1: I do not get a cookie. *****. :guns: 2: Who's Mary Sue? 3: I THOUGHT YOU WERE A GAG STORY TELLER! 4: Awesome! 5: Write more! 6: Since when do yuo believe in villains in your crazy stories? 6: Wierd idea. 7: I should stop doing this.... 8: its unfair she gets a cookie when I do not know a thing what you meant. 9: Why am I continuing? 11: Ta-da! 12: Did you realize I didn't put a 10? 13: hehe... 15: Skipped another number! 16: Can you guess it? 17: What did I drink?
-He thinks too much. -Hes clueless, like sora... I'm bad at this..
occ: Im lost...recap...who was my character talking too?
Xigbar continued to fire at Donald, not getting any hits on himself, easily making this battle easy for him.
occ: we are talking about how we are lost and have no one to rp with and need a recap desperately.
Kh2 riku. More older and better.
What I don't like is the long stuff you have to say to summon the stuff. Its a good plot, though. I think you should add more detailing into it, and make it a bit more realistic. Sorry for becoming a critic all of a sudden.
occ: oh....so now what do I do...got nothing to do!
occ: OH MY GOSH ITS ALREADY THE PROM RECAP.
"Your end of the bargain was not given. Oh! You know that one bounty hunter who was looking for keith? Well, right now he has been killed, too. Sorry!" Xelron laughed, crossing his arms, and firing Kunai in her direction. Shetx appeared in the darkness, a black coat over him. "Where am I?" Xelron stopped, a new image in his mind. A new member that might help me.. Xelron looked at the two brats who opposed him, Mexofina, and Daxma. "Sorry. My schedual says that I must go. Sorry, but these Fates will do well to give you what you want." Xelron teleported away, leaving a large group of Fates in his place.
Xelron flipped around, and while Mexofina was in the air, he lifted his feet, kicking her high into the air. Xelron looked back to Daxma. "Oh. Hi there! The perverted one with this clown, too. Mr. Hero comes to save his dearly beloved." Xelron launched plenty of Xladins spears at Daxma. Seths heart was stolen, he lay their, motionless, and the Fates left his body, teleporting elsewhere.
occ: thank you! bic: Xigbar rolled around, and shot at Donald. "Take this, you old quack!"
Xelron rolled forward. "A unique clown sword holder, actually." Xelron said, summoning and throwing Xaldins spears at Mexofina. Seth fell to the ground, his feelings drasticaly changing, with a blade in him. The shock of the changing feelings twisted him, shocking him, and made him unmoving. The Fates feasted on his heart. Kexith watched the battles from across the room, in the sphere.
occ: oh...I thought you were going to the school...that was alot of posts back.
occ: you guys already in the school? remember about the traps and the noise, then.
occ: OH MY GOSH!!! IM HERE FOR NOT 2 DAYS AND ITS ALREADY 30 PAGES? RECAP!!
Xelron lifted the large weapon he had, and deflected the keyblade. "Ah...the keyblade. A wierd weapon indeed. Its thickness and strange shape makes a person in the crowd holding it a freak, freak." Xelron chuckled, running at Mexofina.
Xelron ducked, and twirled around, dodging both attacks. "No, I didn't. Of course I did, you 'light be with me' freak." He summoned Lexaues's weapon, and swung it, smashing Mexofina. Seth threw his keyblade at one Fate, it making it dazed, then he summoned the keyblade again, and threw both of them at it, destroying it. Seth ddin't see the blade that was coming directly towards him...
Xelron bended backwards, dodging the attacks, and he kicked Mexofina away. "You said you wanted to be with all of your friends? Well, I just defeated one. Keith."
occ: I go with option 2, destiny! bic: Xelron appeared out of the shadows, a few metres away from Mexofina. "Hello, pervert."
