Ok Everyone Stay Calm! Whatever You Do, Don't Panic!!!!!aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!
Perfect! The shiny thing...I'm looking for the plant. that one comic I didn't see...it was too small...
Tank jou. Although I have to perfect my writing a bit. -----------------==========================----------------------------================ At the evil guys lair......(church organ music goes on) The demon leader watched in a crystal ball as the adventurers began weaker and weaker, as they started dieing, losing their hearts. Three already, he thought. But that is simply but a piece of sand on a beach. Nero is hot on my trail, Mickey and Merlin are following my enemies movements,improving them on their steps toward my fall! Thats it. Steal the hearts of the opposing enemies. The good ones first. Melissa, the secretary of the organization, wrote down the new order. Send two organization members on Merlin, two on Mickey, and one on Nero. Melissa wrote the orders down, and asked, "Any specific ones?" The demon looked at her, glaring. "Axel, Rambo, Exal (Axels heartless), Xarlene (Larxenes heartless), and finally Mexony." Melissa nodded, and left the throne room. I'd rather die then see my enemies living. Zero thought, even if it means sending my entire organization on them. ------------------=====================-----------------------==================----------- Mickey ran through the forest, slashing through the bits of heartless still roaming, their numbers getting frail by the swing. A cloaked member apeared in front of Mickey, and the king skidded to a halt. Another member landed behind him. "You don't deserve to wear that cloak like us. Got it memorised?" The member in front of him said, pointing his finger at the king. "Hey. stealing the heart of the king sends the whole world without a leader, right?" The one behind him said. The one in front of him took off the hood. Axel. The one behind him took off the hood. A guy that looked like Axel, except with an afro as the wacky hair. His strange marks were on his nose then Axels, on his eyes. Not Minnie. The king thought. How come Zero has the power to bring back the destroyed nobodies though? Axel #1 took out his chakram, baring it with flames, creating a circle of fire around them. Axel #2 took out dual swords, baring it with flames. "We'll defeat you. Got it memorised?" The two Axels said, as they launched themselves at him.
Merlin landed onto the rocky, war-scarred land of the battlefield. He inspected the battle field, and saw even more fighting. A few heartless jumped at him, baring their teeth and claws. They exploded in the air, and Merlin simply walked away from them, as more heartless jumped at him but exploded drammaticly by his powers. I've got to get all of them to safety, merlin thought. They can't fight forever!Besides, some of them already were killed! Merlin now picked up his pace, and started running towards the few who were being attacked. ----- Dante and Ansem were equals. They could never land a single blow on each other, both of them blocking, dodging, and reflecting attacks. Ansems way of fighting would be turning into a boy, then turning to a monster and back again. Dantes way of fighting would be continuesly dodging and throwing swords and white roses. Explosions were happening everywhere. It was complete chaos. Dante was getting weaker, losing magic, again, and again. Lots of times he faltered. ----- Rinn was getting mad, being attacked, AGAIN! Her new attacker was a blonde with combed back hair, her agility exploding, baring kunai. "Can you funeral cloaked people leave us alone with your lackeys???!!!!" Rinn said, turning her necklace to a gun and started firing at her. The blonde girl giggled, and bolts of lightning shot out of her weapons as she twirled around the bullets. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You know what? I think that my stories are awful! I'm losing my touch at writing! All I'm writing is fighting scenes! I gotta stop....oh noes.
(Tilts his head,staring at the screen) Huh? Hmm. Well. Ok. Hmm. (Shakes his head) Good! You captured the elements of writing perfectly!Slow beginning, perfect entrance to new characters. Bingo!
I do not understand a thing that happened, very short, add more-this kinda seems like spam to me.
Why would Namine telll people what the Keys are, throwing it to them, and saying lets fight? I dont understand that.
That was the funniest thing eva!!!!I loved it!I loved it!!! gwahhh!!+
I Am Sorry About The Guns And All And Am Really Twisted About The Story....
Nyumnyum make longer chapters. I am also at a hard time at doing so.
Oh i have already read that. Good story. Here we go, friends, family, boys and girls. --------------=====------==========---------========---------==========-------========--- King Mickey ran through the forest, slashing the last few heartless in his way, only a few bands of two or three. He ran and ran, flipping, slashing, just like in the episode of the world that never was. He ran all the way to Merlins tower, running through all the halls, and up the steps. A voice echoed in the rooms. "What is it that you need, Mickey?" Mickey halted, flashing away his keyblade. "I need more people on this quest to stop the last organization!" "You have already lost two hearts. Kasha's, the dog, Keath, the used-to-be-organization member, which doesn't even have a heart. Hes already dissipated into darkness. And Rebecca, the kind girl with the secretive past." "Yes I know. And I feel like Ansem the Wise. Losing people because of my plans." "What do you need, then?" The voice echoed. "Merlin. I-need help." Mickey said, sad about losing already three of his recruits. "I can only tell you to get back their hearts. Defeat their heartless. You do not need to defeat their nobodies. Afiras already destroyed, and so is Crix. Keaths already a nobody. A nobody that doesn't even have a real person to merge with." Mickey was surprised of the news. Already? Two of the organization members are down, Mickey thought. "Restore their hearts by defeating their heartless. And for Keath-he has already been shadowed. Watch out for his Organization member." Merlin echoed. Mickey ran back through the tower, and began his new semi-quest to find the two heartless, and the new member. - - - - - - - - - - - - - Back at the organizations head quarters..... Melissa walked through the halls, reaching the throne room.She looked up, and called, "Two members are defeated. Afira and Crix. A new member has been reported. His name is Kexath, the old member, Keath." The demon leader thought over this report. "Send three organization members to defeat all the opposing people against us, at Merlins Tower. Send those three to that world. And send another to fight Merlin." Melissa wrote that in her note pad. She felt like a personal secretary, the #2 on the organization. "Any specific people?" "Xemnas,Ansem, Larxene, and Zexion. Lets see what those brain-washed members can do." The leader whispered. Melissa nodded, waiting impatiently until the order for the renewal to start. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Back at the world of Merlins tower....... Dante was finishing up the rest of the heartless, and noticed the changes. The girl was gone. One of the girls was gone that he saw. Two heartless apeared in front of him, and they looked like two girls with ash floating around them that looked like bones. "Who da heckahell?" Dante said, drop kicking the heartless. At the corner of his eye, Dante could see a cloaked person standing, observing the drop kicking. "So your one of them." He/she said, walking slowly towards him. Dante summoned his pals, Gilgamesh,Rebellion, and Lucifer. "Whatya wanta?" Dante called at him, stepping towards him. "You oppose our leader. For that, I'll have to destroy you in the name of Kingdom Hearts." He replied, unvealing his hood. He had white, long, straight hair that was put back and he could see his brow, and his tanned face. "And you are?" Dante said, dodging a long black triton that was thrown at him. "I, am Ansem, the great!" The so-called Ansem said. "I swear, Gilgamesh, Rebellion, and Lucifer, I shall give you the best treatment possible after all of this." Dante whispered. Now I am not good at describing this battle, and how Ansem you'll have to defeat twice. All i can say is that I'm too lazy to write all of this. Ansem transformed into Riku replica, wielding his keyblade that could steal hearts. Dante paid no mind, only taunting the younger Riku. Oh geez. I'm taking a break. Rinn was walking through the now somewhat empty forest, and looked around, on both sides of her. One side: A small boy with white hair fighting that dude we saw before, destroying that humoungus army of heartless with his black dude buddy with red blades. Other side:two boys were fighting another guy with white hair, shooting red blades and thorn thingies. Wow. In front of her: A cloaked member was running at her wielding kunai that sizzled with electricity. Will this battle ever end???!!!!! Rinn thought, bored to death. Ok, not the most or the best I have written, (to my standards) but I have gotten the illness laziness. I will come back when I have healed.
I give the same words that he said. H0ly C#@p!!
:crashcomp: Oh. Gosh. Well. Err. ALRIGHTY THEN!TIME TO GET TO WORK!! Lets do a recap on these things. The leader told 2 organization people to go to each world, which means that THE HEROES HAVE ALOT OF WORK TO DO TO GET RID OF THEM!!!!!!! Rebecca found herself in a black chasm, infested with souls creeping around, and a light far away, taking the lights from the souls. She saw that she was one of them, endlessly falling, and one word came to her mind: Sh00T! Plus more, I lost my heart to the heartless! Oh NOES! Rinn slashed out with a gigantic hammer at another heartless, and spotted Rebecca on the ground, fading away as heartless bit into her-like the skin became like clay. She glowed and sparkled, fading away... Words came to Rinns mind: SH00T!The heartless took the advantage of her knocked out!!! Evan spotted an organization member with eight tales, with a boy in a dashing suit knocked out, tied up in the tails. Oh no! Evan thought. The organization probably wants him as a new person for them to join! Iv'e got to save him! W00T! Some help from a new character! Evan raced after the organization member, quietly, and quickly, jumping to each branch the member went through and some shortcuts. Its Afira! Evan thought. I'll have to cut off her tails to stop her from using her powers! That boy is another anchor from her powers! He swung his keyblade, down..down...SLICE! Two tails were swung off, and they fell, limp, as magic drained away from them. Afira screamed, as she whirled around, spotting her opponent. "You!" Evan struck her with a bolt of lightning, making her drop the boy, and send her careening through the trees. Score two for Evan. She dug her claws into a tree trunk, and launch at him with full speed. Wind bucketted Evan, but he evaded the full blows by diving. He landed on a branch, and then used the flashy thingy at Afira that is used to open key-holes. She raged, as powerfull tornados appeared around them.Evan was grabbed in the storm, and pulled away. Evan, in the air, shot Afira again with the flashy thingy (I just got to have the name for it soon!). Lets overlook this battle. Two enourmous holes in Afira, which she had six tails now. Evan saw the boy fly up, and a keyblade appeared in his hand. Hes a keyblade wielder too! Evan thought, grabbing on to a tree, which wasn't any help since the tree was uprooted in the storm. The tree tornados sucked in lots of heartless, and they cycled around the battle scene. "Whats with you?" Afira growled,"Why do you come and help this boy eh?" Evan dived at the boy, and put a hand on his keyblade. He aimed it at Afira too, including his. Afira took off her hood, the wolven head looking frightened at the two keyblades pointing at her. "No!" She roared. The two flashes streaked through her, and she slowly dissipated like ash, and faded away, roaring, screaming, at the top of her wolven lungs. The tornados too, dissipated, and the wind was calm again. Evan grabbed the boy, and landed softly onto the ground. Evan smiled. That was the best fight I've ever had, he thought. Back at the fight scene..... Keath rolled all the way down the hill, and got up slowly, using his sword like a cane. He looked up at Crix, who was triumphantly standing at the top of the hill. Keath scraped up a ball of mud from his dirty coat, and with the ball he ran back up the hill. She turned her staff into a slingshot, and picked up a rock. She aimed it at him, and shot. Keath flipped over the rock, and threw the ball at her. She raised her hand, to block the mud ball...but then.... It glowed into a fireball. She became on fire, and was blasted back. She raged, thinking, So he could use objects to his ability. And in Keaths mind, So she can change her weapons to more things! Keath jumped at the flying member, and started slashing at her. She screamed in pain, twirling around, behind Keath, and turned her sling shot to a warhammer, bringing it down. Keath spotted the warhammer, and dove away, taking a leaf and throwing it at her, like a dagger. It burned up, setting her on fire again. She patted the flames off of her, and sent a lightning bolt at him. He dove away, and she quickly sent icicles where he went. Ouch. He looked like the creature from Kameo. He bent to the ground, bleeding, and tired. No!This may be the end for my character!!! Crix laughed. "Whats wrong? Had enough? Thats ok! I'll leave you with only a few finishing moves!" Keath froze, as ice began to form around him. He couldn't do anything,since he was so tired. The icicles and freezing was Crix's powers. She walked to him, taking her time, and changed her weapon to a dagger. "Buh-bye, Kekeee!!!" The leaves around Keath burned up, flaming Crix, and melting the ice. Keath dove out of the way as Crix swung her dagger, but she only turned it into num-chucks. It tied around Keaths leg, and he was sadly thrown into a tree. "Would you stopping with the firefirefireing???" Crix said, changing her weapon to a FLAMETHROWER!!!!! She burned the tree up, with an awe inspiring sight that sent the tree to ashes. Before the shot, Keath dabbed his shirt with water that he had in a horn with a cork on, and used it to get away from the fire, putting the shirt to his mouth to breathe. He jumped out from the inferno, stop dropped and rolled, and went behind a tree. That guy is smart. And to the slaughtering heartless scene....... Dante was finishing the rest of the heartless with his sword, and red blades, blowing up the rest.....but then there was more coming, continuing, and they seemed like they kept on going on forever. Eden fought through even more heartless, the numbers which seemed to be continuing without end. She saw a girl with a shirt on that said,"Talking is NOT a way of communicating." She was fading away, her heart stolen by the heartless when she was knocked out. Eden couldn't bare the sight, which she always had, like a grudge which stuck on her forever. Seeing a person die. Lets now go back to the ruins of Evans battle...... If you saw them, they looked like army people. A knocked out guy being dragged with his arm around another boy, the other boy supporting him. Glad I got Afira out of my watch out list, Evan thought. The other boy woke up, standing up. "Who are you?" The boy said. "The guy who just saved you from Afira." Evan replied, hoping that he won't have to argue with the boy. "Whos Afira?" The boy said. "An organization member." Evan said, continuing to walk. "Wait. Where are my friends?" The boy said, running up to Evan. "Who are your friends?" Evan asked, going around the boy. "Uh...Sora, Donald, Goofy, Jimminy, Rebecca, Rinn...hey do you know where the king is?" The boy said. "Nope,nope,nope,nope,nope,nope, and finally, nope." Evan said, walking away. "You're a keyblade wielder. And so am I." Sora looked at him, quizical, "And you know this...how?" "Well, I just used your powers when you were knocked out to defeat Afira. Just a bit of it." Evan replied. If you could count using Key openings as powers...Evan thought. "How did you know of the organization...and even their names...and how could you take away my powers to use them?" Sora asked, a billion questions slamming at his mouth. "How am I supposed to know about the power things?" Evan shrugged. "But I do know of the names and the organization because how they asked me to join them. Even gave me this keyblade and the powers. I refused, of course." Sora never stopped with the questions."How come the organization is back?" "A new leader. A demon, called Zero. His plans..I don't really know. But I do know that his organization is building up. When they asked me to join, only four organization members were there. But more came." "Oh." Sora said, feeling bad, and lazy after all that work to destroy the organization."I guess I have to get back to work." "What are you talking about?" Evan said, his turn to ask the questions. "I defeated the organization before. The original one." The boy said, dropping his head with the responsibilty and the work." With my friends, Donald, Goofy, and Jimminy..kind of. This is pretty much of how it all began......." And so Sora started his tale of his adventure. Back to Keaths battle..... Keath hid behind a tree, resting for a bit. He took his time to bandage up his wounds, and put on antibiotic. I swear this guys really equipped!! Crix smiled, thinking she defeated her opponent, changing her flame thrower to a star necklace. She walked away, happily, as the hyperness faded away from her. Its either this girl is really good, or I really suck, Keath thought. Why didn't I think of a flamethrower first, when I started fighting him? Crix thought. Each time I fight now, I'll start with a flame thrower! Keath took the last gulps of water from his horn that was filled with the last remains of water from his experience of the flame thrower, and got up. Everything ached, and the land around him was too, scarred from the battle. Chapter 6..or 4...I don't know.. Keath used the last of his strength to get himself up. He used his sword as a cane....but collapsed, of loss of blood, wounds, and being tired. Crix ran in the direction where Afira went, jumping from tree to tree, branch to branch, only seeing: Two boys, one, the one that Afira got, and another, sitting down, one of them listening to the others story. She changed her necklace to a flamethrower, and shot it at them. They realized what was happening, and they jumped for cover. "Its Crix!" Evan said. "Evan?!" Afira shot again, and again, using her fire powers also. The two boys dodged and dove, missing the flames, reaching her, and..... SLAM SLAM WACK BANG OUCH THATS GOTTA HURT IN THE MORNING SLASH SLICE CUT OOH THATS REALLY BAD FOR HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The two boys landed on the ground, high fived each other, the now, friends, and watched the member drop to the ground with a thud, slowly fading away. "I guess...I can't handle two keyblade wielders...." Crix whispered. The two boys thought they had easily defeated a member, but BOY I'M GETTING MAD SINCE MY CHARACTER WEAKENED HER!!!!!!!! ---====-----====----====----====----====----====----====----====-----====----====----== Alright, so that was kind of a bonus for you guys. Oh yeah. Sorry people, no more people can join, but only the guy I promised in pming each other. So, enjoy the story so far!
Add more to your chapters. If thats gonna be your chapters, then you'll end up with thousands.
Whats really great that more chapters will come soon cuz easters here and i have a break from school. Here it is all of you!!! -----====----====----====----====----====----====-----====----====----====----====----== Chapter 4? I think...hmm. Maybe its 5. I don't really know. Anyways, that doesn't matter. Crix started jumping around, getting really hyper, doing handstands, cartwheels without hands, jumps that went high up into the sky, and lots more. "So, Keakon. Wazzup me bros? Shall you continue fighfing?" Crix said. Keath kicked his legs up, which got his body up in the air, and then he landed on his feet, unsheathing his sword. Crix dived at him with her keyblade, and Keath twirled to the side, but then Crix did the special move: She turned her keyblade into a staff, hitting him. "Boogely! Boogely!" Crix screamed, as she cartwheeled toward the flying Keath, taking another full blow from the staff. This girl has all elements, and can turn that necklace of hers into keyblade, but also to a staff, Keath thought, landing uncontrolably down a hill. That means I'll have to keep as far away from her, as long as her staff. Meanwhile, Sora had woken up from his fainting slumber. Sora opened his eyes, exhausted, finding himself over top of an organization member with eight tails. He shook his head, looking clearly. I wish I was back in that meadow!!! Sora thought. He kicked the organization member in the face, and he/she growled, dropping Sora. He quickly turned his body over to land on his feet, landing on a branch. "The organization!" Sora said, as he flashed his keyblade. The member landed softly on another branch far away. The member growled ferouciously at the keybearer, the tails swinging around, dangerously. "What are you guys up to now?" Sora yelled, jumping from branch to branch. A huge wind gust pummeled Sora, slamming him against a tree. He fell down, hitting each branch..ouch...eeek...ow....sss.....oooohh...thats gotta...ow....hurt in the morning... You guys don't wanto see that. Sora grabbed on to the last branch,hauling himself upward. Another gust of wind flew down at Sora, making him lose his balance, snapping the branch, and punching him several times. So that member controls wind! Sora thought, falling backwards into the ground. Sora got himself up, but another gust of wind picked him up, and slammed him headfirst into a tree. Ow. Sora slumped, rolling down the tree trunk. Another gust of wind picked him up, and threw him up the tree, breaking more branches. The member grabbed Sora with its tails, wrapping around him, tieing him up. And the crowd goes wild as the organization whoops Sora!
ah yes. just like kingdom hearts comes to earth.
Guess whos back back back back again gain gain Soranspartanti's back back back back again gain gain... Week is over me hearties!!! HERE IT IS!!! ----===----===-----===----===----===----===----===------===-----====----====-----====---=== If you could picture a girl, growing monstrous, growing demonic, that will be the same picture you see in Kasha. Bloodlust, (sorry person who gave me Kasha...) demonic..I think I already said that, monstrous..that too, evil, hate glowing in her eyes, as she moved like a possesed zombie, slashing through the heartless. The heartless were going down quite quickly, and you could see some patches of land where there wasn't any heartless, but those were filled in by them moving closer at the defenders, or the defenders themselves. Rinn launched at the creature who was helping the cloaked people, yet she is also defeating heartless, which kind of confused Rinn, but she was beyond caring. Her necklace transormed into a staff, which she used to try to swing at the creatures legs. The creature flipped over her, and shoved her aside, making Rinn fly into heartless, crushing them. "Thats one heck of a Fido Transformer!!!" Rinn yelled as she turned her staff to a keyblade, and swung at the heartless around her, clearing room for the two warriors to fight. Rinn ran at Kasha, Kasha growling as Rinn swung the keyblade. The keyblade wasn't close to Kasha, so she didn't expect her to change it to a long staff to knock her away! Way to go, Rinn! "C.C.C.Cmmmmonnn!" Rinn laughed, launching at Kasha. Kasha growled with rage, unsheathing long..claws...how the heck do wolves do that?? Rinn widened her eyes, looking at the large claws, running at her. Kasha turned into attack mode this time, and now it was Rinns turn to change to defence. Kasha pirrouetted at Rinn, swinging her claws. Rinn did the matrix, bending back, as three razor sharp claws swung at her. She took her staff, putting it between the claws, and turned her staff, flipping Kasha into the ground. She quickly knocked her out with her staff. (And the crowd goes wild as Rinn KO's Kasha) "No biscuits for you, doggy." Rinn laughed as she saw Kasha turning into a human from her demon state. Well, THAT WAS ONE COOL FIGHT!A ROUND OF APPLAUSE FOR RINN!CLAPCLAPCLAPCLAP!!!!! Ok, so we got that fight settled. Lets go to Keath now. Keath ran at the cloaked members who held Sora captive. I've got to get those members. The King payed me lots to help these people! Keath thought as he launched at the two members. "I'll handle him. You go get the key boy to our leader." One member said. The other member, a cloaked person with eight tales, flung the boy over his/her shoulder, and jumped across the tree branches, much like Naruto. The member that decided to tag along with my character took off her hood, smiling. Keath inspected her. She had semi short black hair, almost black eyes, her organization cloak was opened, which Keath could see a blue tank top, white skirt, and sandals. "We need proper introductions! So I'll know who I'm beating up. My name, is Crix." The member said, who was Crix. Keath unsheathed his sword, inspecting the kind member in sandals. "Keath. Nice to meet you. Glad I know who I'll KO, too." Crix giggled, jumping at Keath. Crix's necklace glowed as it turned into a staff. Keath jumped at her too, and both, in middair, they swung their weapons at each other. Keath turned around, swinging another blow at Crix, in the back. She kicked the sword back, and kicked Keaths face too. Ouch. Keath flew backwards into a tree, whiping the blood off his mouth. Crix landed softly on a branch away from Keath. "You know, Keath, I can do more of that." Crix said as she flipped at him, and he responded moody, "Shut up." Her staff turned into a keyblade, and she threw a fire ball at him. He responded with throwing another fireball at it, much stronger. It flamed through the other one, and Crix flipped away, landing on a brach to the side, launching again. The fire ball flew into a tree, completing a hole through it. Keath dove at Crix, swinging his sword at her, while she responded with a lightning bolt at him. Ouch. Keath, taking the force full blow, smashed against the tree again. "Each time I just give you worse mouth wash." Crix said as she was in the air. Keath spat out the blood in his mouth, thinking, I haveto beat this gal in another way. Keath flew past her as she dove past him, and he made the same fake attack at her, swinging his sword. She moved her foot out to kick the sword and his face, but he pulled back the sword, sheathing it, then grabbing her feet, swinging her at a tree. He landed onto a branch, with her crashing into the trunk. She closed her eyes, licking away the blood on her lips. Oy. This is getting bad. Rated PG-13 for bad fighting sequences. She got up, brushing off the dust from Keath's gloves. "That was only payback for the first." Keath said, unsheathing his sword. Crix laughed. "Get ready then, to do more of that, 'cause theres lots of those heading your way!" Keath sighed, and he looked strangely at Crix. Crix took out a chocolate bar. Ha! When I'm hyper, this boy will get lots of bad hits!! she thought in her head, as she took a bite out of the chocolate bar. "What, taking a break already? Or do you want to savour a chocolate taste before you'll have lots of red liquid on your tongue?" Keath said, looking at her strangely as she wrapped the chocolate bar, and put it in her pocket. She launched at him, much more faster then before, knocking him off the branch. In the air, she dove down at his flailing body, and took out her keyblade, smashing again, full force at him, smashing him down at the ground. What the heck did she eat? Keath thought, coughing as the three blows sank in. The first, the second, the ground.That seemed only caramel chocolate!! YIPPPEEEEE!!! Im back again, and there is your story!
Hehe!I think I know whats next!Shes a he!Hehehehehe!Larxenes a boy!Change the name to Larx!or...is she a guy?
Continue Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy enchiladas a real love story....rated pg 18 for real disgustin stuff.
