"Ok! Can he take me back to the Village I was in before?" Katie asked excitedly
"Ok, atleast we can get out of here!" Katie said smileing and opened the front door
Its really good! Mabey you should write another one! :D
lol, yeah thats true!
"How do I know your not just fooling me?" Orochimaru said, still having his guard up. "What? Sora why are you betraying us?! I want the old you back!" Breanna said as tears forced down her face "Please! I cant stand to see you like this!" "haha, Sora it looks like the form your in now is eating you alive but you dont want to go back to being a weak pathetic human, now do you? Why even listen to that girl when you have all the power you could ever dream of right in the form you have now? "
I really like 1,4, and 5 but thats my opinion.
"A deal you say? What deal?" Orochimaru said, not letting his guard down. "Dont do it master, its obviously a trick!" The monster said, getting ready to deffend Orochimaru. Breanna just staired in confushion. "What is Sora talking about?" she thought, a little curious
"You insignificant fool! I will never hold back to a kill!" Orochimaru said getting angry and the monster squeezed Rikku harder. ooc: I just dont know if Jap will actually let me kill her... lol "Rikku! Sora stop him from killing Rikku! Please!" Breanna said with tears filling up her eyes "Yes Sora! Stop me, that is if you can actually stop me!" He said while more heartless and clones came pooring in.
even if we dont really know eachother I hate to see a great member leave this site! Come back real soon and have a blast in DW!
ooc: actually I think its spelled simultaneously "Ha, I dont think so!" Orochimaru said taking back his heartless and attacking Sora's. "And all this time, I thought you were against heartless!" Orochimaru said, the monster squeezing Rikku's neck to where she was barely alive. "I can squeeze the life out of her with one singel move! So surrender now or have her die because instead of spending all my time on fighting you could save her but their will be a penalty or you can just have her die. Its your choice!" "Sora, dont do it! You dont know what he's capable of!" Breanna said, getting a little nervous "Yes Sora, you might want to re-think that!" He said laughing
I blame you for Homework!
and now V's leaving? What else could go wrong?!
"Kairi!!" Breanna said, trying to break out of the parilisation. "How did she do that?" Breanna thought in her head. "Why would I tell a brat like you?" Orochimaru said, the monster squeezing Rikku's neck even harder then before. Then Orochimaru looked over to the black heartless that looked like Sora "Come now Sora, what are you going to do now? All of your friends are in a tight situation, with or without your heartless form! Speaking of heartless, why dont I let some out right now?" Orochimaru said while pure dark circles formed upon the ground and heartless began to come out.
oh no! Did I come too late to say my goodbye? If im not too late I just wanted to say goodbye V! Ill miss you and your storys! Hope you get a good grade so you can come back real soon!!! Till then, TTFN!
thats the good thing! Yay! But to bad its soooo close from being done... :(
I could eat it but how do I know that your not lieing? >_>
I like the background but theirs something about the character that I dont like... mabey because it blends to much with the background.... :unsure:
Ive heard alot of talk about this and my question is..... Does anyone hate Miley Cyrus/ Hannah Montanna? Sorry if its in the wrong place and if this thread has already been made....
Thats true! How do you know its really, truely, her? It could just be someone thats ubsessed with her....
lol! Why does the story have to end so soon?
