:) I'll take you up on that offer. It'll be intresting to see what each of us come up with. Here's mine to you. xD Pairing/Ship/Character: Roxas/Kairi Prompt: Roxas suddenly had a new favorite flavor- Cinnamon Have fun. You'd be surprised what you can do when you try. (that didn't sound cliche as all. ;) )And the wonderful people in the fourm are very supportive. xD If you want me to write something just think. Come up with and idea and be as crazy as you want. And yes. School can drive a person to many a thing. ::is suffering from senioristis as we speak::
::laugh:: I can do either one. But by prompt I ment just a word or phrase that'll get me going. I should have done an example. xD (Will add this Ex. to the main post) Such as: See? But If you want I can do one or the other. xD Humor's not my forte (Fluffy and/or mind-rambles :p) but if you want I can try.
Gah! You left me behind. I feel lost... and now have security issuses. xP I have always been stuck between this chapter and the last as my favorite. But I think I'm choosing this one. SO many good parts I can't even chose... actually I can. ::giggle:: For starters.I'm not a big Roxas/Namine fan but wow- That was so Amazing. And WAIT A MINUTE!! I found my new crack!shipping..... LARXENE/RIKU!! Wow. I really need to lay off the sugar. xP Ahem, Riku's attempts at waking up Sora was Prolly the cutest thing on the face of the planet. And then there goes that stuffed turtle... again. God, I love that Turtle. I'd qoute my favoirt parts of the breakfast scene but then I'd end up qouting the whole thing. xD But I do have one thing to say before I go! "Ow! Sharp pointy thing under my window!" EDIT: Ahem I apologize for the comple and total spazziness of this reveiw. I was on SO much caffine and suger and STRESS. >.<
I have a little form, it's nothing fancy, it's just so what I draw turns out how your chacter looks. xD Again, if you don't want to fill it out, it's cool. Just beware, my creative jucies get the better of me. :: evil laugh:: Yeah, remeber what I said about Starbucks? xD Darksmile, I'm so sad to hear about your Grandda. I have never had any grandparents so I don't know how if feels to lose one of them, but I do know how it feels to lose family in general. :( My heart goes out to you and I hope you smile soon.
Aw, thankie. I hope to get alot better one day. Hmm if I draw her I'm going to need more info than that actually. If you want me to draw her, PM me and I'll send you the Character form I use for people OC's. XD Yay that'll be fun. Have you posted the Fanfic? Speaking of ficcys. I need to check on my little chickies over in the creative Thread.
Hi all. Thanks I feel rather welcome. ::giggle:: You just qouted PoTC. xD I think I'm going to like it here. KHChick, I can draw. I think I'm pretty goof.I'm going to college for it. xD Next year, but that's beside the point. And my forte is Character design. If you want you can Check my DA if you're not sure. Umm,,, yeah. So point of Ref. You don't want to put me next to the starbucks. xD It'll be bad for the whole family. Got a library? I can stay near there. Something tells me I post too slow. ::laugh::
::knocks on the door:: 'ello? Yo. I'm new to the forum, and I figured I needed to join a family since I'm needy like that. xD And this is where are the cool people seem to live so I was wondering if you all have an extra room? If not for a daughter, maybe a family friend to crash for a bit? (Not to steal your thunder Zexion of the Twilight. xD)
I'm here. Lazy reviewer come back from the dead. xP Sorry about that. I actually have to go to school tomarrow, so now I'm trying to finish up some paintings and all that jazz. Ew. Anywho. Wow. this is getting even MORE intresting. Why do I get the idea of betrayal and "crossing into the darkside" by someone. Watch it be Auqa because I have a soft spot for her. xD And dang it, Xehanort why'd you have to show up. :[ I was still holding Kuro out to be Xehanort but not KNOW he was Xehanort. Oh well. I really need to quit trying that whole future reading thing. I'm no good at it. Ok, Constructive Crit time. You've gotten alot better at Discriptions as far as the image, but now it's time to work on word order otherwise known as Syntax. (Man, AP English has ruined my life. :p ) Sometimes your discriptions seem a little listy such as (exageration) "She was tall, thin, had bright eye, and a Balloon ." So try to rearange your sentances so they flow better. "The bright eyed woman towered over the rest of the crowd so that her Balloon seemed to touch the sky." Pretty, ne? mmkay. I really can't wait till the next Chapter. Cause dangit... Xehanort. You ruin everything. ::pout::
Aww thank you so MUCH! Wow. Everyone really seems to love that Solo. Never underestimate the power of a Sitar. XD Aw, thankie. Thank all of you! Your comments mean the world to me.
This'll be the last Chapter I load here at KH-vids because nobody seems to want to read much less reveiw. I'l still loading at FFnet (link in my Sig) But I'm just taking up room here on the forum for Stories people WANT to read. So... If you are reading, sorry. I just don't know because nobody reveiws. I'll prolly upload snippits here and there to catch new readers but no more chapters. Thanks for letting me take up your time anyway. And don't think you've seen the last of me yet. ::Evil Laugh:: Summary: This story takes place in an alternate universe and begins after CoM at the start of KHII after Roxas’ Story. However, there are a few differences that make this Story AU. When Sora refuses to forget Namine he is left with broken memories he insists on remembering himself. Yet while he sleeps his world is slowly disolving around him. Can his other half save his home while his best friend continues to search for a way to wake him up? His childhood friend continue to forget him as Kairi slowly crumbles under the weight of her own forgotten memories. They are all running out of time as The Organization continues to find ways to hurt them all. | Chapter I and II | Chapter III | Chapter IV | Chapter V | Broken Chains Trailer | _____XxX_____ Chapter Five: Dark Side of Memories “I've never tried to block out the memories of the past, even though some are painful. I don't understand people who hide from their past. Everything you live through helps to make you the person you are now.†- Sophia Loren The darkness hissed in anger as the key blade passed through the air. It clashed on its opponent’s weapon, metal on metal sending sparks out into the black. The boy wielding the blade kicked out, sending both himself and his opponent flying backwards. He quickly arched his back and flipped over, landing lightly on his feet, bending with his weight and sliding slightly on the wet ground. Silver hair fell into his face; overtop the black blindfold lying over his eyes. He crouched there, breathing heavily, waiting for his opponent to move. Neither did for a long time, the rain pelting them both from above. Suddenly the hooded man across from him stood, chuckling darkly. “Such a shame…†He said lightly, his breath still catching up with him, “You could be of such use to us, Riku.†“Everyone seems to want me lately.†Riku smirked darkly, “I feel so popular.†“But you wouldn’t come.†The man laughed quietly again, “Even if we could bring back Sora-“ “Leave him out of this.†Riku ground out threateningly. His hand gripped the handle of his blade as he dipped his head in anger. “He is this.†The man took a step back motioning to their surroundings in one sweeping wave of his arm. “Think, Riku. You brought the Key of Destiny to him and yet he still didn’t wake. Do you think that he’ll ever wake up?†The silver haired teen saw what was coming. His boots ground the rocks into the pavement as he suddenly pushed himself up and sprinted toward the hooded in one fluid movement. His fingers barley brushed the silver beads on the cloak before he disappeared into the dark portal. “Farewell, Riku. Try not to die before we can meet again.†The voice echoed around the alley, bouncing off the neon signs and dark walls. Riku stood there panting slightly, staring where the portal was only minutes ago. He cursed under his breath, and fell to one knee, half leaning on The Road to Dawn and gripping his injured side with the other. Of course while he hadn't given his enemy the enjoyment of seeing him hurt like this looking back he decided that perhaps still fighting him as full strength wasn't his best idea. Riku brought his glove back to stare at the mixture of blood and darkness dripping off his fingers. No, not a good idea at all. He gave another grimace, gripping the ripped black material under his fingers before pushing himself back up. No use worrying about it now. He gave another glare at the spot his opponent disappeared and turned around to leave. Suddenly he wet his lips, catching the sent of darkness before the heartless began to crawl up from under him. They slowly emerged, pulling themselves out of the ground one limb at a time. Riku looked down the alley to both catch the sight and smell of what seemed to be a hundred more. Those already out numbered far more than he was ready to handle, as even more forced him into the corner of the alley. They sat there a moment, twitching their little heads almost as if the little daemons were capable of thought. He tense ready for another fight when his side gave an unprecedented jolt of pain. He fell to his knees again as his senses blurred. If he was more alert, he might have noticed how hesitant the creatures were to attack. But he wasn’t- Riku was tired and in pain, and although he wouldn’t admit it, phased by the man’s words. More and more appeared, all waiting in unison, twitching and scurrying back and forth. Riku finally pulled himself up, leaning on his blade slightly, still trying to catch his breath. Although breathing hurt he had learned it usually The darkness was making him faint, and he hated himself for it. As if sensing his fear, the Heartless attacked. Riku frowned. He really didn’t have time for this. He cursed again, as his blade passed through the first few. He tried to ignore the putrid smell of darkness dripping off his blade as he threw his free arm out to the side. A portal suddenly appeared, shimmering iridescent in the night. The Heartless swarmed toward him, hoping to catch their prey before he disappeared. Riku nearly blanched at the all consuming smell of darkness. Without a second thought, he plunged head first into the darkness. Dark memories flooded his sight. A voice Riku knew better than his own rumbled in his mind, and he panicked. (You can’t escape me.) The darkness threatened to push inside him, taking advantage of his weakened state of mind. He physically pushed away at the dark tendrils tumbling over his arms and snaking around his waist. The smell permeated his very being, nearly making him gag at the bitter cold taste. The voice chuckled darkly, latched into his mind like a vice. (I guess you’re still scared…) Suddenly Riku tumbled out into the sunlight, the harsh radiance blinding his eyes even from behind his blindfold. For half a moment, he thought he was dead, lost in the light, but then he heard it- The harsh grinding of gravel under his feet. He let out his breath and nodded, looking almost relived. He was still alive. He flopped into the grass beside the long winding road, still breathing heavily. The smell of darkness radiated off his clothes and skin, nearly choking him. His gloved fingers clawed at the soft ground beneath him, creating piles of upturned grass and dirt as the injury in his side gave a rather painful twinge. He nearly growled, angry at his own weakness. He took a deep breath, trying to calm himself again, and yanked the blindfold off his face. The sunlight made him wince and blink, but he laid there, arms flung out to his sides, as if he was trying to soak up as much sun as possible. He slowly closed his eyes, almost hesitant, as if afraid of what he would find in the darkness of his own mind. (“I’m not scared of the dark!â€) He opened his eyes with a grimace- Memories. They were coming back stronger and louder as time went on, and though he knew it meant Sora was waking up, he couldn’t help but wish they wouldn’t be so pushy. Riku had not lost as many of his memories of his best friend as others he had come across, apparently some perk of being part of the dark. Even the King had lost his precious few memories of the optimistic boy. Riku however, only lost certain memories, blurred faces and names of a world he felt he left behind forever- One that was returning full force. Of course there were those memories he wished would stay blurred- such as leaving his best friends for power that only darkness offered. That would be a memory he wouldn’t mind forgetting forever. He rolled to his side, and pushed himself up, staring at his surroundings and trying to ignore the shooting pain in his ribs. Bright green hills rolled into the distance under a perfect blue sky. The chocolate brown road stretched out for miles in front of him and although there was no destination in sight, he knew where this road lead to- Castle Oblivion. He frowned, his thoughts turning dark as he thought of the place. Why here of all places? Sora didn't reside in that Castle any more. Neither did Naminé... so why? Surprise suddenly took over his face as he felt his hands clench at his side and the darkness gather there. He quickly relaxed and let the darkness fade away. He sighed sadly and let his head hang. Darkness was like a drug, and in his anger and pain he kept drawing on that power more and more, becoming more and more addicted. Would he lose himself yet again? Suddenly a cold wet nose rubbed against his cheek, yanking him out of his quiet despair. Riku let out a surprised yelp and felt backwards, landing on the soft ground with a wince. He grabbed his side, hissing in pain as the yellow messenger came into view. After behind doubled over in pain a few moments, Riku looked up, sticking Pluto with a sharp glare. Although he was angrier at himself for being caught off guard, he felt as if the King's messenger was a perfect thing to blame. The poor thing merely nudged the boy with his nose in apology and offer the thin yellow roll of parchment to him. Riku tried to stay angry but the puppy's bright eyes had him duped. He sighed, still slightly annoyed as he gingerly sat down and opening the letter turning his back on the dog. Somewhere in the back of his mind he figured this might be slightly childish, pretending to ignore a dog, but he dismissed that as well. Pluto, figuring he had been somewhat forgiven nudged the silver hair boy again. "If Sora knew I was going so soft, he'd never let me live it down." Riku smiled, scratching the dog behind the ears. Pluto leaned into his hand, obviously enjoying the attention. Riku laughed and glanced back at his letter. Riku stopped, catching sight of the handwriting. It wasn't the king's normal scrawl draped across the page, but a simple curvy writing that was shaky and almost unintelligible at the moment. Riku frown, merely skipping to the bottom to confirm his suspicions. "Naminé." he muttered darkly. Pluto nudged the hand away, pushing at any hidden pockets the boy might have. Riku chuckled, and pulled out a half eaten loaf of bread. The messenger dog suddenly became twice as excited, and Riku absent mindedly chuckled the bread to the side and let the dog pounce on it. The silver haired teen narrowed his eyes as he turned back, searching through the rest of the message. What he found made him stand up suddenly despite the agonizing pain that continued the fester in his side. His bright aqua eyes scanned the letter again... and yet again. no matter how many times he read it, he couldn't mistake the message- His heart stopped beating. Sora? xXx "He's stronger than we expected.†One of the black cloaked men across the pure white room gave a slight chuckle which he unsuccessfully turned into a cough. The first, a cold no nonsense man, marked by the cross shaped scar on his face, glared back obviously offended. “You have something to say, Number IX?†The Amused Man shook his head, clearly still trying to hide his amusement. The First didn’t look contented, his icy blue glare fixed on the other, “I would disagree, Melodious Nocturne, for your… ‘laughter’ says otherwise.†He crossed his legs with the air of annoyance, as the other gave a sheepish shrug, “Do remember, Number IX that we Nobodies cannot be amused.†Number IX sat forward, pulling down his hood as he did so. A smile drapped across his younger features reached his sea-green eyes in a way none of his comrades could even hope to achieve. He was obviously smirking, as he brushed back strands from his oddly cut hair. “Just wondering, Saïx-“ his voice held his ever present cheerfulness even as those around him shifting uncomfortably. The Younger Nobody was being far more forward than normal. He didn’t seem to notice them or is Superior’s glare as he continued, “Do you only say that since he outplayed you?†The Lunar Diviner’s glare deepened, “Perhaps you would wish the assignment of testing him next?†The younger nobody visibly deflated, before forcing another bright smile on his face as well as another round of his overly-cheerful laughter, “You know I’m not the fighting type…†“Then you’d do your best to keep quiet.†“Number IX.†The calm but commanding voice broke through the building argument and every member stilled. Their eyes all traveled up to the highest seat where amber eyes glowed under his dark hood. “Treat your elders with more respect. Number VII, repeat your conclusion.†The Lunar Diviner looked up, anger fading out of his eerie yellow eyes and back into their dull emotionless state. “We were wrong to underestimate him. When I sent the heartless after him they hesitated, weighing who was stronger.†“You said you injured him.†Attention was diverged to one of the lower chairs where it’s occupant, a sturdy blonde, flipped a card his fingers. “Did the Heartless really consider him stronger? Even while twice as injured at yourself. That’s a gamble on their part.†“As if!†His neighbor waved off the insinuation, “The Heartless don’t have anything to lose, Luxord.†“Regardless.†The Lunar Diviner said loudly, bringing attention back to himself, “They still considered him a powerful entity.†The Superior nodded, bringing his hand to rest his covered chin in thought, “Understood. And yet-†He looked at the other expectantly. Saïx smiled, no happiness showing through, “If you wish sir, we could still break him. In the shadow of the Superior’s hood, another twisted smile appeared in his face, “He must have… a weak point. Find it.†The Lunar Diviner merely gave a short nod and disappeared into iridescent black. The amber eyes looked out over the others still waiting. They settled on one outspoken Sitar player who visably cringed underneath it. “Number IX†He started slowly his voice void of any emotion. “Your punishment for your behavior toward your senior…†The Melodious Nocturne tried to sink deeper into his chair. The cold smile returned. “Bring the Sleeping Hero to me.†_________________ If you want to read more check my Sig for the Link to FFnet.
Xemnas: I can be the Ultimate Dad! Yeah Kairi, I'm not the only one who's concerned. xD That was really adorable. Donald makes an oddly iftting Sunny.... Hmmm still not sure how I feel about that. ;) Five stars!!
I'm glad my reveiws make your day. XD Who dosn't love reviews? :p ::Sheepish Grin:: I'm not going to lie, when I read that hint last chapter my mind went to the same place Roxas' did. Then I had to check the rating... make sure I wasn't reading anything.... um yeah. xD So of course when Roxas went there I just couldn't stop giggling. Hmm, since I'm not a guy I guess that means I'm just peverted. ::rolls eyes:: Oh goodie. Of course we come back to Riku. Ah Riku. With a kairi over his shoulder. Yay MORE implied Riku/Kairi. Remind me to hug your Beta Reader/Best friend. xD Ahem, but seriously- ::Gigglesnort:: Oh that stuffed turtle. Why do I love you so? xD I have such a urge to draw Sora with it, you have no idea. And Larxene is so evilly mainpulative. It's wonderful. "Sir-smirks-alot." :giggle: She says that like it's a bad thing. And Kairi really need to wear more to bed. Not that she was expecting one of her best friends to sneak in there in the middle of the night and wisk her off to her not-so-boyfriend's room. XD Well I'm out! Till next time.
Dangit that makes me one of the slow ones. xD Are you sure he's not Xehanort? ;) Come on! :p
I'm back! ::gutair solo:: Yes I am back in BLACK!!! Ahem, sorry 'bout that. ::Sheephish:: Too much music. Wow, this is getting even more intresting, and you had him intrested first chapter. O.o I swore that Nameless was Xheanort, but you dashed those dreams so now I'm a little confused. It's ok though! Confusion is good. It lets you sit back anc giggle as I tear my hair out trying to figure out what's going on now. XD Personally I LOVE making my readers confused. Check out Broken Chains and you'll see what I mean. ::evil laugh:: Ahem. Again I digress. Hmm, You discriptions are getting more and more complex which is good, but I have one line that really... skipps me. XP Hmm, well if he was behind Nameless how could you see him? And it just seems too jumpy/listy. Instead could you say- " ." And then Mickey could proceed to kick his butt for thinking he was a man. XD Or not. :::p :: OOooo am I picking up on some Nameless/Auqa shipping? I like. :D Keep up the good work, I'll be back for the Next installment.
I love that Sitar! xD And yes, I'm under the firm belief that Org. XIII and Namine should form a band called Namine and the Nobodies. :D I eagerly await your comment on YT. Hopefully it dosn't eat it. That's happened a few times. XD Yay Sitar Love! That was one of my favoirt parts as well. XD
... or rather, a Nobody. XD Namine sings about wanting somebody to love while (yes, it's true.) Orgainization XIII sings back up. O.o Yes. Backup. Saix has a lovely harmony by the way. XD Take a look ((Just an AMV I threw together. I really really appreicate any thoughts here on or on My YouTube account.))
I'm not going to lie. You got me. xD Though During the whole kiss scene I was going "Wait a minute. Wait a minute!" but then- BAM! You got me. Ain't I a sucker? That was very very cute and now that I know what it was building up to- fit quite perfectly... But wait? Is it over or is she reall going to have to chose? O.o
Aww, that was actually really cute. That bit about the clouds was priceless! So completely Sora. xD And man I'm right up there with Kairi, all those shirtless cuties? Yummy. ;) Can I offer one bit of advise? Press enter, please! Inbetween speech and paragraphs? It would make it alot easier to read. XD Keep up the good work.
Silly Sora. Riku dosn't have grey hair. It's a pretty silver. :: pets Riku's hair:: So pretty! Riku: Ge'off! Me: He dosn't know what he's saying. :D See much better much more relaxed. But would you kill me if I said I still felt you were going too fast. I still feel like Riku and Sora wouldn't be pestering Kairi over this. Rather it's more like they would pester each other about it and fight behind Kairi's back. They did too much for one another during KH II. But I do like this chapter alot more. Much much easier on the eyes and You have Kairi in character as always. Though she WAS a bit of a flirt with Riku in KHI. XD At least I think so.
Hey all! Well, I really feel like writing some short stories, so I'm going to offer short story requests for the first five people who comment. They're nothing multichapter. :D Just little drabbles on this or that. Maybe 500-700 words a pop. Though each go with my creative juices. Some may be shorter or longer than another. If this turns out well I may do it again. :D Just comment with the fallowing: Pairing/Ship: (I'll do any pairing besides slash... I'm just not comfortable writing it....and no original characters! sorry! I wouldn't do them justice. ) OR if you don't want a shippery Story- Character: (This could be a random Drabble about ANY character in the KH series. Want something about Donald or Sora or even Queen minnie?) Prompt: (word or phrase that will inspire me for the story) Edit: Come one guys, dosn't anyone want one? EDIT2: Just and example so you all know what- Got it? xD mmkay. Have at 'er. SLOTS: (Open) 1) Nightwinde Pairing/Ship/Character: Larxene/Axel Prompt: "Go be annoying somewhere else." FINISHED 2)ロクサス Pairing/Ship/Character: Sora/Ollette Prompt: She could never remember the last thing we talked about. 3) Pairing/Ship/Character: Prompt: 4) Pairing/Ship/Character: Prompt: 5) Pairing/Ship/Character: Prompt:
