Thank you! :D
Have fun! :D Thanks! And thanks! I'm REALLY surprised that WMM didn't freeze up on me last night while making this XD Thank you! I'm not saying anything. You'll find out later :D:D:D I REALLY wanted to add the vid, because i had come up with the poem that went really well with it :) OMG I MADE AKU SPEECHLESS!!! *faints* ... *magically revives* ok i'm back :) I'm glad you like it! :D
thank you :D either sunday or Monday :) Ch 2 is a GOOD one!
Thanks! WOOOT POPCORN ALL AROUND!!!!!!
oo Thank you! :D You'll see what this is all about in the next upcoming chapters :)
Thanks! lol *laughs*
lol thanks! :D
lol i thought so too! XDDDDDDD
THE LSSP IS HERE!! WOOT!!! Yes, and I changed how the title looks :D Deal with it :D *Sora, Kairi, and Riku walk into the movie theater* Sora: Oh yay! This is gonna be good! Kairi: I know! Hey fg, when's the story start? Me: In a minute or two. Riku: Cool! *All of the Organization XIII come in* Sora: HEY WHAT THE SMOOF ARE YOU ALL DOING HERE!!! Axel: We're here to see the LSSP! Got it memeorized? Riku: Didn't we kill you all? Marluxia: ... That hurt... *cries* Larxene: Baby... Me: HEY EVERYBODY SHUT UP AND SIT DOWN SO I CAN START IT!!! *everyone sits down* Me: HERE WE GO!!! Intro Movie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VNBhJz7WTbM Demyx: Cool! Everyone: SHUSH!!! Demyx: Sorry... ~CHAPTER 1~ “Ri—I mean, Ansem, are you okay?†“…†“Ansem?†“…Huh? What?†“Are you alright?†“Yeah, I just…zoned out for a moment.†The young blue-eyed blonde nodded once, before taking her seat in front of the Sleeping Pod. “You know, Sora will wake up any day now. Along with his friends.†Ansem nodded, before taking a seat by the wall. “Namine?†The blonde looked up at him. “Yes?†“Do you think…he’ll recognize me? You know, as I am now?†Namine smiled at him. “Of course he will. Although you may be Ansem on the outside, you’re still Riku on the inside. He’ll see the real you.†The young girl turned back towards the Pod to finish her work. Riku closed his eyes, lying back in his chair. The real me… ~FLASHBACK~ “Welp, looks like we’re gonna be here for a while.†Riku looked down at his mouse friend, who was smiling up at him. He wasn’t smiling back. He was happy he could help to protect the worlds by staying inside of Kingdom Hearts to seal the door, but he didn’t want to stay here…in Darkness… “Riku?†The boy looked back at his friend. “Yes your Majesty?†“Please, call me Mickey.†Riku chuckled. “Yes, Mickey?†King Mickey smiled, but it quickly faded into a frown. “Are you going to be okay?†“Yeah, I’ll be—watch out!†A Heartless tried to jump and attack the King from behind, but Riku summoned his Keyblade and swiped at it, causing it to fade away. Suddenly, two more appeared, and King Mickey summoned his Keyblade and took them out. More and more Heartless appeared, coming in huge packs, and the King and Riku took each one out. It was tiresome, but eventually they were all gone—for now. “I think we got them all…†The King said, catching his breath. Riku was about to agree, when he saw a dark figure move in the shadows. “I wouldn’t be too sure about that…†Riku brought up his weapon and started to sneak up on the figure. When he was close enough, he ran up to it, and brought down his Keyblade hard on the Heartless— WHACK! “OWWW!!†THUD! Riku took a step back in surprise. He had DEFINITLY not expected a Heartless to yell ‘Owww!!’ Riku stared at the figure, which was now on the ground. His eyes had adjusted a bit to the Darkness, and he could make out that it wasn’t a Heartless. It was a person! “Are you ok?†Riku asked, extending his hand out to the person. The person laughed softly. By how their voice sounded, he could tell the person was female. “Yeah, I’m fine.†She took his hand, and allowed him to help her up. Once she was standing, Riku could faintly make out that she was slightly shorter than he. “I’m real sorry about that…†Riku apologized. To be honest, he had no idea why he was being so nice. The figure laughed again. “That’s ok, I’m used to getting hit in the head with oversized keys on a daily basis.†She joked. Riku smiled, and he could’ve sworn that she was smiling too. “Riku? Where’d you go?†Riku turned to see the King looking around for him. “I’m over here!†Riku called, getting his friend’s attention. King Mickey walked over to where the two were. “Who’s this?†he asked. “Someone I just met.†Riku said, wanting to leave out the part of him attacking her. He turned back to the girl standing next to him. “I’m Riku, and this is my friend, King Mickey.†The King nodded and smiled. The girl smiled back. “I’m Raemond.†~SWITCH FLASHBACK~ “So Ansem trapped you in there too?†Riku asked Raemond, after finally escaping the Realm of Darkness. The King had to leave to do something, but he promised he’d be back. Once out of the Darkness, he had gotten a good look at her: Raemond had short honey-brown hair that fell just above her neck. She wore a short-sleeved yellow shirt with a red stripe and an orange stripe on it that was long at the bottom of it, going halfway down her thighs. Underneath, she wore slightly baggy blue jeans, and had on orange and black shoes. Wrapped loosely around her waist was a black belt with a gold buckle, red straps hung off of her pants and crossed in the back, and she had black and orange bands on her arms. She had told him that she was 14 years old. “Yeah, eventually he did.†She said, answering his question. “But I guess I really trapped myself in the Realm of Darkness, by wanting the Darkness.†Riku nodded. “I guess that goes double for me.†He smiled. “I just want to return back into the Light.†“I don’t.†“Why not?†Riku asked, puzzled. Raemond shrugged. “It’s just that…if I return to Light, then I’ll end up fearing the Darkness again.†She said. “It’ll end up controlling me, and I won’t let it do it again.†Riku cocked his head. “Hmm…never thought of it that way…†he said thoughtfully. Then, he looked over at Raemond. “But, if you don’t want to go back to Light, and you don’t want to return to Darkness, where will you go?†She smiled slyly at him. “Into the Twilight.†“Twilight?†Riku questioned. “What do you mean?†Raemond crossed her arms. “Well, if there’s a place just for Light, and if there’s a place for Darkness, then there surely must be a place where both combine to form Twilight.†Riku nodded. “Where will you look for it?†he asked, intrigued. Raemond sighed. “I’m not sure, but I guess I’ll know where to go when it comes time. Until then, I’ll keep searching.†Just then, Raemond’s eyes lit up. “Hey, you should come with me into the Twilight!†“Huh?†“Oh come on! That way, the Darkness will never take over again.†She said, smiling. Riku considered this. He’d never have to worry about the Darkness. He’d still be strong, without the Darkness holding him captive. He could have the light without being drowned in it. Riku nodded, smiling. “Okay.†~SWITCH FLASHBACK~ Riku traveled the basements of Castle Oblivion, searching for something. He had promised to walk the Twilight path with Raemond, but before he did, he needed something… Closure… Closure from the Darkness that held onto him for so long… He wouldn’t leave without it. Riku had promised Raemond he come back, right after he found what he was looking for. While he did that, she searched, with the King, for the Twilight path. The three of them decided to walk it, to see where it led. On the ninth floor, King Mickey had used some of his powers to visit him. He told him that he and Raemond had found the Twilight path. Riku said he’d come back to walk it. As he promised. ~SWITCH FLASHBACK~ “Sora…†Riku had found his closure with the Darkness, and had finally accepted that there’d always be Darkness in him. But, along his travels, he’d found out that Sora’s memories had been ripped apart and replaced, but now a young girl named Namine was fixing them. A man named DiZ came and told Riku that he knew a way to help Sora wake up. Riku trusted him. Riku was about to leave with him, but the King stopped him. “Wait! Riku!†King Mickey said. “What about Raemond?†Raemond. The promise. They’d promised. They were going to walk together. The promise. They’d promised… Sora… Riku looked at King Mickey with an impassive gaze. “Sora’s more important.†And with that, he walked away with DiZ. Without even so much as whisper of an apology… For breaking their promise… “Riku…where are you? You said you’d be here… I hope you’re okay…†Raemond? “Maybe…you’ve changed your mind…†Is that you? “Then…I’ll walk it for me. No, I’ll walk it for you, Riku. I’ll walk the Twilight path for you…†No…don’t! I know how it ends!!! “I’ll become Twilight for you.†NO!!! DON†AWAY!!! “Who’s there? Show yourself!†RUN! PLEASE RUN!!! “Wha—AHHHHHH!!!!!†RAEMOND!!! +++ “--------! --------!†She woke up suddenly, to the sound of someone’s voice, and someone’s shaking. “--------, you were screaming! Are you ok?†She nodded. “I had the dream again.†She looked down, taking a deep breath. “Riku…†~~~~~~~~~~ Everyone: o_0 Xemnas: Why is it all about Riku??? Riku: Cuz i'm cool like that! :D Saix: No, that can't be it... Riku: >:P Roxas: I don't get it.... Me: You'll get it in Ch 2! Everyone: Ohhhhh! Me: Hope you all enjoyed it! Demyx: Hey Luxord, can I have money for popcorn? Luxord: No.
WOOOT! Yeah, i agree Violet: Just shut up and leave me alone... Me: Are you emo? Violet: I have purple hair. Me: So? Are you? Violet: No. Me: Then why are you so moody? Violet: Leave me alone. Me: Are you PMS-ing? Violet: o_0 No. Me: Menopause? Violet: I'm leaving....*dissapears* XDDDDD
ima put it up around 5 pm-ish (i live in the USA) That'd be in about 1 hour and 20 min :D
Great chapter! :D Quote from story: Axel and I opened a corridor to darkness... ...if it’s needed.†Marluxia said. Try to stick to one POV, kay? Or, if ur gonna switch POV's, let us know :) HAHAHAHA XEMNAS IS PLAYING MATCHMAKER!!!!!! Xemnas: *looks like he is about to kill* Me: *shuts up*
lol yeah, that part conmfused me too when i wrote it :) Don't worry, you'll get what i mean about that soon :D
