If there is one thing I am finding consistently throughout your work, it is that you have an incredible sense of timing (0:53-54 in particular stands out). It is on the beat and matches the emotions of the song. While I am not such a fan of text-in-videos, you should look at limiting the colours to sut the scene you're overlaying - biggest moment of "Gah, text!" was 0:28 - 0:33 with purple, red, yellow and pink in the span of 4 seconds, none of which had anything to tie them in to the more muted colours of the scene behind it. Also with text - I recommend putting it all in a word processor first just to double check spelling and grammar - 1:04 "my Head's in the clouds;" shouldn't have the capitalised H, for example. I've learnt that from my own personal experience of spelling a band's name wrong on a poster and I didn't notice it because graphic and video programs don't have a spellcheck function. It's small things that are really easily fixed. Congrats on the win and look forward to competing with you for that honour sometime soon (if I ever finish my next video... :P)
