.... I've just got one word to describe you, DPWolf: Hobo-who-has-friggin-43-pages-to-himself Hey, it's one word!
.... DPWolf, you seem to have the majority of the comment posts.
Ok, I'm only reading the first chapter.... here's some advice: 1) Run it through spell-check. Copy and Paste onto your Microsoft Word program and run it through your spell-check. Click Ignore All for the stuff that's definately ok for you just because it considers the sentence a fragment or something, just go for punctuation or spelling. Also, keep the names, Word just doesn't recognize names. 2) Run it through a guy.... No, not a knife, the story. Have someone you trust in literary judgement proof-read it for you. 3) Length-wise There's a reason I'm only reading the first chapter, and it's because I think it's too dang long. Speaking candidly, this is probably a result of me not being able to write this much for a chapter, but take into the account of lazy readers. Be a little more lenient about writing, smaller means less to process and less to put in ink. 4) Backups You do have copies of this saved somewhere privately, right? It's always safe to have backups ready in case you lose the original.
I actually don't know!
Cheers, to us and the coming of a new year! This year has been one of both sadness and joy, but so is every other year! Onward, fellow members of KH-Vids, from this corny post march to the neverending future!
Congrats, congrats You’re on quite a roll! Congrats, congrats You’re the star of the show! Congrats, congrats Perhaps I’m destined to make a poll! Congrats, congrats Congratulations, my salutations - From someone who hasn't even read any of your works....
Would you care to tell me who is, then? You mean like Vivi?
Just because it's you doesn't change a thing.
Yeah, sure, I come back every now and then just to harrass you for filling the spamzone to the brim.
Is that language really appropriate here?
It's people like you that I truly despise with every molecule of my being, even the dead hair and skin of mine feel contempt for you.
http://omg.yahoo.com/spears-mother-plans-parenting-book/news/3430 God, how well is this gonna go? XDDDDDD What are the quotes gonna be like? "If you want your kids to be infamous pop star singers, this book is for you!" XDDDDDDDD
Just stop being a jerk and we're good to go.
Being a nerd isn't bad, now, being a jerk is a different matter.
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Oh, I am too, it's facinating how these pitiful mortals react.
That's a lie and you know it, HigherBeing is just a manifestation of insanity in a more advanced form. You know, like how Sephiroth is.
Uhh, no....? That'd be quite disturbing.
The power of a God, which has power of so high a calibur that it transends all others. I could do anything with that power, and it counts! If that's cheating, then I'll settle with time and space manipulation.
Wow, I think that would be the teacher is being nice and that she is giving you the opportune time to take notes for study.
