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Hey there! I'm writing a made up version of kh 2 but with the same base story but with other characters. I'm in it and I'm the forth member of Sora's team so I was wondering wether u guyz wanted to take part as well. If u do, just fill in this form:


Name:

Weapon/abilitie (if u don't want either just put N/A next to it)

Base story:

Nature:

Good bad/bad guy:

Heartless/Nobodie (only if ur a bad guy)

Where u wanna appear:

Bonus character?:

I'll post the first chapter right now.

Here's the first chapter but it's more like a prologue cuz it's when Roxas finds Sora.



Chapter 1
Summer's end


''I hate you so much!'' Roxas said, holding up the Keyblade, ready to strike at DIZ. ''You should share some of that hatred with Sora.'' Diz said, not appearing to be intimmidated by Roxas at all. ''He's far too nice for his own good'' ''No!'' Roxas said. ''My heart belongs to me!'' He charged at DIZ and slashed him with the Keyblade. It went right through him but it didn't seem to cause any damage at all. Roxas looked up, surprised that DIZ was still standing there looking as normal as hot weather in July. ''My apologies, this is only a data based projection.'' DIZ said. ''AAAAAARRRGH!'' Roxas cried, slashing the back of DIZ viliontly. After a while, DIZ dissapeared. Roxas gasped to catch his breath. He was worn out. He looked round and saw the pod that was in the middle of the room open. Inside, was Sora. At first, Roxas didn't recognized him at first because in his dreams, Sora was younger. ''Sora...'' Roxas said. ''You're lucky. It looks like my summer vacation's over.''


Was that ok? It didn't sound right, like I got all the sentences mixed up but.... I tried. Lemme know wot u think!

I no its not supposed 2 b real but ud think square would make a bit more effort!! I found a few falts in the animation such as:

When Sora cries his tears comes from the middle of his eyes instead of the corners

In the first kh whne Sora and Riku r on the bridge when Riku gives Sora the paopu fruit, Riku's standing on air.

And uh... cant remember the rest but ill post them when I remember them. Have u guys found any other faults??????

I just had 2 say it.... IM IN THE X FACTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! Right now, I'm in the third round and I will b doing: Summer of 69-Bryan Adams and Heaven is a place on Earth-Belinda Carlisle. Unlike da real one, u dont have to audition 4 it and the prize isssss....... U GET TO RECORD UR OWN CD!!!!! lol will u guys buy my cd if I win?????? The crowd will vote us out of ten the singer with least points gets knocked out. In the final round (round five) we have to do 4 songs (still planning on those songs but I definnitly no dat Im doing Désenchantée-Kate Ryan)
Wish me luck!!!