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holy....how many girls....everytime i record another person and write a story, another person jumps in. so, anyone, who tries to post, do not post a character until i say the delaying is stopped.

srry for the delays everyone.... :nono:

i cant write the story until one more week cuz im going to hawaii....

holy enchiladas! how many people jumped onto this post so quickly...wow.these posts get popular and popular.

oh geez!!!everyone is pounding me before i can get another person done!!gah!and its all good....waa.we need more evil people! thats bad. ill never get a break with this popular post!
:yelling: :guns:

ok, im srry if i did it wrong, but thanx for the "i like urs better"
its coming....its coming!

I just have one more thing to say.Write down more expressions and more thoughts.

Heya all ye guys-i mean girls....and that other guy......uh hi.Im back!So here comes the story!!!!!!!!

As all of the companions ran out of the hide-out, finding out what the noise was all about, they saw the most scariest creature-or maybe it was a heartless? You never know.
The creature slammed some trees with its large cob-webbed fist, and the trees fell down, like a million wood-cutters had struck it.
All of the companions looked up, wide-eyed.
Sora, Rebecca, and Rinn took out their key-blades.
Sora couldnt ask about their keyblades because he was too focused on the creature, but in his mind, he thought, whats with all these key-wielders?!
A white cloaked figure appeared in front of all of them, startling the fighters.
"Which one of you is named...Sora?" The white figure said. He/she spotted the other keyblade wielders. "So theres three of you?"
"I'm Sora!" Sora called, recognizing the organization coat. But it was white, so he was confused.
"Ok. So wheres Maxi?" The organization person called.
"Uh...what are you talking about?" Goofy asked, taking out his shield.
"Right." The figure called, snapping his/her fingers, and heartless zoomed out of the earth, made out of rocks and clay. They were the same shape as Dusks.
"Whos Waxy?" Rinn called.
"Uh-oh." Donald quacked, as more earth-dusks came out.
"Let me say this again. Where is Maxi?" The figure said, and the adventurers knew he/she was losing its temper.
Rinn stepped out from the line of defenders. Her face was maybe confused, and she asked, "Crix?"
The figure seemed surprised, and the organization member took off the hood. The face was filled with a smile, and it was a girl. She had black eyes which matched her dark hair.
"Crix? Ha!" The girl crossed her arms. "So. I'm looking for the key-blade wielders and yet, I find myself standing with only some of them. So I ask you one more time. Wheres Maxi?"
"Were telling you that we don't know who you are talking about!!!" Rebecca said.
"Fine. Be that way." The figure said, pointing her finger at them. "Kill!!!" She raged.
Didnt we destroy all of the organization members?! Donald quacked in his mind.
The girl disappeared into darkness, and she left all of the defenders to fight the creatures.
All of the creatures jumped at them, and the fighters fought madly against the constant raid of them.
Sora fought with all of his strength, but just like the heartless at the grave yard, Donald and Goofy also werent so good.
"You really are weak, Moema." Rinn said glumly, hitting Sora in the head.
"Ow."
A heartless earth dusk swung around Sora, grabbing him, and flung him.
He flew, and he soared directly to a tree...closer...closer...
A man caught him, Sora guessed in his twenties, and he saw he had silver hair, blue eyes, and the beginning of a beard. He had small horns on his temples, and a few sharp claws. "You haven't seen a demon did you? Blue eyes, and hair. He has two ringy weapons? Name...uh...Neizon?"
Sora looked dumbly at the half demon, and a black creature came behind his back.
"No." Sora said.
"Oh." The strange man dropped him.
"Did any-" The man saw all the heartless. "Rebellion."
A large sword came flying out of no where, and it fought by itself in the air.
"Lucifer." The man said.
The dark creature on his back started throwing red blades at the creatures.It struck all of them, and the man took out a rose, and flung it. The blades detonated, detonating also the creatures.
He laughed. "Roses are blood, tulips are grey....say...what did you have for dinner today?" The man said, dancing around."Gilgamesh!"
He kicked and swung his legs and arms around, his greaves and gauntlets glowing.
All of the heartless were gone. Except the large creature.
All of the old defenders stared in awe at the fighter.
The large creature,hmm.Thats too long. I'll call it Bob. Bob raged, looking at all his allies-which were none anymore.
"Lucifer. One more time!!" He laughed. The creature happily gurgled, and more blades struck Bob, more and more, until Bob was only a red spiky creature.
The man took out a rose again, threw it, and said, "Fire in the hole!"
KABOOM!

The explosion rocketed everything, rocks bounced, the white figure, far off, seeing the entire scene from a branch, fell off, cursing.
Mickey turned around, curious what was happening.
A pale girl, walking on a trail, looked around, not knowing what just happened.
I could go on forever.
A black cloaked figure-the same one the organization member was talking too, growled, spotting the lights.
Lastly, a boy about age 19 in a cloak heard the explosion.

Ok!!!Thats it!More is coming!

Far away from the hide-out, a figure in a white cloak stood beside another figure which had a black coat.The black coated figure had horns through his hood, and wings on his back.
"Thats them. One of them trapped your precious Maxi." The black figure said.
"Fine. I'll just get them all." The white figure said. The figure snapped their fingers, and the ground rose up, forming a gigantic shuddering, glowing monster. It screamed, letting out a roar.
The people inside heard the roar, and ran outside.
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ok its not much but the continuation will come tomorrow because i have to go somewhere.srry for the delays everyone.if your not in the story yet, dont feel bad because you are coming up!

oh geez.now i have to work on the others......WWAAAA! :guns:
oh well. thats what i get when i do this type of posting.

Wahaahahaha!!Thats alot!I had to write alot to keep track.ok......here it comes!!!!

Rebecca jumped far across the winding maze of trees.She landed softly beside a door which she kicked open.
She placed the four uncauntious travelers down on the bed.
The king stood at the doorway, and moved aside so a girl, about the same age as Rebecca, walked in.
"This person will help you heal these travellers." Mickey said, walking towards the dazed Sora.
He placed something in Soras pocket, and left the hide-out.
"So.Hi nacho." The girl responded.
Rebecca inspected the girl. She had short brown hair, blue midnight eyes, and Rebecca definately heard from somewhere-that her style was skater. She had a necklace in the shape of a crescent moon.
"Uh....hi." Rebecca responded.
The girl snapped her fingers, and the four companions got up, slowly, inspecting their new location.
Rebecca spotted that the four travellers had no bruises at all.
"Hey! Where are we?!" Donald angrily quacked, jumping off the bed.
"Hmm.What happened?" Goofy said, getting off of Sora.
Sora got off the bed, and looked at the two girls. "Oh. Hi Rebecca. And you are?"
"I'm Corinne aquamarine clark. People call me rinn, Nya." The next person said.
Jimminy read his journal.
"It stops at the graveyard." Jimminy read.
"I saved you guys."Rebecca waved at them. "But then more hit you senseless."
"Oh. Then I guess we thank you." Goofy said. "Then you probably got us here because there was too many!"
"Thanks Rebecca. We owe you one." Sora said, waving at her.
Rebecca smiled, and waved back.
"Alright you popsicles.Did I just come all the way here to snap my lingers?" Rinn said, getting annoyed.
"Excuse me?"Donald asked, tapping his webbed feet.
"Don't worry about her." Rebecca said, tapping her feet.
"Alright then...."Rinn said, walking over to old, rusty cupboards. "Have you seen a person named Crix, or Melissa?"
All of them shook their heads.
"We are looking for Kairi and Riku." Sora said, putting his thumb back to his travellers.
"Riku???"Rinn said. "I'm coming with you, slinksies!" her eyes went all dreamy.
Donald whispered to Goofy, "Are you thinking what I'm thinking about what Rinns thinking about Riku thinking?"
Goofy didn't understand that, he just looked blankly at Donald.
"I don't know." Goofy said, looking at the stranger.
"What do you know about him?" Sora said, crossing his arms, listening intently hoping to find out about Riku.
"Well, hes dreamy, and good looking, and-" Rinn started.
"You know what...never mind. Where is he?"
Rinn looked more around the cup boards. "How am I supposed to know where Niku is?"
"Riku."
"Right Cora."
"Sora!"
"Right.......strangely."
"Donald."
"Right bizo."
"Goofy."
"Ok dingo."
"Rebecca."
"Ok." Rinn finaly said, searching through a crate. "Say-do you have any chocolate?"
Jiminy wrote more in his journal.

All of us find ourselves in an old room, which we find out that we were knocked out by the creatures, and Rebecca saved us. We also met a new girl called Rinn, which speaks jibberish.

Still, i think new ones are just as good.

The four companions walked up a narrow tunnel, with Jimminy writing as usual, Sora leading the way, with Goofy and Donald scared-a bit.
"Who could that girl be?" Sora asked himself.
"Shes Rebecca." Goofy chuckled. "Already forgetting her?"
Sora simply kicked a rock, which it skidded through the tunnel. "No. Its just that she came out of no where, asked us if we seen Nero, and left!"
The four companions were puzzled, but they all went into a conclusion that shes just looking for someone. Which that was a really dumb ending, it was the same as they first thought of it.
The narrow tunnel was filled with cobwebs, the floor dirt, but the walls and ceiling were stone. The only light which lit the tunnel was the light from the bright chamber below.
"I wonder how everyone is." Sora said, looking back to his friends.
The narrow tunnel ended, and the four found themselves in a large grave yard.
"Hmm.Do you remember this world before?" Donald asked.
They all shook their heads.
Hands slid up from the ground around them.
"Huh?" Sora said, looking around. The three fighters positioned themselves, back to back.
The hands were sickly black, and as the hands went from the ground, the three fighters saw the bodies of the creatures.
"Heartless?" Goofy yelped.
Sora swished out his key blade. Donald took out his staff, and Goofy his shield.
The creatures were grey and black, with blotches of red on their backs.The creatures form was hunched over, and bony.
"Hyah!" Sora yelled, jumping at the enemy. Donald screamed-or quacked, should I say. Sora landed his key blade-in the ground?! The creature he was fighting moved around him, kicking his back. Sora felt pain as he fell forward, then the creature moved around back, in front of him, and punched.
The creatures movement were fast, and unexpected. They weren't like Dusks, but slowly flipping, with ash flowing slowly out of their bodies.
Sora fell backward, flipping, taking the full force of the creature.
He fell on his stomach, dazed.
Donald tried to attack the creature he aimed for, but it was no use. All of them had trouble.
Donald casted a spell on the creature, but the strange thing flipped around him, grabbing, then punching him senselessly.
Goofy ran at the creature, and the thing tried hitting him, but Goofy, turned around, and blocked it with his weapon-err..shield. The creature anticipated the attack-err...block, and twirled around, grabbing Goofy's ears.
The three were getting along swell with the attackers, getting hit, and getting tired. Soon the three were on the ground helplessly.
Rebecca jumped in, slicing all of the creatures in one hit. The things halted, shrunk, and transformed into bones. The bones crumpled up into piles.
"Wha-?" Sora said, breathing hard, rubbing his chin from the punches. He spotted the keyblade.
"What? You know I'm better than you?" She laughed. "Just kidding."
Sora still stared at the keyblade she was holding. It disapeared.
She crossed her arms.
Donald looked at the rescuer. "Rebecca!"
"Huh?" Goofy looked at her.
Jimminy got up from the heap of dazed travellers, and brushed his tuxedo off. "Thanks for saving us!"
He wrote more in his journal.

After leaving from the chamber, we were attacked by lots of wierd creatures. The three couldn't handle them, but Rebecca jumped in to save them all, defeating the creatures.

"You have a key-bade too!" Sora cried, wavering, but fell down.
Sora could see Rebecca, then she widened her eyes. "LOOK-"
Sora got hit by something, and he closed his eyes, losing cauntiousness.

Rebecca saw the creatures raise up again, and knock the four companions out of day-lights.
She jumped at the creatures, slashing through them. Some got hit, but others dodged. More and more apeared, surrounding her. While the things circled her, she grabbed Jimminy, and put him in her pocket. She then placed Sora on her shoulder, then Goofy, then Donald.
Oh god they are heavy, she thought, looking at all the ambushers.
The creatures slid at her, drawing fangs, bearing teeth.
She ran at one side, faked left, then right, but flipped around, kicking one in the face. She ran away from the grave yard, and then through the forest.
Mickey greeted her behind a tree. She dropped the three companions onto the ground, and placed Jimminy on them.
"You better no over do it, Rebecca." Mickey said.
Rebecca looked down at him. "No sweat, King."
Mickey smiled, and nodded. "I think you should take care of them at your hide-out."
Rebecca asked the king, "Wheres Nero?"
Mickey thought. "Right now I should say hes at another world."
"Is he ok, then?" Rebecca said, grabbing the four on her again.
"I sure do hope so." Mickey said. He pulled up his hood, and walked away, saying their good byes.
Rebecca ran through the forest, and jumped onto branches, surveying the landscape.
I sure hope someone will help me find Nero, she thought, and lept through the air, gliding to each tree.

"Does anyone know where we are?"quacked Donald, looking around.
Goofy tapped his fingers on his lips."Hmm.Nope."
Sora thought about it."So, nobody remembers, then were in castle oblivion!"
"Hey!"
A voice called, and the four companions jumped up, scared a bit, and looked up.
A girl jumped down,with curly shoulder length hair that was the same colour of strawberries-was sora really seeing it, or just really hungry?
She wore boots, a skirt, a shirt with a jacket on top just like Soras. "Have you seen a guy named Nero?"
The four shook their heads as soon as she said 'seen'.
"Actualy, we just got here." Jimminy said.
She looked thoughtfully."Well then.Where you heading?"
"...We dont know where we are....so we don't know where we are heading." Sora said.
"Hmm. Strange." she responded, and looked around the room."Well right now your underneath an old cemetary."
"Alright." Sora said, turning to his old companions. "I guess we better leave this place then."
Jimminy wrote down something in his journal.

While we all found each other, we also found a girl who is looking for a guy named Nero. We apparently found out from her that we are underneath a cemetary.

"Well...where did you come from?" The girl said, looking at all the companions, inspecting them. The boy's kinda cute, she thought. The next one looks like a large duck, and the next one kinda looks like a dog. The other one looks like a respectable grass hopper writing in a journal.
"Uh..." the duck said, looking at all his companions."We don't know."
"Oh." The girl said. "My names Rebecca. What about yours?"
"I'm Sora."
"Donald Duck!"
"Goofy!"
"Jimminy Cricket."
Rebecca looked thoughtfully at them."Well, nice seeing yah."
She ran off through the doors, and she left the companions watching the stranger leave.
Jimminy wrote more in his journal.

The girls name is Rebecca. After our proper introductions, she left.

"Alright then.We better take a look around." Sora said, picking up Jimminy, and placing him on his shoulder. He walked through the doors that Rebecca left out of, with Donald and Goofy following behind, taking in the scenery.

wow thats alot.better than my description in just another kh story!im working on it, and its comin!

i definately dont think that there has been a poll like this...i think...
anyway, mine would be xaldin, because hes da man, and hes the hardest to beat in my opinion, even better then xemnas-which is quite confusing.hes annoying because i can never land a hit on him.