Also what he said. :rockdover:
Yep.Only the organization.Wait a second.How did Kairi get a nobody when she wasnt turned into a heartless?!!
glad to be of service.*bows*
i agree with this person, and yes, many ppl made up characters and stories to different things in this forum.no thank you for that name you called me, after my post.
Marluxia would be the final boss, and the plot would be alot different. Its true that sora would be a slave, and yes, i think so too that sora would be a slave. also that other girl-the blonde org member, whats her anme?marluxia also would have her with her, since they both plotted and planned for that. not a very organized organization, dont you think?
Its really good, just write down more actions so you can understand it more.
as you can see, i am very picky, and i apologize.id just like to add one change: his hair is brown, and its a shag, and hes irish. goddarnit im so picky.srry!
oh gosh that made my head hurt.
aha! aha!add me in!i made this guy up.add another person! uh. Name:Keath kingten He wears what sora wears, but the base colour is sandy like. I have clouds sword and spiky hair.mwhahaa. and he has a tattered cape.
mwhaha hmm.i must say the part when organizations come...flashbacks anyone? "Lets see.if the subject fails to respond, use agression to alliberate his true disposition.right.did they ever get the wrong guy for this one." As if! different name, same fate. oof!-xaldin getting beaten by belle.shame. i cannot feel sorrow.no matter what misery falls the word. The names axel.got it memorised? hmm.did i miss any?
eh...what?confusing,but very very very descriptive.
whoa Genius!pure genius!now me i want to add my character~~~~~hahahahahaa!more chapters srry im going berserk.k.calm down. Name: Keath Kingten (boy) Abilities:to control heartless and sand. Good/bad:hes good, but quiet, and strong. but the travelers dont believe that hes good. Anything else:crystal blue eyes, wears what sora wears with tattered yellow cape and the suit is:base colour:beige, with the rest is normal.spiky hair like cloud, and wears a black bandage over most of his face, leaving only one eye.He doesnt really care about what people say about him, and hes mostly quiet.age:14.wears a black necklace,mostly seen with a black teddy-bear heartless-(aww.cute.) and a fishing pole, tied to his back. where you want to apear: defeating heartless in front of inn base story:this guy was trained by yen sid, and guards places if paid.heartless are always attacking him, since he has the necklace of heartless....wow.his family was turned into heartless, and somehow he wasnt, since he found that necklace while he was fishing. weapon:long thick sword (cloud type) with red outlining and golden handle, with a black bandage around it.(like clouds) Extra character:Sometimes a heartless (think something up) out of 3 (his mother, father, or sister) will be on his shoulder. now go go go!!!!!
Ok this story is a thing that was made up over being based on the future and the kingdom hearts....so i hope you like it...this is my third story...why doesnt anyone like my stories?????? ================================================================= retrieving data.....-beeep +78#hj....beep...-beep 56 percent..........-beep Now flying off destiny islands-beeep now performing check...beep throttle-on...beeeeep auto pilot-on..beeep manual off....beeep check is complete...beeep good morning captains. "Good morning Tania." Riku said. Sora sat on the floor, eyes closed, holding a necklace, with a heart on it. Robyey came in (hes a robot) and steered to the front of the ship, The Hero 7000. "Ugh."Riku laughed."You sap. You'll see her again." Sora still sat on the floor, not moving. "-Are-you-ok-master-sora-?" Sora nodded his head, still holding the necklace. Riku sat down beside Robyey, and clicked on a few buttons. Sora clicked a button on the heart necklace, and it opened up, revealing a picture of kairi, and sora. Riku shook his head, and turned on the psg (gps) "Where would you like to go, master riku and sora?" "Take us to the base." Riku commanded, and walked to HWR (house wife robotic) "(-What would you like, dearies?-)" "Get me a coke, and sora a sea-salt-ice-cream." Riku said, patting Sora on the head. The alert sound turned on,and the ship shook, shaking sora out of his sadness, riku off the ground, Robyey off the seat, and HWR off her wheels. "WARNING-WARNING.ENEMY FIRE APPROACH.ASTEROID BELT APROACH.REPEAT.ENEMY FIRE AND ASTEROID BELT." Riku jumped up, jumped into a chair, and turned on manual control."Sora!Buckle up!" Sora stumbled up, and used no gravity on his suit to fly to his chair. "Alright so. Who do we have here?" Riku laughed, turning on auto fire. "Heartless Sk9's" Sora said. Boom! "I'm going manual." "Manual turned on." An asteroid flew past the ship. Three H Sk9's surrounded the ship, and fired at it. Sora took out a sharp shooter, and clicked it on the window. Clang! Sora fired three homing missles, and turned on auto watch. Boom!Boom!Boom! heavy loaded firing rockets now aproaching west.... A muffled scratchy voice spoke in the radio. "Captain Sora and Riku?" "You got it.Requesting back-up."Sora called in the mike. "Can't do that.Back'up is already fully helping Sergeant Heart."The voice said. "You can't help us."Riku siad, cursing."Can't you listen to the auto watch?Heavy loaded firing rockets aproaching us!" An asteroid rocketed the ship, knocking the help-ful robots off ships floor, making them fly across the rooms. "Riku?" "What, Sora?" A loud sound that screetched like a kettle became louder and louder, and Sora glanced at the radar screen. 20 arrow shaped objects were flying around, and apparently it showed they were moving around, meaning dodging asteroids. "Heavy loaded rockets turning to condition 8, homing device dodgers.20 scanned." "Oh God no." Riku whispered. "You said something about seeing Kairi again?"Sora responded, turning on shields. "Heck.Whats the plan?"Riku said, trying to stop himself from chocking the radio which didnt help. "Um.."Sora sighed, looking around the black galaxy filled with asteroids."Thats it!We'll just try to dodge to asteroids while they will smash into each other, or the asteroids!" "Thats suicide."Riku said dumbly."Whats your next plan, choosing what to get hit by?" ================================================================= Ok this isnt halo, but it still is futuristic like.....hope its good.i still havent got to the good part yet.anyone who gets to the forums, go to heartless resurection.
Xaldin!That guy can only be beaten by two keyblade wielders..which makes him special.He da coolest guy around!
This story was created because nobody read my other story-shadows revenge....darnit.nobody likes mine.so let me try again! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Prologue, part 1 Atlantica: King Triton was sitting at his throne, concerned about everything(which is what kings do) and thinking, and being bored. He leaned his head over on his hand thinking...being concerned...and bored. His subjects were talking, and his daughters and sons were also talking about many things. So now King Triton moves his thinking, concerning, and boredom to his sons and daughters. He thought about Ariel, how she always gets into trouble, which he never gets bored of getting her out of trouble. Something was missing.....Ariel. Angrily, he hoped that she was just somewhere else. He searched and searched, calling her name. He swam around the castle, and through it, hoping to find her, with sebastian and flounder following him, not saying a word to make his heart drop. Flounder was getting really scared, and Sebastian was holding his head in his claws. So now he decided to go away from the kingdom. They swam on, hoping to find her. Now, all of them were calling her name. Deep in the kings heart, he knew he only wanted her safety, not to make her feel sad about him ruining her dreams. The next series of events were quite horrible, and I'm guessing you all want to read on, with curiosity. They all swam through a valley, with no exits, only the entrance, and the other side. Jetsam swam behind them, with a large group of black creatures that looked like sharks, with red eyes and tentacles flowing around their backs.They had large teeth, which were jet-black. "You!"Boomed King Triton."Wheres my daughter?How come you are still alive!Didn't the key bearer destroy you!And the heartle-" "So many questions.."Jetsam croaked. Flotsam swam in front of them, with another large group of hearless. Sebastian and Flounder huddled behind the king, he bared his triton, furious. The triton started glowing, and he attacked wave after wave of heartless, a never ending flow of them that never ended. "Well, deary, I think that I could answer those questions....when I'm ruler of the sea!" Yelled a voice that could only belong to Ursula, which it did. "You!" Triton yelled."Didn't the keybearer defeat you!?Why do you always show up!?" "With this sweet-hearts help." she responded, and a figure in a black coat inside a shere-like shape floated down. "Wheres my daughter?" Triton yelled. "She's here." The figure yelled. A large ice block slammed straight down, knocking some heartless,and inside was a figure,which was Ariel. The trio gasped. The cloaked man took that distraction and swung out a large shield, slamming King Triton. His weapon fell from his hands, and the figure caught it, throwing it to Ursula. She aimed it at the ice block. "Give up your crown, and she'll be away from that prison." The black cloaked figure said."And, if you don't, you and your precious daughter will die, and it will be a no-win-win end for you." "Oh no mon!" Sebastian yelled when a heartless attacked him. "Help us!" Flounder cried when a heartless attacked him. King Triton was still on the floor."Ariel." he moaned. "Thats an answer."the cloaked man said. A heartless grabbed the crown of the king and placed it on Ursula. Ursula slammed the ice block, and Ariel floated, uncauntious, beside the king. Sebastian and Flounder were also placed there. "Nighty night!" Ursula cackled. The cloaked person sent out a ray of ice onto them. "You said-" King Triton started. "That she'll be free from that prison, but now I put you all into this one!" Key blade bearer,King Triton thought. Help us! The figure, when the companions were frozen, rose his arms, and blackness filled through him. Ariel, King Triton, Sebastion, and Flounder apeared before the heartless. "There, if that brat with the key comes, these will surely trick him." The figure said. ================================================== ============= Prologue, part 2 Land of Dragons: Mulan and Shang Li were talking in the courtyard, both together, laughing about things. It was the celebration of The New Year, and all of the guards had a break. In Captain Shang Li's mind he thought, I just hope she's thinking about me. But in Mulans mind she was thinking about Sora, Donald and Goofy.So she asked Shang if they would come. "Of course-"Shang Li started. but he was cut off by a black cloaked person. "Would you just stop flirting and get to the throne room?" The figure said. Shang Li was angry for the interruption, he almost had her. The couple looked around and spotted the person. The figure was in a black coat, and he stood on the rooftop. Mulan glared."Its that spy!" "A spy? As if!" The figure called, disapearing through darkness. "Somethings wrong!" Shang Li yelled, running away to the throne room. Mulan understood. The enemies had picked the perfect day to strike. A holiday, when everyones guard was down. She unsheathed her sword, and followed the captain through the halls. Dark creatures apeared. They wore broken, rusted armour, had two black blades which floated around there hands, and their bodies curved around, with sharp feet. Whats more, they had a long opening through there torso. The two soldiers ran fast to the throne room, and saw lots of guests and soldiers being attacked by them. They continued to apear, more and more, but the two agile souldiers slashed through them, making them disapear. At last the two got to the throne room. They saw the same person in the black coat, holding a purple weapon at the emperers neck-with Shan-Yu at the other side, with his sword at the emperers neck. "Now you'll bow to me!" He cackled. More creatures apeared in the throne room,with a raid of Huns running in, with the creatures shutting the door. "Give me the sword."The cloaked figure yelled. "No."The emperer said, not scared at all with the two weapons at him."The sword I gave you is the key for Sora and his friends to pass through this world." "Be quiet slave!"Shan yu yelled. Sora. Please!Come!Mulan thought. The figure did something with his weapon, it clicked, and the emperer fell down, with his eyes closed. "Emperer!"Mulan yelled. The black figure shot the two companions, which they both fell to the floor. "There. You are the emperer now." The figure said, grabbing Mulans sword.He threw it to Shan Yu. Three figures apeared before Shan Yu.It was Mulan, the captain, and the emperer. "This oughta stop these traitors." ================================================== ============== Prologue, part 3 Olympus Coliseum: Hercules swung around the large beast, which made the creature feel awfully dizzy, and herc slammed it against the wall. The crowd went wild. Hades apeared."Hello wonderboy." "What do you want now?" Herc yelled, punching Hades in the face, but he only missed since Hades was behind him. "Oh."That. Right."Hades responded, snapping his fingers. The beast flinched, and got up. The crowd wasnt sure what was happening. The large monster turned to ash. It had large red horns, with yellow eyes.It was muscular, with large fins jutting out of his arms. The ashes broke, creating five of the same monster.The monsters jumped, crashing through the stands. People screamed, and ran. Herc jumped into action attacking the creatures. "So.what are you going to do.Meg is over here, and you'll have to save her,first."Hades said,"Oh yes.She had a date with the underworld, but got lost in the process." "Shes in there."A cloaked man said. A hole with grey fire spurting out apeared. Hercules didn't know what to do. He saw all of the people yelling, screaming, running away. Sora. He thought. Help me! Hercules jumped in. The hole closed. "What a joke."The cloaked man said, as he heard Hercules yelling in pain."We tricked them all." The black coated figure raised his hands, and shadows filled his fingers, streaming out, filling the ground. Three figures apeared.Meg, Hercules, and Phil. "That oughta stop the light bearers-and lead them to failure."The black cloaked figure said. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 The letter of King Mickey. Dear Sora, Riku, and Kairi I hope this is not a problem.Something has turned up.I cannot say anymore since this might go into the wrong hands, but i will explain everything at the castle.Please travel to my castle immediately! signed, THE KING Sora smiled. Riku looked at him, puzzled. "Why are you smiling?" Sora looked at his two best friends. "Its a new adventure!" "Whats so great about that?"Kairi asked. "Cause this time, Im with my two best friends!"Sora said, putting his hand out. "You sap!"Riku said, putting his hand on Soras. Kairi finished it with her hand on top of theres. =============================================================== Chapter 1 part 2 Timeless river What could anyone explain?If you could, all you could say that this was only filled with blackness.Yes, we know this world is the Timeless river, thats black and white, but it was filled with heartless. Millions and millions of them. Mickey was walking on a trail, and he spotted the heatless.He ran in the other direction, shocked. Pete was piloting his steamboat, and he too,spotted the heartless. "What do you punks want? Scram!"He yelled,putting his black furry fists into fighting position. The creatures jumped onto his steamboat, and the only thing you could see was Pete flying off into the grey water. A black coated figure walked over to the cornerstone of light, and the sphere-like ball blackened, like a storm cloud inside it. The villain walked slowly through the black and white forest, and the trees transformed into strange tall logs, which had faces on them. The black coated figure raised his hands, and Mickey and Pete apearing before the mischief.
Hes holding his belt....actualy.
Its not that funny.Much of it i cant see.
yes!!!i totaly agree with you! Yes!that too!Then they would have something to argue about!
put in a spoiler on this sign somebody may have not got to anti form and wisdom form.any ways, i thought the same thing with anti and that shadow clone. no it was not his anti form, just a thing that riku made-that guy...riku is kinda blank with the darkness thing.
MMMMMMMMM.......I dont know.Maybe.....Pocahontas, and her world. That would be good.
