Alright, when ever a boss comes theres that sweet music that goes on, and you see the boss, whatever it is-are you ever afraid?
hi again im the guy. u took down my rep and maybe ill cut the wows! behavior, and tell you, that you should keep on writing, but make the story a little less inapropriate-(as in physical thingy, in the intro)
This story is the continuation of Kingdom hearts.hi all of you guys out there,successful and readers of stories...anyway, tell me if i should keep on writing.this is my first story....and I had to do it twice since it didn’t work before…and so here it goes.....post if i should continue. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Prologue, part 1 Atlantica: King Triton was sitting at his throne, concerend about everything(which is what kings do) and thinking, and being bored. He leaned his head over on his hand thinking...being concerned...and bored. His subjects were talking, and his daughters and sons were also talking about many things. So now King Triton moves his thinking, concerning, and boredom to his sons and daughters. He thought about Ariel, how she always gets into trouble, which he never gets bored of getting her out of trouble. Something was missing.Ariel. Angrily, he hoped that she was just somewhere else. He searched and searched, calling her name. He swam around the castle, and through it, hoping to find her, with sebastian and flounder following him, not saying a word to make his heart drop. So now he decided to go away from the kingdom. They swam on, hoping to find her. Now, all of them calling her name. Deep in the kings heart, he knew he only wanted her safety, not to make her feel sad about him ruining her dreams. The next series of events were quite horrible, and I'm guessing you all want to read on, with curiosity. They all swam through a valley, with no exits, only the entrance, and the other side. Jetsam swam behind them, with a large group of black creatures that looked like sharks, with red eyes and tentacles flowing around their backs.They had large teeth, which were jet-black. "You!"Boomed King Triton."Wheres my daughter?How come you are still alive!Didn't the key bearer destroy you!And the heartle-" "So many questions.."Jetsam croaked. Flotsam swam in front of them, with another large group of hearless. Sebastian and Flounder huddled behind the king, he bared his triton, furious. The triton started glowing, and he attacked wave after wave of heartless, a never ending flow of them that never ended. "Well, deary, I think that I could answer those questions....when I'm ruler of the sea!" Yelled a voice that could only belong to Ursula, which it did. "You!" Triton yelled."Didn't the keybearer defeat you!?Why do you always show up!?" "With this sweet-hearts help." she responded, and a figure in a black coat inside a shere-like shape floated down. "Wheres my daughter?" Triton yelled. "She's here." The figure yelled. A large ice block slammed straight down, knocking some heartless. Inside was a figure. Ariel. The trio gasped. The cloaked man took that distraction and swung out a large shield, slamming King Triton. His weapon fell from his hands, and the figure caught it, throwing it to Ursula. She aimed it at the ice block. "Give up your crown, and she'll be away from that prison." The black cloaked figure said.And, if you don't, you and your precious daughter will die, and it will be a no-win-win end for you. "Oh no mon!" Sebastian yelled when a heartless attacked him. "Help us!" Flounder cried when a heartless attacked him. King Triton was still on the floor."Ariel." he moaned. "Thats an answer."the cloaked man said. A heartless grabbed the crown of the king and placed it on Ursula. Ursula slammed the ice block, and Ariel floated, uncauntious, beside the king. Sebastian and Flounder were also placed there. "Nighty night!" Ursula cackled. The cloaked person send out a ray of ice onto them. "You said-" King Triton started. "That she'll be free from that prison. But now I put you all into this one!" Key blade bearer!King Triton thought. Help us! The figure, when the companions were frozen, rose his arms, and blackness filled through him. Ariel, King Triton, Sebastion, and flounder apeared before the heartless. "There. If that brat with the key comes, these will surely trick him." The figure said. =============================================================== Prologue, part 2 Land of Dragons: Mulan and Shang Li were talking in the courtyard, both together, laughing about things. It was the celebration of The New Year, and all of the guards had a break. In Captain Shang Li's mind he thought, I just hope she's thinking about me. But in Mulans mind she was thinking about Sora, Donald and Goofy.So she asked shang if they would come. "Of course-"Shang Li started. but he was cut off by a black cloaked person. "Would you just stop flirting and get to the throne room?" The figure said. The couple looked around and spotted the person. The figure was in a black coat, and he stood on the rooftop. Mulan glared."Its that spy!" "A spy? As if!" The figure called, disapearing through darkness. "Somethings wrong!" Shang Li yelled, running away to the throne room. Mulan understood. The enemies had picked the perfect day to strike. A holiday, when everyones guard was down. She unsheathed her sword, and followed the captain through the halls. Dark creatures apeared. They wore broken, rusted armour, had two black blades which floated around there hands, and their bodies curved around, with sharp feet. Whats more, they had a long opening through there torso. The two soldiers ran fast to the throne room, and saw lots of guests and soldiers being attacked by them. They continued to apear, more and more, but the two agile souldiers slashed through them, making them disapear. At last the two got to the throne room. They saw the same person in the black coat, holding a purple weapon at the emperers neck-with Shan-Yu at the other side, with his sword at the emperers neck. "Now you'll bow to me!" He cackled. More creatures apeared in the throne room,with a raid of Huns running in, with the creatures shutting the door. "Give me the sword."The cloaked figure yelled. "No."The emperer said, not scared at all with the two weapons at him."The sword I gave you is the key for Sora and his friends to pass through this world." "Be quiet slave!"Shan yu yelled. Sora. Please!Come!Mulan thought. The figure did something with his weapon, it clicked, and the emperer fell down, with his eyes closed. "Emperer!"Mulan yelled. The black figure shot the two companions, which they both fell to the floor. "There. You are the emperer now." The figure said, grabbing Mulans sword.He threw it to Shan Yu. Three figures apeared before Shan Yu.It was Mulan, the captain, and the emperer. "This oughta stop these traitors." ================================================================ Prologue, part 3 Olympus Coliseum: Hercules swung around the large beast, which made the creature feel awfully dizzy, and herc slammed it against the wall. The crowd went wild. Hades apeared."Hello wonderboy." "What do you want now?" Herc yelled, punching Hades in the face, but he only missed since Hades was behind him. "Oh."That. Right."Hades responded, snapping his fingers. The beast flinched, and got up. The crowd wasnt sure what was happening. The large monster turned to ash. It had large red horns, with yellow eyes.It was muscular, with large fins jutting out of his arms. The ashes broke, creating five of the same monster.The monsters jumped, crashing through the stands. People screamed, and ran. Herc jumped into action attacking the creatures. "So.what are you going to do.Meg is over here, and you'll have to save her,first."Hades said,"Oh yes.She had a date with the underworld, but got lost in the process." "Shes in there."A cloaked man said. A hole with grey fire spurting out apeared. Hercules didn't know what to do. He saw all of the people yelling, screaming, running away. Sora. He thought. Help me! Hercules jumped in. The hole closed. "What a joke."The cloaked man said, as he heard Hercules yelling in pain."We tricked them all." The black coated figure raised his hands, and shadows filled his fingers, streaming out, filling the ground. Three figures apeared.Meg, Hercules, and Phil. "That oughta stop the light bearers-and lead them to failure."The black cloaked figure said. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok, the continuation will be coming soon....tell me if you guys like it.Cya!
wow! Awesome!keep up the good work!finaly a story i like!i only read the beginning, but that was all to make me feel great about it. go on, ur great at this!
not good. the beginning was good, but as you went on, it became....awful. it was too related to kingdom hearts, like saying all of the actions and spells, and-it was awful.dont do that again.try non relating the video game, but the story of kingdom hearts.still dont understand me? just dont put in wierd-riku didnt teach me the aerial dodge.
haha! My god that is so funny!Darn you to go to ireland! more chhhhhaaaaapppptttttteeeerrrrsssss!!!!!grah!(kicks demyx back into gate)yeah!!got it memorised?(runs away from axel)
wha!? O.0 What are you doing!!!!!stop encouraging her!i think its awful!the intro disgusts me!!
Alright, so everybody loves video games. now, what if you-got to add something to kingdom hearts 2? it can be anything!plz be creative and descriptive,i would like to know everyones thoughts. I'll write mine down soon as i thought of it.
there has already been a poll like this.in fact, i made it.
ok,im having second thoughts.roxas.
ok....how do i cancel this....(i feel awful!ppl!i hope this is not a mistake!do not post until further notice!)
lol this is the most funniest thread i looked through. lots of heartless were just made that way, with yellow eyes.i hope that wasnt settled so i could do it.
This appears to be in the wrong section. Proceed reading if you like, and answer. Now everybody has dreams to be awesome and all, but what if you could be an organization member! No, dont choose someone already made, make up ur own! State your name, how you look like, how you fight sora, or how you got there, state your power,and your weapon.
if u want to put it in a way with both sides,here it is. he is a strong mouse with a keyblade.
Mine would be..... 1. Xodiminic 2.Xdmionic Its hard!!! 3.Domxionic lets put my name short. 4.Xmod 5.....ok,my name is bad for it! wait a sec-what about roxas? hmm. lets try my name pronouncing x as x.
You are right on the plot thing entirely. If riku was a girl, her name would be-i dont know.rika?with the first kh,kairi and rika (aka riku) would battle for that fruit with sora.so that riku battle would be gone. there would be lots of changes. it would be kairi,rika and sora battling xemnas in kh2,and there would be constant fighting and squabbling between rika and kairi (if rika had a crush on sora,too).Thats my response.
I was also thinking that too.but ur wrong.what about final form?then there should be another good fairy-not a witch, they are not witches.
comprende!
Ill straighten this.real good. are you guys really not paying attention to the story?? Most of them are just junk and rumors. people who add posts to get rep. Now, The only pairings are sora and kairi, roxas and namine(by liking one another) they say roxas and sora? this ones true, although its not liking each other but being connected by nobody/real guy. now the ones that switch the real person, aka sora and namine, are just connected also by the real ppl liking each other,and by their nobodies.now the ones with real ppl pairing with the organization-thats junk, (riku,axel-except the nobodies with roxas and axel) pairings with the organization with each other?they dont have hearts!!!!!! roxas, pence, they are only pals.same with hayner. straigtened enough?good.now dont act fraud matchmakers. srry if im being mean-u guys seem lost.
Its definately Jimminy. He said, Me,YOU GUYS riku and the king. He was specific on himself, riku, and mickey. But not you guys.which means, his fellow traveller, Jimminy.
