Well ,when two guys are stabbiong their tongues down someone's throat, here it's PG-13 or 14A.
Well, obviuosly, you don't understand what PG is. The sentence is 14A. In Canada, we use that term. It also had quite a few grammar mistakes. But spelling was good. I didn't get a feeling of what the character was doing or anything, so it was kind of unimaginative. I'd give you, out of 5, a 2.
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THAT SONG! -points- EVIL! I HEARD IT AND SAW AN AMV OF IT! QUIET ZEXY!~
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Dance in Shrii's What? Dance in what?
No, thank you. I have a gf already...I don't want anyone dancing in my underwearz. =/ And ya, it rox ^^
Okay, good. Just so you know the rules.
No dancing there please... And FH is Forum Helper
Remember, you can only win once xD
I'm happy! I actually am getting closer to FH!
I read all the stories and pick out the best. Basically, what Roxas did, but I do it now. :3
No problem. I hope more people enter the story contest I hope they know that I am the person and they actually READ it.
I'm the JUDGE! :D :D :D :D I'M SO HAPPY!
Red: It's okay. Pink: It happened to me once, so don't worry about it. Gray: And it was a great effort.
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It should be "...has been lost for..." Should be: "...was in complete pain..." You just said it was Natalie. You contradicted yourself there. Altogehter, I was confused how the Twilight gang got caught up and how they tied in. And Naminé wasn't really in the story that much either. All in all, though...I give you a 3.5/5
I'm confused as to what it's saying. Is it saying they go there and get the kids high?
Heya all! I'm the new Story of the Week personnel! Now, Throughout the week, I will read stories and all that, and then I will claim the winner and a runner-up. Since I am the person, I have the right to read and say if I like them or not. Not to say you’re horrible if I don’t pick you, it just means some others caught my eye. Please enter your entries. ~iPraise ^_^
