"All i remebered was the devil pushed us off then it went black."jin said standing up.
Jin didnt say anything but slowly opened her eyes."what happened?" jin asked looking around.
Jin laid on the cold floor unconcious.She moaned.
nothing just listening to music and eating jello!
I'll be yur friend too ^^ So watcha doin? just pm me :3
Im serious I hope you do ^^ becuz he should treat u well he isn't like the other guys.If he does hurt you omg he has to go through me jessica and bailey so i hope it works out.I dedicate this to you the sweet flower lol
AAWWWW man ok bye Imma miss you!!!!
I love the rythmn and the flow throughtout the whole poem.And i like the ryhming to.The best part was the ending ^^
Congratulations!!!! Ummm....do you know when the next poetry competition is?
I <3 that band.Isn't that the song to deathnote
"I just said it Im not that brat!" she said in a annoyd voice."Now go or i'll just-"she said and was cut of from her falling to the ground.Her hair went back to normal.
"I am not that brat!" she said walking away as if nothing happened. OOC:GTG!! byez
Jin fell of hearing raxtion's scream.His scream rang through her ears.Then she closed her eyes.She reopened them slowly revealing white glowing eyes.Her hair turned white.She grapped Raxtion and she somehow grew wings and flew back up.A gunsowrd appeared in her hands."You *******!" she said charging at him.
Her tears fell on raxtion's cheek."Im sorry,but.....I can't trust anyone now." Jin said.She lifted his hands off the cliff."I...." Jin said helping him back up.
Jin looked at Raxtion in terror.She walked to the edge and put her hands on his."YOU ABUSED MY TRUST!" jin said holding on his hands tighter.Tears flowed down her cheeks."Damn it why did you have to do it!" she said clenching harder.
Jin heard him but couldn't open her eyes."RAXTION!" jin said in an angry tone."Why are you here now!" she said and slowly open her eyes.She saw him hanging on the cliff and herself being held in the arms of the devil.
OOPs sorry i read that part diffrently :sweatdrop: i <3 it though
OOC:Wow lol Jin was still unconcious.She had no idea he was about to throw her off the cliff.She talked in her small sleep."Im sorry..."she said and a small teardrop came from her eye.
I like how you put metaphors in there and one question is this part --->Love so high if I fell I would die is fell supposed to be feel?
OOC:My mom said i can stay up awhile ^^ "Yeah you must be right."she said returning."Im so confused..."she said before fainting.Her body laid on the dirt in the park.
