Recent Content by Thebazilly

Excellent job. Chapter 1 was better than Chapter 2, I think. But it's some good writing, which is hard to find in fanfics.

Remember, always start a new paragraph when a new character speaks.

Like this:

Sora looked at Riku. “You know, I think Kairi is probably really worried by now.â€

Riku sighed. “She’s probably at home spazzing because we aren’t there.â€

“No kidding,†Sora replied.

And if only two characters are talking, it's pretty safe to leave off the dialogue tags every once in a while.

I remember this being discussed before, but oh well.

That's Roxas. I have learned how to differentiate every member of he Organization with their hoods up, and that looks like Roxas to me. Roxas has those shoulder proportions, and stands with his hips forward like that. The perspective is all that makes him look taller.

Great job, yet again! I think the Zexion battle was the best yet. And I'm glad to see something exciting is going on in Radiant Garden now. Besides a battle, of course. ^^;

Well, anyway, keep up the good work!

I've never managed to beat Riku on the first race, which is of course the important one (*Rolls eyes*), or in a fight on Destiny Islands. Tips for racing him though are: remember that part of the brigde falls in the beginning of the race, use the zipline, or Riku will, it's the fastest way down, even with the time it takes to climb the ladder, come back across the treetops (that's the fastest line I know of), and try not to lose your composure, because you'll definitely lose then. ^^

I got Final Form while leveling up Wisdom in TWTNW. *Shrugs.* Can't give you any advice other than TWTNW has a higher chance of driving Final Form.

<_<

Riku.

Agreed. Avatar is pretty original. And your evidence is pretty flimsy.

Yeah, there's a pinned thread for XIV member discussion.

Wow, it just keeps getting better and better! Great job, except I don't think "accusatorily" is a word. "Accusationally" is, though. ;)

ROFL. Foxxie, you are a comedic genius!

And Luxord is finally going to get Xigbar, huh?

Both lines were said by Xemnas. He's saying that Roxas looks a lot like Sora.

Just going to put in my two cents on the XIV Member. I do not think she is Aqua. And here's some of my proof:

The proof that most people hang their assumption on is the video in KH2: FM+, where Xemnas enters the Room of Sleep and converses with Aqua's armor. But also in that video, Xigbar and Zexion are talking about the Organization. Xigbar has been ordered by Xemnas to recruit new members. And he says the newest member at that time is MARLUXIA. It's also obvious that Aqua is not alive/a regular human any longer, since Xemnas has possession of her armor and Keyblade. If Aqua had become a Nobody, Xigbar would have recruited her into the Organization then. But the latest member was Marluxia, and not Quaax or something like that.

I have some more evidence as well, if you'd like to argue with me.

LOL. I can imagine them having girl talk time. *Cracks up.*

Donald can get pretty annoying. I managed to tune out his voice after a while, though. :P

And if Japanese voices count, I'm saying Mickey, too. It was just... weird.