Chapter 11! Me: Yay! Everyone: YAY! Demyx: Popcorn!! Me: Okay, we've got a new chapter tonight, and a new chapter of Bring Me To Life! Xed: And the Forum Family? Me: Up and running! Go here to read the rules, and find out how you can join: http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=619653#post619653 Marluxia: ooo I wanna join! Can I be Xemnas? Xemnas: No, I'm Xemnas! Nixon: I wanna be Xemnas!! Roxas: Doesn't anyone want to be me? Everyone: ... Roxas: *cires* Me: Okay peeps, take care of who you want to be at the END of the chapter, 'kay? (everyone gets quiet and the movie starts) ~Chapter 11~ “Xradenom?†Everyone turned around to see a white portal open up, and watched as Kuxir stepped out. He crossed his arms and raised an eyebrow in interest. “Did someone mention her?†he questioned. “Yeah, I was answering Sora’s question about my Heartless.†Xed admitted, looking over at Kuxir. He nodded, before leaning against a nearby wall. “You about to tell them?†The female Keyblader nodded. “About everything I know, anyway.†She then cleared her throat and scanned her eyes over the people in the room. With a breath, she began: “I lost my Heart some time ago, meaning a Nobody and a Heartless were created. I’m that Nobody, obviously, and Xradenom was that Heartless. I became part of the Organization XIII, and my Heartless had disappeared. When I met Kuxir and Xoras, they told me about this new Heartless that appeared in their Organization, and how she looked just like me, with a few changes. I’ve never seen her in person before, but I trust she’s my Heartless.†Everyone nodded, following her words completely. Xed chuckled, and continued: “Okay, now this is where things get more complex. From what Xemnas has told me, he plans on using Hearts he finds to create Kingdom Hearts, which he believes to be a door to all the Darkness in the Worlds.†“Yeah, we’ve seen it before!†Donald said excitedly. Goofy nodded, and so did Sora. “Riku and the King got trapped in there.†Goofy added. Xed shook her head, smiling slightly. “Yes, that may be true, but…†she took a short breath, and diverted her gaze to the floor. “That wasn’t Kingdom Hearts you saw.†“What!?!??†The room, save for Kuxir and Xed, chorused. “It had to be Kingdom Hearts!!†Sora shouted, narrowing his eyes in confusion. “T-There was Ansem, and darkness, and Kingdom Hear—“ “Ansem is a researcher, a person who studies the Heart and it’s reactions to darkness, light, etc.†Xed said simply, in monotone. “What you saw was a Heartless, not Ansem.†The party was in disbelief. All this time, they had believed that the monster that was tearing apart the worlds was Ansem, when he was really a Heartless! “Wait a minute,†Sora said, crossing his arms and looking up at the ceiling, “this isn’t making sense. If the guy we fought was a fake, then what happened to the real Ansem?†“No one knows.†Kuxir answered. “He’s been gone for years.†Xed nodded. “All we have left are these books he’s written.†She said, patting a stack of large volumes piled near her. The King’s eyes widened. “Are those his actual research?†he asked, breathless. She nodded, and smiled. “Yep. About the Heart, Nobodies, Heartless, the Worlds, Kingdom Heart—“ “Can we borrow them?†Goofy asked. “No way!†Xed replied, defensively. She ran her fingers up and down the cover of the top book on the stack. “Vexen –a friend of mine- gave me these some time back. He told me to take care of them.†~FLASHBACK~ KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! “Come on in.†Xed said, returning back to her book sitting in her lap. The door quickly opened, and Vexen walked inside quickly, a large stack of books in his hands. He shut the door with a loud bang before placing the books quickly on the floor. “Vexen…what’s wrong?†the girl asked, noticing the Scientist’s frazzled, nervous expression set upon his face. “It’s nothing, Xedramon.†He replied hastily, glancing around the room in a hurried fashion. He then pointed to the books sitting on the floor by him. “I found some books that you may like to read, seeing how you are interested in Science and all.†“Oh.†Xed said shortly, looking down at the books. She then looked up at her friend and smiled. “Thank you.†The elder couldn’t help but smile back. “You’re very welcome.†He said, letting his smile linger for a moment longer, before disappearing completely. “But don’t let Xemnas catch you with these.†The girl cocked her head to the side. “Why?†The man sighed softly. “Because…†He took a breath. “Because he just doesn’t need to know.†~FLASHBACK ENDS~ “These books are precious to me, and I don’t let anyone borrow them.†She said firmly, smiling up at the people in front of her. She noticed their distraught faces and sighed. “But, if you’re dying to know what’s inside them, I can tell you.†Everyone’s faces lit up. “But first, I need to finish explaining.†Everyone quieted down as Xed continued: “The Heartless’ name is Xehanort, and he’s the Heartless of Xemnas.†“Xehanort used to be the leader of the Disorder,†Kuxir cut in, “but after he was defeated, Xradenom stepped up and took his place, for in the Disorder, you’re ranked by the strength of your previously whole Heart.†“So,†Riku said, “the stronger your Heart, the higher ranked you are?†“Yea, is it really that hard for you to understand?†The Heartless quipped snidely, throwing a smirk Riku’s way. Riku grit his teeth in anger, and Kuxir narrowed his eyes. “Anyway…†Xed said, breaking the death stare between the two. “Xemnas believes that if we can make Kingdom Hearts, all of us Nobodies can get our Hearts back.†Everyone nodded. “Well, that’s wrong.†A few surprised gasps filled the air. Xed nodded. “There’re two problems with that. One being that we can’t get our Hearts back that way, and two being Xemnas’ ignorance of what Kingdom Hearts really is.†“I don’t get it…†Donald said, putting his hands on his hips. “Well, I’ll explain it to you.†Xed offered, taking a pen and a piece of paper off of a nearby desk. As she spoke, she scribbled simple, but neat, drawings and notes. “You see, here is a person with a Heart, or as we like to call them, Wholes. Now then, the Heart of a Whole contains four key things: Memories, Emotions, a Will, and Twilight, or the choice between Light and Dark. “When a Whole loses their Heart, their Heart doesn’t disappear, but really splits into two halves of a Heart. The Nobody gets the half of the Heart with the Memories and Will, and the Heartless get the half with the Emotions and Twilight. Heartless and Nobodies want to get their whole Heart back, because they feel this nagging incompletion, which is really the other half of the Heart calling out to the other half.†(Xed's Picture explanation: http://s99.photobucket.com/albums/l281/artsyone3/?action=view¤t=nwhexplain.jpg) “So, in order to become a Whole again…†Goofy said, “…A Nobody and a Heartless must join back together?†Xed nodded. “Exactly.†“Why doesn’t Xemnas see that?†Riku asked. Kuxir shook his head. “It’s because he’s an idiot.†“Shut up, Ku.†Xed said, giving him a dirty look. “It’s because he won’t listen to it. I’ve tried to explain that to him, but he thinks that his way is the only way, and won’t listen to reason.†Kuxir then broke out in a coughing fit, some of his coughs suspiciously sounding like the word ‘Idiot’. Xed glared at him again, before letting her expression soften. “That’s why I want you to leave the Organization alone, Sora.†She said, looking up at the Keyblader. “They’re no threat to the World’s if this is their goal.†“Wait a minute.†Donald quacked, gaining everyone’s attention. “You said that there was another reason as to why Xemnas’ Kingdom Heart’s plan won’t work.†Xed nodded. “Oh yeah, I almost forgot.†She said, chuckling slightly. “You see…†KNOCK, KNOCK! KNOCK! Everyone turned their attention to the door. “Hey Xed, open up!†+++ Somewhere in an all-black room, a white-cloaked figure, with his hood down, sat in a black chair by a nearby window. The man had raven black hair that was styled into an odd style, a cross between a mullet and a mohawk. His glowing golden eyes scanned the page of the book he was reading, his mouth forming the well-memorized words of the text as he silently read to himself. His eyes flicked up for a moment, and then returned to reading his text. “You make too much noise, Alex.†Another white-cloaked figure, his hood down also, stepped towards the man reading before him. This man had dark blonde hair, spiked back, and glowing golden eyes. Underneath his eyes were black diamond-shaped tattoos, black in color. He kept walking until he reached where the other Heartless was sitting. “Killer Angels again, Mexdy?†Alex asked, eyeing the book in his elder’s hands. “How many times have you read that thing?†“19 times, soon to be 20.†Mexdy replied calmly, still enjoying his book. “The story grows stronger with each time it is read.†“Yeah, sure.†The other said, waving him off. Mexdy closed his book and looked up at the pyro standing over him. “What brings you here?†he asked, placing the book on his lap. Alex smirked. “Number IXV has been sent to get rid of that Sora kid.†“Oh really?†The musician said, gaining interest quickly. “Sauelex?†“Mm-hm.†“Who do you think will win?†“Well, Sauelex is rather tactful, but the kid is strong.†Alex answered truthfully. “I’d put my money on the child.†Mexdy said, standing up. Alex raised an eyebrow. “And why is t†he questioned. The younger Heartless looked over at the older one. “If he’s anything like Xoras, he’ll win.†“The kid is Xoras. And Xoras is Sora.†Mexdy nodded, before chuckling, amused. “Yes, and that is why he’ll win for sure.†~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bring Me To Life Chapter 6: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/6/Bring_Me_To_Life The White Disorder Forum Family: http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=619653#post619653 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hexon: Nice chapter! Riku: Yea!! Me: Thank ya! (everyone runs to the Forum Family and tries to get a spot and ends up trampling me in the process) Me: *flat on the ground* Owwww......
Sure, if you call a character with a high rank first :)
i think so :) I was going to release it that night, but then i relaized that not everyone had read the announcement, so not everyone would have a fair chance at getting a character they wanted. But now that everyone has read, i can release it soon and fairly.
XD Don't worry, we all went through it, and it totally stinks. But after that, it's all good :)
Hehe... thanks! :D I've never been a part of a forum family either, so I hope this will be fun!
I'm so sorry, I've been extra busy lately. And, I'm still wondering what to do when school starts, and I don't have a lot of time anymore. Just know that, even if it takes me longer to release chapters, I'm not planning on stopping the story. *nod* Yep! I couldn't release it that one night because I realized that it wouldn't exactly be fair to release it when no one knows about it, right :) lol. I'll be releasing it soon, when EVERYONE knows about it.
Awesomeness!!! Now I can't wait to hear more :) Thanks Xaldin!
okay :) He should be coming up sometime, so we'll see if you're right :)
*evil smile* Thank ya! :D That would be interesting, though....
:D thanks! Thanks! Glad to hear it :)
Thank ya! :D
lol, thanks! :D Chapter 10 at last! Me: Sry people, I've been busy. Axel: Doing what? Me: None of your beeze-wax. Axel: o_0? Me: Okay! As promised, the surprise is coming out with this chapter! Everyone: YAY!!! Demyx: What is it? Me: It's announced at the end of the chapter. Hexon: Then let's start the movie already! Everyone: YEAH! (Everyone shuts up and movie starts) ~Chapter 10~ "Huh?" Sora asked. Xed smirked. "You heard me!" she said, "If you want them dead, you're gonna have to kill me first!" She crossed her arms. Sora then narrowed his eyes, and gripped his Keyblade tighter. "Alright, fine!" he shouted, charging at her. With one mighty swing, he slashed through the torso of the still-shocked Nobody. Xed collasped to to her knees, clutching her stomach, which was on fire with pain. "S-S-Sora..." she stuttered weakly, not believing he had actually attacked her. With one last, shaking breath, she whispered the only thing that kept running in her mind: "Riku..." ~~~~~~ Everyone: WHAT THE?!?!?!!?!? Larxene: SHE DIES!?!? This is awesome!!! Sora: I-I killed her? Xed: *face is white* Me: *laughs hysterically* GOTCHA!!! Xaldin: Huh? Nixon: What's going on? Me: That's not what really happens. I made up that to see if you'd all fall for it. And you all did!!! Marluxia: So she doesn't die! Aww man!!! *pouts* Xoras: Can you show the real Chapter 10, please? Me: Oh fine. *chuckles* Here it is: ~Chapter 10~ (The real one) “WHAT?!!?†The trio chorused simultaneously. Xed smiled slyly and crossed her arms. “Did I stutter?†She questioned snidely. “I said, if you are going to kill the Organization, I want to be first.†The three were speechless. “But…but we can’t!†Sora said, letting his Keyblade rest at his side. “And why not?†She asked. “Because Riku would kill us!†“But I’m a Nobody.†Xed said, putting on a fake expression of sympathy. “I thought us Nobodies weren’t worth protecting…at least…that’s what you said…†Sora frowned. “Well, yeah, but…†He was at a loss for words. He looked up at her, with a pleading look in his eyes. “They’re the Organization! They’re evil, terrible—“ “And I am one of them.†Xed interrupted, her voice impassive, yet strong. An uncomfortable silence filled the air, before Xemnas smirked slightly, and cleared his throat. “Xedramon, I have some business to have taken care of, so I must be off.†Xed turned her head to look over at him. She nodded. “Okay.†“I’ll have someone come pick you up later.†She nodded again, and Xemnas vanished through a dark portal. Goofy looked over at the female Keyblader. “Xed…but…but why? Why are you one of them?†He asked, almost pleading. Xed smiled softly, looking down at the ground. “Because…I wanted to be.†She said simply. “It wasn’t like I had the choice to join or not, but I liked the Organization once I became a part of it.†She turned her head towards the ground as she twirled a piece of her long hair in her fingers. “They’re family to me.†Sora, Donald, and Goofy were surprised at this. “Family?†Donald quacked, his confusion apparent. Xed nodded, shyly looking up at the party. “Yea…†she added softly, smiling inwardly. She then turned her head up, and gave the three a hard look. “So I want you all to leave them alone, got it?†Goofy narrowed his eyes in thought. “We can’t do that, Xed.†He stated. “Master Yen Sid said that the Organization XIII is planning something big, something that will hurt all of the worlds!†Donald nodded. “So we have to destroy Organization XIII!!†he piped in. Xed shook her head, an amused smile on her face. “Don’t worry about it guys.†She assured them. “I’m in the Organization, and I haven’t heard about any big evil plan or whatnot. And if there’s something going on, I’ll get Xemnas to stop it. But you all have to leave the Organization alone. No hurting them, no killing them. Alright?†Sora raised an eyebrow and crossed his arms, leaning back slightly. “Are you sure that you can do that?†he asked. “Of course.†Xed said with a smile. She then placed a hand over where her heart would be. “You have my word.†Sora nodded, and placed a hand over his own heart. “And you have ours.†000000 Once arriving back in the Castle That Never Was, Xemnas arranged for an immediate meeting with all of the members, save for Xed. The woman with the blonde hair and sea-green eyes leaned back in her chair, an impatient and cruel frown set deep upon her face. “Xemnas, what’s the deal?†She demanded, snapping at her Superior. Xemnas looked down at the woman, his eyes narrowed. “Watch your tone, Number XII.†He warned. She responded by rolling her eyes and mumbling something under her breath. His expression then relaxed as he looked up at the rest of the Nobodies in the room. He cleared his throat, and began to speak. “Everyone, I called you here for a meeting of utmost importance.†He announced. Xemnas then took a quick glance around the room. “But first, has anyone seen Xaldin?†Everyone shook his or her heads. Xemnas sighed impatiently, but with slight curiosity. This is odd…it’s unlike Number III to miss meetings…but no matter. “Never mind that then. As for the meeting; it’s about Sora and his friends, and with Xedramon knowing about them.†A few concerned murmurs echoed across the room, and Xemnas waited patiently for them to pass before he spoke again. “From what it seems, they have not yet told her about the Keyblade, and the job of Keyblade Masters.†“So, she doesn’t know?†Interrupted one of the other figures, one with mauve-colored hair and piercing blue eyes, both insightful and manipulative. Xemnas shook his head. “No, it doesn’t seem so.†“But we still have a problem.†Zexion from before commented, rubbing his chin thoughtfully. “Sora and his friends will still be after us, and will further hinder our plans. After all,†he looked up at Xemnas, “our plan at Castle Oblivion didn’t work.†“And you really thought that would work?†The man with the fiery red hair from before scoffed. He leaned back in his chair and crossed his arms, a smug grin on his face. “Zexy, your plan of putting illusions in that castle to try to lure Sora into our grasp was doomed from the start.†The man with the rose-tinted hair laughed. “Axel, maybe that’s because your illusion had to turn on us, and ruin our plans.†Axel smiled proudly. “Well, what’d ya expect from me?†He joked. Xemnas rolled his eyes, becoming impatient. The orange-haired man from before frowned. “Regardless, Zexion is right.†He said, crossing his arms. “We have a problem. Sora now has a direct connection to the Organization.†He looked up at Xemnas with serious eyes. “We’re at a greater threat now.†Xemnas shook his head, sitting up straighter in his chair. “Actually, that isn’t the case.†He stated. “We’re now greater protected.†Vexen raised an eyebrow, surprised. “How so?†The Scientist inquired. The Superior glanced over at him for a second, before looking out at everyone else. “I had a run-in with the Keyblade Master and his friends. Just now, actually.†He said. “And by chance, Xedramon just walked in. So, I let Sora attack me.†Everyone gasped slightly in surprise. “B-but Xemnas! You’re still here!†A member who was noticeably younger than the others with dirty blonde hair styled into a cross mullet-mohawk, and jade green eyes that reflected immaturity, yet kindness, said aloud. The man with the British-like accent leaned forward in his chair, and looked up towards his Superior. “Yes, if you were attacked, why are you still alive?†He questioned. Xemnas smirked slightly. “He attempted to attack me, but his attack was blocked…†he said, pausing at the end. Saix raised an eyebrow. “By what? Whom?†“By Number XIII herself.†The room filled with a fascinated and surprised silence. “You see, Xedramon then proceeded to explain to Sora and his friends that they were not to harm the Organization, or they’d have to harm her as well.†Xemnas continued. Vexen’s eyes widened slightly at the words ‘harm her’. He dared to look up towards the direction of the Nobody with the mullet-mohawk hair to see the young man sink slightly into his chair, his expression reflecting worry too. “By their expressions,†Xemnas said, crossing his arms, “they didn’t want to hurt her.†Vexen breathed out slightly in relief. Saix crossed his arms and looked down at the ground so far away. “I don’t see your point, Xemnas.†He stated bluntly. “How does this work to our advantage?†Xemnas chuckled slightly, leaning back in his chair. “As long as Xedramon is around…†A cruel smile slithered upon the Superior’s face. “…We can’t be touched.†+++ “So, why did you want us to come here?†Sora asked, as Xed led the trio back to her Workshop. Xed looked over her shoulder and continued walking. “I didn’t get to finish telling you everything.†She admitted, smiling slightly. “Saix interrupted us before I could.†Goofy nodded, but then scratched his head. “None of this is making sense.†He said simply. “Master Yen Sid said nothing about—“ “Don’t worry.†Xed said, cutting him off. “After this, everything will make sense.†As they approached the Workshop, Xed summoned her Keyblade and pointed it at the door. Sora crossed his arms. “What are you doing that for?†he asked. “I set the door up so that only my Keyblade can open it, to prevent people who aren’t supposed to be in here from coming in.†she explained. “Ohh…†the party chorused, as the door clicked and swung open. Xed stepped to the side and allowed the three to walk in. “Hey guys!†The four looked up to see Riku and the King running towards them, their expressions clear that there is something urgent that they need to say. “Riku!†Xed called, smiling. “Your majesty!†The trio shouted, excited to see him. They reached where everyone else was. “We’ve got important news, fellas!†The King announced. Donald nodded. “And we’ve got lots of questions!†he said. Xed glanced around. “Can we please talk inside?†she asked, bringing the volume of her voice down. “I’m not really supposed to be hanging around you guys, and I’ll get in trouble with Xemnas if someone catches me.†Everyone else nodded, and they all filtered into the Workshop, where they could talk in private. +++ “So, you’re saying that everything in this place we were at, called Castle Oblivion, was all an illusion? It wasn’t real?†Sora asked, trying to make sense of the vague information Riku and the King had just supplied. The duo nodded, and the trio sighed deeply. “I don’t remember a Castle Oblivion.†Donald said, looking over at Sora and Goofy. “Do you?†“Nope.†“Nuh-uh.†“The Organization tried to use Sora as their puppet?†Xed asked, disbelief and horror faint in her eyes. The King nodded. She bit her lip softly and looked down at the ground. That’s not true…it can’t be! They’d never do something like that… Would they? “Oh, Xedramon.†King Mickey said. “You had some things to tell us?†“Yes.†She said, springing up from her seat. “Wait, I just have one question for Xed before she starts.†Sora said, looking over at her. “Yea?†“Well, it makes sense, somewhat, that I have a Heartless, since I lost my Heart once.†He said, blinking slowly. “And it also makes sense that Riku has a Heartless, because he temporarily got it taken by Ansem.†Everyone nodded. “So what’s you point?†Donald asked, his tone reflecting confusion. “Well, I’m just saying that…Kuxir and Xoras, our Heartless, are part of the Disorganization.†The female Keybladist nodded, cocking her head slightly. “Yes. And that means…what?†Sora crossed his arms, and looked up at the ceiling above, which still had the large hole in it from when the party fell through. “If our Heartless are there…and if you’re a Nobody…†Xed nodded at his words. Sora looked over at her, a question in his eyes. “Where is your Heartless?†A slight shiver went down Xed’s spine as he asked her the question. She immediately looked down at the ground, avoiding everyone’s curious gazes. “Uhh…†she started, clearly uncomfortable with the question. “Well…I…um…†she sighed, bringing up her hands and placing them behind her head. She blinked twice slowly, before looking back up at everyone. “My Heartless…is part of the White Disorder.†No one seemed shocked. Xed swallowed nervously, beforeontinuing. “Her name…her name is Xradenom.†Everyone nodded, taking all of this in. The Keyblader closed her eyes for a second, before reopening them. “And she…she is the leader…of the Disorganization.†~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bring Me To Life Chapter 5: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/5/Bring_Me_To_Life Xigbar: That's better. Me: As promised, I shall now reveal the surprise! Drum roll, please. (A drum rolls across the movie theater floor) Everyone: o_0? Me: Eh, close enough. The big surprise is... A FORUM FAMILY!!! Everyone: OOO!!! Me: Yes, It will be called 'The White Disorder', and you can choose between the Disorder's members, or, you could choose to be one of the Organization members. Luxord: Sweet! When is it coming out? Me: Later on tonight. I'll PM people when it comes out.
Heya! *waves* Hope you had fun at camp! :D Yes, she is the same Xed in The 14th Key, and in Bad Moon Arising. And yes, I do enjoy confusing all my readers :P XD Thank ya!
:D Thank you! I hope to continue, and I will continue, unless like, a big meteor crashes into the earth or something :) hehe, like that would happen... *somewhere in space* Big meteor: Muahaha...*evil smile* Oh trust me, as a bit of a spoiler, there IS NOT going to be a Xed/Xemnas battle. Now THAT would be insane! But there will be enough fights though, so don't worry about it. As for Xaldin, XIII kills you. BUT THINGS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM!!!! Remember that :) lol! I'm not saying anything *keeps typing chapter 10*
Hehe...the next chapter is soon :) And his name is Xoras. XD Hmm...I already started it, but ima have to go somewhere soon... maybe tonight, or tomorrow morning :) :D thanks!
:D Glad to know Next chapter, I think :)
You'll find out soon enough :) I'll explain it later :D Oh, trust me, there will be PLENTY of that to come. *evil smile* MUAHAHAHAHAAA!!!...I mean, *cough*
THAT. WAS. AWESOME!!!!11!!!1!!! I almost died of laughter. Seriously! I was eating an ice cream cone and almost choked at the whole Sora and Riku part at the end!! Awesomeness, awesomeness :)
:) cool! And thanks! trust me, this is ONLY the begining of all the twists this story has *evil smile* She doesn't really have a temper problem...it's just...well, i can't explain it now. But i'll give ya a hint: it has to do with her past. That's all i can say:) And thanks! :D
lol ok :) And thank you! :DDDD Thank ya!
