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I was messing around on MSN with one of my friends and we started making a horror story together, I just wanted to know whether it was any good or not?? It's like the end of a story tho, so we'd have to make up a new one. I guess you could call this a 'taster' =D

WARNINGS
NOT FOR THE SQUEAMISH- CONTAINS BLOOD, GORE, BRAINS AND VOMIT.

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It turns toward you, ugly, twisted features contorting and retracting , repelling you and disgusting you. You try not not be sick; but to no avail... it is far too disgusting. What is this foul creature? you want to think, but instead you find yourself wondering if it can see you.. and it can, and as it turns and slithers toward you you can smell a stench so bad it is an effort not to vomit again.
Later, you lie on the ground, and look at the blood surrounding your broken body. What has happened? you wonder. Is this all I am made from? Is it that easy to tear me apart, and to allow me to truly see myself? You turn to look at the creature; it's exhausted, and in sudden hope that you can save your land you ignore the blood and guts spilling from your veins and arteries, and draw your silver dagger.
Thrusting it foward, you drive it into the creatures left eye. It screams, recoiling and whipping its head from side to side, crimson blood spraying from its eye. You somehow pick yourself up and stagger away. It can still smell you. The hairs on the back of your neck stand up. you feel it coming closer, closer hissing with rage...
Giving a strained battlecry, you plunge it deep into the creature's skull. You feel it hit bone, and an excruciating wail fills your ears, and a terrible pain tears through your gut. You can only watch as its brains slop onto the cold stone and everything begins to fade. The creature lunges for you guts lying on the floor, and looks you in the eye as it consumes them with apparant pleasure.

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