XDDDDDDD I NVR LOOOOOOOOOSEEEE!!!!! *jumps out of the other window* Axel: o_o; Violet: o_o; Axel: Weirdos. Violet: Yeah, really.
lol XD i thought up another one the same night, a SaixXRoxas story, but its pretty gorey, so ima haveta put it up on fanfiction.
Cool! Some of mine: To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world. When life gives you lemons, throw them at someone. In space, no one can hear you scream... The world would be alot simpler if people just say what they mean. :D
Squeee! I like this story! Aww, poor Marly, lol :)
lol thanks! :D I take your i.hate.you. to be the best compliment ever! XD yay! thanksya :) Thank you! And yes, things are taking a turn for da WORSE!! lol this is getting fun *evil smile* *shrugs* lol :) thank you! I'm gonna start the next ch soon! The LSSP starts THIS FRIDAY!!! So i gotta finish up this story by...hopefully Weds :) lol! XDDD Violet: Why'd you have to make ME the bad guy? I'm getting flamed all over the place! *pokes many 'i hate Violet' replies* Me: I was bored...? Violet: T_T I hate you. Me: XDDD Luv ya too, Vi :) lol thanks :) Why did I basically destroy RoXed? Cuz i felt like it :) And i was bored XD
Bad Moon Arising Ch 10 Sorry for taking so long :) I had a bit of writers block, but now everything's ok! ~Chapter 10~ It was 7:31 p.m., and all the Organization members, along with Xed who had been invited, were all eating dinner in silence. The nine Nobodies who were in on the Vampire’s scheme kept exchanging nervous glances with each other throughout the meal. It was nearing the next day, Friday, and they still had no idea what they were going to do. Unfortunately for them, Xaldin had noticed them. “What’s going on?” he asked, finally having enough of the nervous looks. Xemnas nodded. “Yes, what is going on? No one has talked whatsoever this entire evening. I want to know what is wrong, and I want to know it now.” He demanded. Roxas cleared his throat. “Umm, I have something to say.” He said, standing up from his seat. Axel, Demyx, and Xed gave him a don’t-say-it look, while the other six simply stared at him. Xemnas raised an eyebrow. “Well, Number XIII?” Roxas smiled nervously. “I do have something to say…” he repeated. “Right when I come back. May I be excused?” Xemnas nodded slowly, and Roxas quickly walked away from the table. Xigbar shook his head and chuckled. “Weird kid.” +++ Roxas walked upstairs and up into his room. He sat down on his bed. He sighed. We can’t keep this a secret any longer. He thought. This is getting dangerous. They need to know. Even though we have Xed here to fight with us, we’re gonna need the other’s help too. Although him leaving the table bought him and the others a little time, he’d still have to go back down there sometime. Click. Roxas looked over to his door, where he heard his door click. He walked over and jiggled the doorknob. It was locked. Roxas grunted in annoyance. One of the other members must be playing a stupid prank on him by locking the door. Roxas tried to summon a Corridor of Darkness, but he couldn’t. He started to panic. No one in the Castle has the ability to stop another from making a portal. “Having fun in there, Roxy?” Someone whose voice Roxas couldn’t recognize said. “Who are you?” Roxas asked, more like demanded. The voice laughed evilly. “Name’s Violet.” “Open the door!!” Roxas shouted, now angered by this stranger. Violet laughed again. “Sure, I’ll open it…as soon as I’m done running your life.” He said, walking away from the door. Roxas shook the doorknob hard. “LET ME OUT!!!!!” +++ Violet, still in Roxas’ form, walked back into the kitchen, to face the 13 anxiously waiting Nobodies. He smiled, careful to not show his fangs. “I believe I had something to say.” He said. Lexaeus crossed his arms. “Well?” he said, impatiently. Violet looked over at Xed. “Actually, it’s about Xed.” He said. Xed seemed surprised, along with everyone else. Axel leaned over towards Demyx. “Do you think he’s gonna tell her?” he whispered. Demyx shrugged. Violet cleared his throat. “I, Roxas, would like to tell you, Xed,” he paused, smiling deviously at her. “That I absolutely hate you.” Everyone was shocked, their mouths dropped open at Roxas’ harsh words. Axel, Demyx, and Luxord looked mortified. Xed looked heartbroken. Violet looked satisfied. “I’ve hated you since the day that we met.” He continued. “And I was ecstatic the day that you left, for I’d never have to see you again. But of course, you ruined that with your return. Your return was not welcome in my eyes, and, quite frankly, I want you to leave, and never come back again.” With a satisfied smirk, Violet turned and left the room without another word. The stillness and silence was so thick in the room, it couldn’t even be cut with a knife. +++ (Roughly two minutes before Violet said what he said) Roxas, having finally coming to his senses, unlocked the door with his Keyblade and started running towards the kitchen. +++ (Roughly 10 seconds after Violet said what he said) Roxas walked into the kitchen as calmly as possible, trying to not show he had been running. When he walked in, he noticed everyone’s shocked expressions directed up at him. “What’s up?” he asked, confused. Xed then stood up, and walked over towards him. “If you didn’t want me here all you had to do was say so.” She snarled, before walking out of the room quickly, brushing past him roughly. He stood there, mouth open, in complete confusion. “What was that about?” he asked, turning back to the other members. Axel put a hand to his temple. “Man, did you blow it or what…” he said snidely. Roxas raised an eyebrow. “What are you talking about?” “What do you mean ‘What are you talking about?’!?” Xigbar said, crossing his arms. “You just went off on Xed!” Roxas’ face paled. “W-what d-d-did I s-say?” he stuttered, in fright. “Basically said you hated her and never wanted to see her again.” Luxord said. Roxas’ eyes widened. Oh…my…— “XED!!!” Roxas shouted, turning and running out of the kitchen. But it was too late. The door was open. Xed left. And something told Roxas that she wouldn’t be coming back… +++ “Great job, Love.” Violet, now back in his own form, nodded, seeming a little zone-out. Rose walked over to him and linked arms with him. “What’s amiss?” she asked. He shook his head. “It’s nothing.” Rose smiled. “Good. Now that you’ve done your part, it’s time to do mine.” She said, smirking evilly. “Our revenge is almost complete.” “Your.” Rose looked up at Violet, in confusion. “What?” “Your.” He repeated. “Your revenge is almost complete. Not mine.” Without another word, he pulled away from Rose and vanished, leaving a very confused Vampire Nobody behind. Oooooooo Violet dunnit now!!!!!! XD
Hey! I know the comics ur talking about! Those are hilarious! And great story! And I do not lose! And I quote: Ok, so I wasn't right about the eye, but I WAS right about the scar! YAY SO WHERES MY 25,000 MUNNY? Axel: I spent it. Me: ON WHATTT??? Axel: Hair gel. XD Me: *screams and passes out*
Thank you! :) When reading it, it did sound a lot like Larxene's POV, so I was going to leave out the whole MarluxiaXNamine thing at the top until the end, to see if any one could guess, but I decided against it. Yeah, i still think Marly's a fruitcake, but he can be serious when he wants to be :) Ya gotta love Marly, right? :) Thanks! :D Freaked me out too, considering I thought of this at night...in the dark.... lol :) I wanted to portray Marluxia as a psycho cuz i know hes gonna snap from being teased so much lol :) I honestly have no idea why Namine would be laughing when her life really was like Hell. Maybe cuz she's all innocent and childish? *shrugs* beats me That is a mouthful! Axel's#1fangirls's#1fan. Coolio! XD
Coolio. I liked it :)
Thank you! Yeah, I've got some serious OOC-ness going on in this story :) But i like it like that :D Thanks! :D
Yep! *hugs back* I'd NEVER commit suicide!
Thank you! Yep, it was in second person :) lol, thank you...i think :) Thanks! :) :D Thank you! I have an idea for another one. I hope to write it tomorrow. And yes, its equally as dark, if not darker, than this one. Actually, i can't put it up on kh-vids. I have to put it up on fanfiction for content.
This is a Dark fic that I wrote just today :) (I got the idea last night when I couldn't sleep--don't question how my mind works) WARNING!!! YOU MAY GET CREEPED OUT!!! But remember it's just a story :) Ok, here we go: It's a Marluxia X Namine fic. (No pairing, no shoenai. Just those two) Hope you like it! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She’s doing it again. That damn girl is doing it again. You’ve told her before to stop that…noise… That…laughter of hers… It’s so…terribly happy… That damn laughter. You’ve always hated that laughter. That damn girl’s laughter. She’d always laugh, and it’d drive you mad. Her laughs were full of so much…Light… You’ve always hated the Light. That sick, sick Light. You’d much rather live in Darkness than Light. You’d stand there in the doorway, day after day, watching the girl draw. You’d watch her lean over her drawings, laughing her sick, innocently sweet laugh as she scribbled on her papers. Colors flooded those blank papers, forming an image of pure beauty. Pure beauty, pure Light. That damn Light. You’ve told her to stop laughing. You tell her she’s a Nobody, a Nothing. You tell her that her laughs were empty, that they just faded away into Darkness. You’d tell her this to break her. You’d tell her this to stop her from laughing. But she wouldn’t. She’d only look up at you with those innocent sky blue eyes and laugh. Innocently, sweetly. Sick. All of it: Sick. So there you stand again, watching her draw, watching her laugh. You consider snatching up her pictures and tearing them again, like you’ve done before. You smirk. You remember when you did that before. You’d take her pictures away from her, and start ripping them up, despite her protests and cries and begging. You especially liked ripping up ones with her in them. You’d rip up the others in the pictures, saving her image for last. Then, ever so slowly, you’d tear her image. Slowly, painfully. You hoped that she would tear along with the picture. That her laughs would rip along with the picture. And they would. She wouldn’t laugh for a long time. Days, weeks, maybe even a month, if you were fortunate enough. There’d be nothing heard from the girl. Ahhh, the silence. You loved the silence. The bliss Dark abyss. But then Dark would fade into Light. And that damn girl would start her damn laughter again. So there you stand, eyes narrowed, deeply frowning at this child’s sick laughter. Sometimes you wish you could just rip her little throat out. You smirk crazily. You can almost imagine it. Scratch that, you can imagine that. You want to take your imperfect fingers and dig them into her perfect little throat. She’d cry out in pain, but you’d pay no mind. You’d continue to pierce her soft neck, tearing through her pale skin until your fingers met with the others, deep inside her throat, and grip together. Blood would trickle down, its pace gradually increasing, until her pale-skinned neck was tainted a deep crimson. She’d cry in pain, those salty tears mixing with her life’s liquid. Then, you’d slowly, ever so slowly, pull out, completely tearing through her neck, leaving it open and ragged and bleeding. She’d try to scream out, try to breathe, but with no avail. She’d cry, again, harder, shaking her little body, more blood and tears mixing. You’d smile deviously, satisfied, That the girl could no longer laugh. And you’d forever have that bliss Dark abyss. Funny. You’ve found yourself holding a knife. You can’t remember when you took it out. You guess you must’ve taken it out when you were thinking about that wonderful solution to the laughter problem. You run your gloved finger over the edge of the blade lightly, as to not cut yourself. You smirk. Although ripping the child’s throat out would be pure bliss and entertainment, you decide on another choice. You walk from the doorway over to the child, concealing the weapon up your sleeve. The girl doesn’t notice, but continues that sick laughter of hers. You hiss in disgust. That damn laughter. You stand behind her, and look over her shoulder. She’s drawing herself, holding hands with a red headed girl. You sneer. Too bad she’ll never meet the other girl. Because of that damn laughter of hers. You grab the girl’s shoulder and spin her around to face you, yanking her up from her chair. Stab. That’s all it took. One simple, forceful stab. Her laughter stopped. She looked up at you in horror, confusion, fright… Then she looked down to see the knife plunged in her stomach. She sees the blood. You see it too. It amazes you how much blood cascaded down from the wound, staining that pretty little dress of hers with crimson. The same crimson starts to form a pool underneath her feet. Her face grows pale, and she looks back up to you. Her face is contorted in pain. You smirk. You like her pain. No, love it. You then realize that you’re still holding onto her arm. You let go. You watch the girl’s frail body fall, slamming onto the cold, hard ground. She’s not crying. She’s not laughing. She lies there; in her own little crimson pool of life. Those sky blue eyes close, and she’s gone. No more. Dead. You smile. You swear that you’ve never felt this happy. Ever. Although you’re a Nobody. For now there is no more Light to taint that lovely Dark you crave for. Now you can have your bliss Dark abyss. No more Light. No more laughter. No more of that damn laughter. Ever again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So whatcha think? And sorry for the cursing. I NEVER curse in my stories, but this one needed it. It shows more of Marly's frustration :)
Thanks! :D Yay, I'm gald I don't have to change the format :D Naw, someone named...Mish I think put my chapters into one thread. So, thanks Mish! :D *gives you a cookie*
Great story and ending! :D I HAVE AN ANNOUNCEMENT PEOPLE!!! I know Dex. In fact, I'M Dex! Yup, that's right! :D I'm a close friend of Dance, and she made this character based off of me and put it in the story. Dex acts a lot like me (with a few exceptions) and all those quotes are what I've said :) Thanks Dance for letting me be in ur story! YOU ROCK!!! btw, Dex, or Dexzas, is my Nobody name :)
lol XD *works on ch 10* oh, i've also got these great ideas for these two oneshots i want to write. Problem is...they aren't exactly 'appropriate' for KH vids.... Ima put one on fanfiction, and the other one i think may JUST get by.....
Ok, I will NEVER do that again! :D Thanks for the sticky! :D Oh, and a quick question: This summer I'm writing this BIG story, and of course ima put the chapters all in one thread, but I have two other parts to it. Would it be ok if I made three separate threads, but only updated on the same threads? That way, there'd ONLY be three threads. It'd be like having three fanfics going on at the same time, but I'd only update on those three threads. No more would be made. Would that be ok? 'Cause if its not, I can think of something else...hopefully...
Awww man that still stinks :( But dont worry! Maybe ch 10 coming out tonight will make you feel better ! :D Axel: How come when i'm sad, i dont get a cookie? Me: Cuz i give you hugs, silly! *huggles Axel* Axel: >:P I just HAD to ask... lol :3 Yay!!! :D I'm glad you like it! Thanks! I like writing suspense stories :) That, and torture stories are my favorite to write. Axel: o_0 Violet: o_0 Me: What? Axel: T-t-torture? Violet: You mean as in p-p-pain and s-suffering? Me: Yeah....? *Violet and Axel take 10 BIG steps away from me* Me: What's their problem? *evil smile*
Thanks! :D Yep, Violet likes Xed! XDDD OMG THAT STINKS!!! Weather? Like it's too hot or something? I feel really bad for you....*gives you an oversized chocolate chip cookie* :D Ch 10 will likely be out tomorrow :) lol ur weird! But cool! YAY FOR COOL WEIRDNESS!!! *high fives* Violet: coughloserscough Me: You know what Vi? I'ma hurt you.... Thanks! :D
Thanks! :D Awww... Violet has a crush.... Violet: shut up. And thank you! See, Violet? Pushing people out of their chairs is NOT nice!!! Violet: shut up. Tell me shut up one more time and I'll take my foot and stick it up your--- Xed: OKAY NO MORE TO SEE PEOPLE!!! XDDD
