What did she ever do to it!? When she dies, the demon is free, to kill Shiro... Kuro.... Frank.... all her loved ones. She couldn't even bear the thought. Another one of her fingers slipped.

"Stop!" she shouted. please, just make her fingers stay on the pole. She tried to reach up with her other hand, but it was a worthless try as she couldn't bear to move another muscle, She whimpered as she felt one more finger let loose. All it came down to, was her last finger, which slowly scrapped against the edge, until it slipped, and she started falling again.
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Sexy Sheva, Apr 14, 2008
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