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  1. TheOtherKeyblade
    Don't give me that innocent look, Mr chain-saw-massacre. You know what I mean. xD

    Why do I have a feeling your making things twice as difficult just to infuriate me? :: pout:: Meanie. That's fine, I'll figure it out anyways. Don't underestimate me. >: D

    Don't worry about new people not reading. They'll come to their senses eventually. xD Keep up the awesome work! ::thumbs up::
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 28, 2007 in forum: Archives
  2. TheOtherKeyblade
    I'm here. Sorry it took me so long. I took a left turn at the News Forms and found myself in a thread where people were chasing each other with Chainsaws? O.o (Yeah, you know what I'm talking about. :D )

    Anyways... Wow. Much much better style of writing. Just... much more wonderful. More discriptions, which I won't lie, I'm kinda a junkie for, and I am really starting to like Kuro. I feel as if your previous story was a prolouge to something far greater. I'm really excited.

    Now you know the drill, now I have to be mean. :: puts mean face on:: mmkay, biggest thing you need to learn, and I noticed this before but I feel as if I was pelting you with too much other crit to nail you in the forhead with yet another- Type out the WORDS of your numbers, even if it is 1... it's much prettier to see "There was one keyblade lying on the ground," than "There was 1 keyblade lying on the ground." Twenty, thirty, hundred and sixty-nine... type them out. I know big pain, but something that just makes things eaiser to read. ::nod::

    The other things, I misread, but now typing it I smacked myself in the forhead and went, "Doylie, you Doink, You can't read when you're tired...." Yeah. Sorry about that... Now saying that I shouldn't be here... I should be finishing up my AP Art papers and portits so I can sleep...

    Hold it!- Whoa now.

    Wait a darn pickin' moment.... I thought he was- but then this is- You said- and Sora was- You mean he's NOT Xheanort?! ::falls over:: Now you got me all confuzzled and twisted around. But I will figure it out. >.< My skills of perception shall figure it out!!
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 27, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. TheOtherKeyblade
    Hmm, that's a tough one.

    Although I may have rotten fruit thrown at me very soon, I love Inuyasha/Kikyo from Inuyasha. Not to say I don't adore Inuyasha/Kagome, but there is something intresting about Kikyo. And no not the fact she is dead. :rolleyes:

    It's the same with Kenshin/Tomoe from Ruroni Kenshin. I also love Kenshin/Karou, but Tomoe is such a beautiful character and such a part of Kenshin's own character that it make it's very wonderous.

    I also love TidusXYuna and CloudxAries... ::giggle:: EdxWinry and RoyxRiza from FMA is also Adorable.


    Oh and Vincent/Tifa. xD It's cute.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 26, 2007 in forum: Anime and Manga
  4. TheOtherKeyblade
    xD Yeah. You really shouldn't mess with Nami. She'll mess you up. ::giggle::

    You always tend to boost my ego when I need it most. xD Thanks.

    I understand. Actually, I was reading your fic when I should have been paying attention in english. ;) Shh, don't tell anyone. I havn't gotten to the point where I can reveiw though... close though. xD

    Anyways thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed it. When people read my stories I want them to be entertained. After all that's why you read, ne?
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 26, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. TheOtherKeyblade
    Oh I know you will. XD
    Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

    I am kinda wondering why people don't comment either. :( I know it's not amazing but still. xP

    I still need to check out your new Story... O.O I is so excited.

    Well, Broken Chains is already up at FF-net. Link in Siggy. But I'll be posting up little tidbits like this as I go to catch new readers. Thanks for the sweet comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 26, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. TheOtherKeyblade
    I understand that. And I will say I find you a rarity among guys. I think I generalize and I apologize about that. It's just so many guys I see (and being an artist, I'm very much an observer) don't even consider people around them much less any sort of chivalrous act... I've seen guys who will let a mom with a baby stand, juggling the crying child and her bags all at once while still holding their seat. So, thank you for that. Really. :D

    Just... Well, I am all about being "one of the guys". I play video games (Obviously xD) and can kick most of my guy friends butt at Halo, which I am darn proud of, and love hust hanging out with them laughing and being as relaxed as wel are. But still, I'm just reminded of my friend Mitch, who , when it would rain, wouldwalk the girls at school who forgot their umbrella down to their car before going home himself. We were all good friends (At a school of 68 you were friends with everyone. ) ant yet he was always very chivalrous. I'm not saying go crazy... just, don't forget your girl friends are girls too.

    I dunno... maybe I'm asking too much. ^^;

    I can see where you're coming from, but still, I feel as if it could be used ALOT more than it is.

    Women killed it huh? I can see that. It has either become a trait by which to rate guys or a creepy move to pick up girls. O.o I suppose that's what makes me mad more than anything is just that. It's no longer as you said "a code of conduct for people to live by".

    I really like your idea of the continuation of chivalry in other ways. I always get made fun of by my friends when I let someone past by on the road. xD I guess we should go by the fact that chivalry isn't just for guys. But- I suppose that's the world we live in. Fast food, fast service, fast transportaion. Sometimes I find myself thinking- "I'm sharing this bus with a person that I'll never meet again. We share the same air for just a moment and then move on without even knowing who each other are...." It's kinda sad.

    Gah, I'm rambling agian.

    Me too. I love it when my guy friends just open the door or walk me to my car at night (though I can handle myself). For me it's just a way of showing "I know you can take care of yourself but I still care." xD And (although I know not everyone is religious) isn't that why God gave women to men? So that they could protect each other? There is a great Quote my Youth Pastor gave to me once that said-

    "God did not create Women out of Man's head so that she could be above him, nor from under his feet so that he could crush her, but from in his side so she could stand tall next to him, and from under his arm to be protected by him."

    I think that fit perfectly. xD

    I just find so many girls a school who act so uptight about it. It's just odd to me who grew up learning such a differant set of guidlines.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 26, 2007 in forum: Discussion
  7. TheOtherKeyblade
    H'okay, this is something I really wonder about. I have been fortunate enough to grow up with very Gentlemanly young men who are very good about their manners and how they treat ladies, both their peers and older.

    However, as I have left that community (Private school xD) I have found that not all guys do that. Actually I only know of one guy But the girls shrug and say their strong enough to open doors and pull out chairs themselves. I mean I see it every once and a while when a guy wants to impress a girl... but it just dosn't seem genuine.

    Call me old-fashioned (Though I'm only 18), but is Chivalry really dead? I suppose I just want to know-

    Girls! Does it offend you that guys hold doors open or make you wait till they come around and open the car door for you? Do you really think that these old fashioned normalites are pointless and not to mention sexist? O.o

    Guys? Is is weird to hold wait for a girl to sit before you do at dinner? to take those few extra steps to get ahead of the girl you're walking with (girlfriend or just friend) so you can open the door for her?


    Or am I completely Crazy? Do I live in a dream world? Do you think Chivalry is dead?


    ((Hmm, me thinks I should have put a Rant warning on this. xD))
    Thread by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 26, 2007, 20 replies, in forum: Discussion
  8. TheOtherKeyblade
    H'okay, I said I wasn't uploading any more of Broken Chains here, but I do want to grab new readers so here is a BIG sneak peek into one of the future chapters of my fic. xD So here it is. One of my pride and joys of this little ficcy. My Deymx and Namine battle. I always thought that these two Nobodies were always a little underestimated but it wasn't really planned they they end up fighting each other in the fic. It just sort of happened. Anywho- please read and hopefully go check out the rest of the Fanfic.

    Slight explination: The Organization is tired of playing games with Riku and waiting for Sora to wake up. As punishment for the Melodious Nocture they send him to retreive the sleeping Hero as the assorments of Dusks keep DiZ and the King busy. However, Namine get's there first, ready to protect Sora if need be.

    o.X.X.X.X.X.o​

    Namine’s eyes narrowed as the black robed figure pushed his hood back, revealing a cheerful face, matched by equally cheerful bright eyes. He grinned at her, glanced up at the glass case behind her before cocking his head in thought. Namine clutched her hands to her chest as she tried to figure out how many minutes she could hold the other Nobody off until DiZ could get there… or Riku returned.

    The place where her heart should have been gave a dull throb. She decided not to hold her breath on that one.

    “Well, well, look who it is? If it isn’t the little artist…†He winked at her and Namine felt slightly patronized.

    “Demyx…†She replied tightly, her voice catching slightly. She narrowed her eyes more, “I’m not going to just let you have him.â€

    He sighed, shoulders slumping as he did so. He ruffled his odd hair cut and leaned to one side. “Oh come on, Namne. We both know I’m not the fighting type.â€

    “Neither am I.†Namine responded, just as tightly as before, “What to you want?â€

    Demyx didn’t answer for a moment, but merely began to pace to the right, a thoughtful look on his face. Namine felt tense, as if all the humidity in the room had been sucked dry. Suddenly it was very hard to swallow.

    “You know…†the black robed nobody paused, something akin to sadness in his strange blue eyes, “Axel left a few months ago. He came after Roxas too… but not for the same reasons. I think he thought he could save Roxas…â€He gave a sad chuckle, “Pretty stupid of him. Now Roxas has to do it as someone else. At least before he was still-â€

    Namine wondered what Demyx would do if he knew the red headed fire elemental has found his friend still separated from his other half… and now both worked for her. Well, worked in the loosest sense of the word. She decided now wasn’t the best time to bring that up. She let out a short breath,

    “Then why are you here?â€

    “We just want Roxas back…†Demyx looked up, his grin back, wider than before. “I miss my little buddy.â€

    “He’s not here!†Namine suddenly let out, her voice cracking as she did. It was too dry.

    Suddenly she realized that the water elemental was stealing all the moisture from the room. He was going to take Sora by force… She tried to ignore the fear pounding throughout her body as she continued,

    “Roxas couldn’t help me so I sent him away,†She half-lied, feeling more and more desperate. “So leave. Go find your Key of Destiny someplace else.â€

    Demyx looked slightly confused, staring up at the case and then back down to the young blonde.

    “So Sora-“

    “Is Sora.†Namine answered tightly, “Go look for Roxas someplace else.â€

    Demyx paused a moment more, staring up at Sora once again. Presently, his grin returned. Namine took a step back, feeling her bare shoulders press up against the glass case.

    "Hmm, maybe they did send the right guy..." He chuckled, as his hand shot upward and the sudden glow nearly blinded Namine. When she was able to see clearly, the blue sitar was already in Demyx's hands-

    "Ready for a little jam session, Namine?"

    Protect him, please.

    Namine narrowed her eyes, her own fingers twitching by her sides. Demyx stared in slightly surprise, as the darkness swirled there, slowly taking form. She felt some sort of grim satisfaction as the heavy feeling of metal in her small hands. She looked back up, her face somewhere between determined and angry. The metal links rattled in her hands-

    Chains.

    "Only if you are." She said darkly.

    o.X.X.X.X.X.o

    Link to the Rest of Broken Chains can be found in my Siggy.
    Thread by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 25, 2007, 4 replies, in forum: Archives
  9. TheOtherKeyblade
    :P I think we said Untitled as a joke, but then both realized we kinda liked it. xD

    Um, I'll check with him, but I don't see why not. He seems pretty laid back and we're allowed to have up to three people in a group.

    ::shrug::
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 24, 2007 in forum: The Playground
  10. TheOtherKeyblade
    mmkay I'll enter. Mine are a bit more serious that most people (I think. I only browsed a few)

    Namine's Rinse

    Hard to be Faithful- Roxiri Tribute

    Yeah, two of my favoirte Crack!shippings. I wish I had my Namiku up because I totally enter that. ::evil laugh:: but I'll save that for mext time.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 24, 2007 in forum: The Playground
  11. TheOtherKeyblade
    Wanna Join Team Untitled with KL93 and myself? We have room for one more. xD
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: The Playground
  12. TheOtherKeyblade
    Good Lord I leave for two seconds

    ... mmkay like two minutes, but Man you all are fast. I is so slow.

    You make me feel so little. I'm going to be a big college kid next year. ::looks proud::

    Yeah, not I must go shower. And I'm taking Marly's shampoo with me. >: D
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Forum Families
  13. TheOtherKeyblade
    Yeah DeathSpank said he going to try and fix them as soon as he can... apperantly there were problems withthe server. :(

    Thank you thank you thank you for Sora's though. You're a hero.

    You deserve a cape and catchy theme song. xD
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Production Studio
  14. TheOtherKeyblade

    Not yet, I've been swamped and I got into a wreak on Saturday so even less time now. O.o Ew...
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Forum Families
  15. TheOtherKeyblade
    Yeah sorry about that. Senior year leaves alot of personal time shoved under the bed. xP

    And AP exams are coming up. Gah, shoot me.

    ::Xigbar aims gun::

    Not literally, Xiggy.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Forum Families
  16. TheOtherKeyblade
    ::slips inside with groceries and starts up the stairs only to see Marly come crashing down past her.::

    Um... Hi Marly.

    ::everyone else come crashing past her as well::

    Hey guys...

    Hmm, this is what happens when one leaves for multiple days. You end up confused and with a pile of siblings at the bottem of the stairs.

    xD
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Forum Families
  17. TheOtherKeyblade
    xD Oh okay.

    Wow thank you SO much. That seriously just made my month. :3 Yay more AMV material.

    You're feeding my Addiction. O.O
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Production Studio
  18. TheOtherKeyblade
    Oh I was confused a minute there. xD It was Requiem For A Dream... I can see if I still have it on my comp. if you want.

    And i don't mind about the quality. To have them at all would tickle me pink. :p
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Production Studio
  19. TheOtherKeyblade
    Wow. You really shouldn't inflate my ego like that. xD My ideas of Grandure are bad enough as it.

    Thank you so much. I was grinning like a stupid idiot for the rest of the day after reading that. I had a really bad weekend and that really gave me a boost. xD I'm really glad you enjoyed and (secretly) glad you didn't have any real plans for that prompt. I think I went AP English kid on you and read too much into it.

    And you used juxtaposition (correctly!) in a sentance! ::stupid grin:: Wow. You are my new hero.
    Post by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 23, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. TheOtherKeyblade
    Ollette/Sora. Personally I thought I was the only one crazy enough to even consider them, but apparently ロクサス share the same brainwaves. Yeah, sorry about that ロクサス . xD

    It was quite a challenge, both the prompt and trying to keep them in character, but I enjoyed it. Additionally I changed from the prompt’s first person view to my personal style, third person… omniscient or limited. I always get those mixed up/mashed together. It’s slightly shorter than the Larxene/Axel one I did. I could have forced it to be a bit longer, but I found that it made it awkward. And since I already felt this was a little OCC (Well other than it being CRACK!paring) I decided that wasn’t a good idea. O.o So it’s topped off at about 900 some words.

    Anywho, I’m rambling again. This is for ロクサス. Enjoy the crack, my friend. xD

    ___xXX___​

    Remembrance

    She could never remember the last thing they talked about.

    When he came to visit, keeping his promises as always, she would give him such a smile so that her nose scrunched up and her eyes sparkled that special green. She’s lean to one side, hand on her hip, to ask once again if he had done his homework yet. Her voice would take that special cadence of a mother watching over her children, a different sort of protector.

    He understood the need to protect someone.

    Yet her braids would swing to one side, as her voice switched to a normal teen when she stated with a sigh that ‘Independent studies are the worse, aren’t they?’. She’d double check her special wallet, a deep orange pouch she made herself, and announce proudly that she had just enough for some sea-salt ice cream. She would proceed to ask him if he wanted to join them up on the tower to watch the ever setting sun and have one.

    He couldn’t help the confusion that buried itself deep in his chest. He shouldn’t remember such specific things about her.

    The color of her eyes (A deep emerald green that contrasted with the bright orange she wore) or the way she laughed (short and soft that oddly reminded him of the sunsets back home) or even the odd flips of her hair (which she would always complain about, saying they would never stay in her braids no matter how hard she tried). He really shouldn’t know any of that.

    After all, she could never remember anything about him.

    Although her smile was genuine, reaching into those unique green eyes, she always had to be reminded why he didn’t come back sooner. He apologize and state (only once more, because she’d remember next time) that he was looking for his friends, that other worlds called to him, and she’d just laugh and shake her head.

    He would realize she had already forgotten.

    Of course he’d have to explain (yet again) why he didn’t have his own independent studies because he didn’t go to school (and hadn’t gone to school in the past two years) and that he was sorry for bugging her while she was working.

    Then, she’d offer the ice cream and He’d remind her he had never tried it (Why did they always seemed to be sold out when he went to buy one), but at the same time be thankful (the only time he was thankful) that she forgotten that he… well, didn’t like heights.

    Of course it wouldn’t matter if he did tell her.

    Because she’d just forget.

    Because after all of that, She’d ask him why he didn’t come back more often, She’d promise to help him with his homework, offer him one more bar of Sea-Salt ice cream, de je vu took over as she dragged him up those stupid tower steps and laugh as he tried very hard not to look down.

    Of course he had done this a thousand times before (Goofy would suggest he was over reacting), and would probably do a thousand times again (Donald would then say he was definitely exaggerating).

    He figured he really shouldn’t be upset about it. After all he was never in Twilight Town for long and the bright eyed girl had her own life. However, the sensitive Keyblade Master couldn’t help feeling forgotten.

    Sora didn’t like feeling forgotten.

    He sat on the Twilight Town Station steps as Goofy and Donald ran off finding the last items they needed before they left the safety of Twilight town once again. Sora sighed, leaning one elbow on his knee, his chin in his hand. The Sun was setting (again) almost like it was mocking him. He refrained from telling his Twilight Friends goodbye, knowing the one person who he wanted to remember it wouldn’t.

    He didn’t want to leave. He didn’t want her to forget about him again, but of course there was nothing he could do about that. Sora pouted, fixing his intense blue stare on the cobble stones

    “You should get a job next time you come.â€

    Her voice tore him out of his thoughts. He looked up to see her brilliant green eyes staring calmly back at him, neither accusing nor inviting. She cocked her head to one side, the braids falling with it. Sora opened his mouth to tell her that he didn’t need a job, the heartless dropped plenty of objects behind he could pick up, but the words died on his lip with a sigh.

    It’d only spark more questions he already answered.

    More things she had already forgotten.

    “Yeah…†He turned away, resting his outstretched arms on his knees. “I probably should.â€

    “Hmm, you could work with Hayner next time. Get ready for the struggle tournament.â€

    She forgot he didn’t like to fight friends (Not since having to fight Riku), even in the struggle tournament. Sora felt more and more deflated his shoulders slumping with every word, “Uh-huh.†He stood and started off toward town.

    She seemed confused, catching his arm, her voice taking that protecting tone again. “Sora?â€

    Sora sighed. He hated being forgotten. He wanted her to remember that he didn’t go to school, that he had a universe to save, that he didn’t mind the Tower’s heights as long as she was laughing behind him, holding on to his arm so he wouldn’t fall, that he had never had sea-salt ice cream and that maybe one day he could finally have one with her and she’d actually remember the look on his face when he spit out the first bite.

    “Ollette?†He asked not turning back to look at her.

    “Sora.†She replied equally as serious.

    Sora sighed, “Will you remember me?â€

    “What? Of course I will.â€

    Sora didn’t believe her.

    After all, she could never remember the last thing they talked about.

    So he decided to give her something to remember.

    Spinning around and grabbing her chin in one smooth movement, Sora gently placed a kiss on her forehead, right between those two vibrant eyes. When he pulled back, her eyes were wide with surprise but Sora didn’t say anything. He just smiled and nodded and with a small wave turned around and ran off to find his comrades.

    Sora grinned to himself as he ran.

    With any luck, She’d remember that.


    ___xXx___​

    If you would like to request a story, then the link is in my Siggy...
    Thread by: TheOtherKeyblade, Apr 22, 2007, 2 replies, in forum: Archives