Hahannuh is right, I went through a bout of depression, however I did not slit my wrists. as I've stated before, I'm simply to afraid of physical pain. However, I can see where they're thought process comes from. The mental pain they are feeling is so great, that they need a way to releave(sp?) it. I do not agree with it, but I can understand it.
That;s just me freaking out XP don''t take me so seriously kiddo XD I just get scared really easily T-T
Actually, I may be able to help you in the beats category. There is apparently a program called frootyloops.com or somethiing to that effect, where you can record beats. I believe that is how its spelled, but you may have to try a few different iteartions, all focused arround the double o in frooty. Try and find the site. I had a friend who raps point me to it for my brother.
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*claps in applause* We got the forum rapper (unless someone else has done this before O_o) Irregardless, this was very good Hahannih. I wish you could record it and put it somewhere for us all to hear. I bet it would be even better rapped. I should tell my bro about you, he raps as well XD
n00b Alert! I'm not wasting my time in this thread anymore. Its sad that this counts for posts. Could an admin please lock this thread?
ya! I'm one of Hahannuh;s amigos! *hugs* People I like? Long list >< My rp peeps - Rufus Axel8 and Rena88 My other rp friends: Hahannuh, Luster Dragon, RogueAngel (I spelled your name right XD) Hikki_Kairi Other good friends: Archer of Oblivion, Roxas is Hot, Kaira People I like but don't know really well yet: Roxas, DarkAndroid, NRA, prety much the entire staff I'm probably missing some people, so just kick me or something If I forgots ya! And special call out to the wifey and twin sis! Noticed this after reading this - Every one on there except for the staff members are girls! DX Caitlin is going to kill me O_O *hides*
Skies of Arcadia!!!! No one even remembers this game, but it was one of my absolute favorite rpgs for the cube, if not my favorite. It has a ton of gameplay, plenty f extras, cool characters, a neat storyline...*continues on in a rant about how amazing the game is*
Jecht you should really stop while your ahead. Riku gave him the toy sword as a jab at the fact he wasn't supposed to have been the keyblade master.He gave him one of the swords they had used to play with on Destiny Island, thusly why Riku said: "Here, Sora. go play hero with this." At this point Riku thought Sora was against him, and was trying to put him down. And how can you call Riku an idiot for going to the darkside, then claim to like SEPHIROTH! He is darkness incarnate, one of the single most sadistic and screwed up villians EVER. You are making no sense, and only cementing the fact that you have no idea what you are talking about.
*stares at the new person* Be ye n00b or just new? Welcome to the forums, post lots, read da rules, and don't get caught spamming!
*Reads LD's post* *blushes* um...I think Rufus may have a thing or two to say...If she ever resurfaces...I haven't seen her in days O_o
O_O Massive man-eating spiders DX *runs*
Updated with a new story: I've Found You Once Again. I'll post here whenever I post a new story, so that people can locate them easier. Summary: Summary: [To save another, one must often give of themselves]Sora's ultimate sacrifice. oneshot [Twilight to Dawn]
O_O I like XD Thanks for taking the time to make these, do you care if I save my avatar and use it at a later point?
Alrighty folks, time for something COMPLETELY different. This is the first Fanficiton I ever wrote and its *drumroll please* a POEM! That's write, before I wrote my storied, I wrote a poem, and this poem right here is what got me into fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it. It is ancient, so I don't know how good it is, but I liked it. Hopefully you will too. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summary: [To save another, one must often give of themselves]Sora's ultimate sacrifice. oneshot [Twilight to Dawn] ---------------------------------------------------------------- I’ve found you now, but your not here, Why must they keep you away? I’ve searched for you, both near and far, Why must they keep you away? Your body lies, lifeless on the floor, Why must they keep you away? They took from you, what made you you, Why must they keep you away? I’ve found a way, to set you free, I know now what I must do. To free your heart, I shall pierce my own, I know now what I must do. I say goodbye, for good this time, I know now what I must do. With one final sorrow, I set you free, I know now what I must do. Do not weep, I’ve done what is right, I cannot be there anymore. With my life gone, seven lives were saved, I cannot be there anymore. Most importantly though, I’ve set you free, I cannot be there anymore. Cry not for me, for at least you are free, I cannot be there anymore. Ever in darkness, I see no more light, I drift onward without you. I long to see your face again, but know my wishes shall not come true, I drift onward without you. Slowly I start to fade, and loved memories begin to wane, I drift onward without you. The darkness engulfs me, and I pray for it to end, I drift onward without you. A voice in the darkness, and I remember who I am, Could I too be saved? I listen intently, thought the voice is very feint, Could I too be saved? Who is calling, are they calling for me? Could I too be saved? I focus my mind, and head for the sound, Could I too be saved? I awake to the light, to find myself in your embrace, I’ve found you once again. They are there too, but for the moment I don’t care, I’ve found you once again. The enemy closes around us, and still I refuse to let go, I’ve found you once again. I whisper softly in your ear, then grab your arm and run, I’ve found you once again. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I hope you enjoyed this foray into poetry. I don't do a lot of it, but it's fun to do something different from time to time. Twilightsown's Fanfiction Home Page
I can understand the motivation part ^^;; I have a story I've been meaning to edit for over a year now...Anyways, to keep this from being spam... I think that it could just really be adding more. That's all it is. I really hope you post more of your work as well, because I'd like to see your writing style really put to the test. I want to know what you really write like, so I'd like to see more than a few words in between some song lyrics. If you're as good as I think you are, then I will enjor reading anything else you post XD
O_o I liked it, but there were more lyrics than your story. I love the idea, but I think you could elaborate a lot more on everything. Your wording was great, and you have good grammatical qualities to what you do have...but there is so little here. For me at least, I see a great opportunity to go into each scene incredibly detailed, recounting it through Kairi and explaining how she felt. This was well written, but it only feels half done. I do like the idea, and you wrote it well, its just this story is begging for more.
Shikamaru is only 14 O_O Coulda fooled me
O_O I got mentioned...tis the apocalypse...And I think I need to go have a word with Rufus about the supposed cheating...*grabs bat* Trust me this isn;t abuse...if you knew all the things she's pulled on me...*walks off grumbling*
O_O Croup, I love your character So dark and...gah! Sweet Cook XD
