*Does the same, and thinks 'Oh god, not again.'* Oh god, I need to be de-repped (even though I don't have any. Can you go into the negatives!?). I just bumped a worthless thread.
*Facepalms*... Twice
Well, let's find out: (- OMG, I can totaly see you doing that.) Nah, I really don't think you should... I apologize for the sarcasm.
ROTFL. This story reminds me of two someones... *becomes crestfallen* Oh yeah. Me and W7FHAX when I stole his brownie. EDIT: Someone mentioned a sequel. Are you actually going to do it? Or, maybe a spin-off from sunrise? That one was awesome too.
OMFG... Zexion, get the FUCK AWAY FROM KAIRI!!! ... Nice, odd ending. Thought it was funny Sora was dreaming. But the 2nd and 3rd part would make itmore of a nightmare though, right? I mean... A whole game of bingo with Org. XIII would be hell. Then seeing Zexion... *Flares up in anger* - LOL. - Guess its a good thing people here dont know you as well as I do? - OMG, it did fit pretty good. And, I love that stupid song. *is listening to it now*.
You are truly masterful. I was on the verge of tears. Dieing in your best friends arms, when he's the one who dealt the death blow... That's sad. *blows nose*
Umm... Yeah. In all seriousness, cousin, (I'm not trying to be mean at all) go to the doctor... like now. You know you can have some serious problems when taking in that much medication at once? I mean: your allergy medicine, hypothyroid meds, and Tylenol? More than likely don't mix all that well. 'Specially that last one. Now, on topic. I LOVED part 1. I always fall for those kinda stories. Its one of the reasons why I like reading your stuff. But, part 2 was lame in the funny department in most spots. Sorry? But, criticism is healthy, even when it smells. I mean, Zexion takin' ovuh was funny, but that's because it is so unlike him. Demyx and Luxord made me smirk once or twice though. I found your intros funnier than the story. I'm kinda mimicking what you said, I realise. I'll shut up. I gotta get back to school anyway, lunch break is almost over. Hope your cold lets up, I want Ch. 8 to go up on your other fanfic. :P
*backs off* Okay... Sorry? I'll leave you alone. Hey, I skimmed your other fanfic. Stick to this story, lol. Or, stop guzzling the Tylenol and rewrite the thing... Jeez. I'm addicted to this site, its official. I come home from school during lunch break, and I get on this site, instead of eating like a normal person. Wow...
Score!!! YES! New part up! *Goes off to read* Omg, I loved it. Kairi/Celosia almost kicked his ***. Crazy good. I think you are better with dialogue/explaining events that are going on throughout the story than describing a fight scene though. It felt forced in some parts, but it was still cool. Try to add more description, but don't overkill, alright? P.S.: Jeez... What took ya' so long though? I had gotten used to the regular updates.
Cuz'n!!! Hey 'cuz! I've been looking for you on this site... Wow, when did you become such a good writer!? I remember your mom telling mine that you got a D in English last year... Wutev. Anyway, omg. I frikin' LOVED your rant at the beginning. Its SO true, I totally agree. I loved the whole thing. Well, except for Ch. 7. That Jabez guy is weird. Could you pm me what happens next? C'mon, I'm family. I swear I won't tell anyone. Now, I gotta question for you. 2, actually. 1. WTH does all of that mean? I don't think I'm the only one who wants to know, either. 2. How many chapters is this thing going to be!? God... Halfway through Ch. 7 and there's finally a purpose to their adventure.
Gone Forever - Three Days Grace Don't know what's going on Don't know what went wrong Feels like a hundred years I Still can't believe you're gone So I'll stay up all night With these bloodshot eyes While these walls surround me with the story of our life I feel so much better Now that you're gone forever I tell myself that I don't miss you at all I'm not lying, denying that I feel so much better now That you're gone forever Now things are coming clear And I don't need you here And in this world around me I'm glad you disappeared So I'll stay out all night Get drunk and ****ing fight Until the morning comes I'll Forget about our life I feel so much better Now that you're gone forever I tell myself that I don't miss you at all I'm not lying, denying that I feel so much better now That you're gone forever First time you screamed at me I should have made you leave I should have known it could be so much better I hope you're missing me I hope I've made you see That I'm gone forever And now it's coming clear That I don't need you here And in this world around me I'm glad you disappeared I feel so much better Now that you're gone forever I tell myself that I don't miss you at all I'm not lying, denying that I feel so much better now That you're gone forever And now you're gone forever And now you're gone forever
Aww... That's so sweet. I wish I had someone who'd write me poems like that. Lucky girl, I think I'm jealous (just a bit).
Hey, my name's Kelly and I just recently joined this site. It looks like fun, and I'll try to be an active member. Hmm.. something about me. Ok, I enjoy watching anime shows, playing KH games (or I wouldn't be here), and a few online games (like GunZ) as well. I also play a lot of basketball and football. I recently started learning how to make AMVs, and I might post a few here. I also like Roleplaying and writing stories/poems. All I can think of, really.
Trashed and Scattered - Avenged Sevenfold
